Evanescence - Going Under Parody

Discussion in 'Pokemon Fan Fiction' started by HypnosProjectHQ, Mar 2, 2004.

  1. HypnosProjectHQ

    HypnosProjectHQ New Member

    Ok. I'm not competing with Yoshi, if thats what some of you think. I just like writing parodies at the same time because I get the idea then... Ok. Anyways, This parody is Evanescence's "Going Under" in a TCG format... kind of. It doesn't have any Pokemon terms in it, but it does have some TCG terms. Please comment on it.

    Original Song Lyrics: Available HERE

    Original Song: Can be heard HERE

    Here is... Evanescence Parody #1: Going Under
    By HypnosProjectHQ
    Subtitled as: Losing It

    Now I will tell you what I've learned from you
    50 thousand cards in all
    Sitting, recieving, and thinking for it
    And it still won't help me (I'm going under)
    Don't want your hand this time - I'll save myself
    Maybe I'll just win for once
    Not tormented daily defeated by you
    Just when I thought I'd reached the bottom
    I'm losing again

    I'm going under (Going under)
    Losing it (Losing it)
    I'm falling forever (Falling forever)
    I've got a break through
    I'm going under

    Planning and writing the deck list at night
    So I don't know what's right and what's wrong
    Always confusing the plans that I had
    So i can't trust myself anymore
    I'm losing again

    I'm going under (Going under)
    Losing it (Losing it)
    I'm falling forever (Falling forever)
    I've got a break through

    So go on and tell
    Tell it to me - I'm so far away
    I won't play broken
    I've got to play - I can't keep going under

    I'm losing again
    I'm going under (Going under)
    Losing it (Losing it)
    I'm falling forever (Falling forever)
    I've got a break through
    I'm going under

    Remember...

    ~*~EvAnEsCeNcE RoCkS~*~
     
  2. yoshi1001

    yoshi1001 New Member

    Hmmm....

    There doesn't seem to be much to set it apart from the orignal song. I think you need to change a few more lines to establish a base for your song.
     
  3. HypnosProjectHQ

    HypnosProjectHQ New Member

    Oh well. I could really find anything. The meaning was there in the original anyways and all I tried to do was add some gaming terms. Is it really bad or...? If so, I'm gonna throw it out... I don't want to use crap.

    Plus, Evanescence is my all time favorite group and I don't wanna tear the lyrics up too badly.
     
    Last edited: Mar 2, 2004
  4. yoshi1001

    yoshi1001 New Member

    It's not bad-it's just not very creative.
     
  5. HypnosProjectHQ

    HypnosProjectHQ New Member

    Yea.... Oh well. Time to trash another one of my parodies. (I don't get anything right...)
     
  6. Ice'Cold

    Ice'Cold Active Member

    Dude, nice try but you should be beaten for bringing shame to such a damned good song.
     
    Last edited: Mar 6, 2004
  7. HypnosProjectHQ

    HypnosProjectHQ New Member

    I know I should *smakes forehead into wall*.
    But as I said before, "Plus, Evanescence is my all time favorite group and I don't wanna tear the lyrics up too badly."
     
  8. yoshi1001

    yoshi1001 New Member

    You're gonna have to let that go at some point. Parody is albout of taking a song and turning it upside down.
     
  9. HypnosProjectHQ

    HypnosProjectHQ New Member

    I give up anyways... Yoshi, this is your thing. Make it happen. Someone, lock this thread... PLEASE?

    Thanks to whoever closes this... If anyone...
     
  10. Ice'Cold

    Ice'Cold Active Member

    I should beat you for doing this to a good song. I would lock this if I ever had the power.
     
  11. HypnosProjectHQ

    HypnosProjectHQ New Member

    Shoot me now, why don't ya?
     

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