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Arceus/Arceus lv X

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Arceus 110 hp

:pbody: Color obsorb
Arceus is the same type as all the basic energy attached to Arceus.

:colorless:colorless:colorless Judgement 120
If Arceus has less than 3 different types of Energy attached to it, this attacks base damage is 70.

Weakness none
Resistance none
Retreat :colorless

Arceus Lv X 130

:pbody: Machine change
All basic energy change into rainbow energy (with out added or loss of damage) when a TM is attached to Arceus.

:ppowr: Body Off
If you have a special energy on Arceus, all bodies don't work on Arceus... Bodies will only work in this way if Arceus has a special condition.

CCCC God's Rage
Discard 2 energy from Arceus and Arceus does 90 damage to 1 of your oppoent's pokemon

Weakness :colorless x2
Resistance Same as defending pokemon (excluding :colorless)
Retreat :colorless

Many TMs and new special conditions are going to be added.

This is my first one and I didn't want to be to broken. Next idea of mine might be new Galactic pokemon.

I made the lv X version more like Blaze ex (The TMvTA one the best one you know what i mean)
 
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You need to change the wording a bit. And the Poke-Bodies overlap too much. Might want to fix that.
 
Arceus 110 hp Colorless

Poke-Body Color Absorb
Arceus is the same type as all basic energy attached to Arceus.

(C)(C)(C)Judgement 120-
If Arceus has less than 3 types of energy attached this attack's base damage is 70.

Weakness none
Resistance none
Retreat (C)

Arceus Lv X 130 HP Colorless

Poke-Body Machine Change
As long as a Technical Machine is attached to Arceus, all basic energy attached to your Pokemon in play provides every type of energy(but only provides one energy).

Poke-Body Body Off
As long as a Special Energy card is attached to Arceus, all other Poke-Bodies stop working. This Poke-Body stops working if Arceus is affected by a Special Condition.

(C)(C)(C)(C) God's Rage
Discard 2 Energy from Arceus and this attack does 150 damage to 1 of your opponent's Pokemon.

Weakness (C) x2
Resistance (G)(F)(D)(P)(R)(W)(M)(L)
Retreat (C)

This is better, probably not perfect as I just did it by memory. You should maybe remove the resistances on the Lv. X and change God's Rage to only do 80 or 100 damage though, this is too broken.
 
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I might try that; the orginal of this the lv x didn't have an attack, but i might make the attack 90 just to average it out and you need a type and must be a stage 1 or else like you said broken
 
For Judgement, if it has a minus sign, it must say "...does # damage minus # damage for...", so it would say:

[C][C][C] Judgement 120
If Arceus has less than 3 different types of Energy attached to it, this attacks base damage is 70

or

[C][C][C] Judgement 120-
If Arceus has less than 3 different types of Energy attached to it, this attack does 120 damage minus 60 damage.

I would recomend the first one, because the lower one is usually used for when it could subtract a variety of damage, not just a set amount.
 
Machine change only effects Arceus btw i thought i had that covered but i may not have :frown:

Back to back posts merged. The following information has been added:

Thanks I have problems wording cards correctly
 
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