Metagross LV.X and Salamence LV.X

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  1. darkrai_90

    darkrai_90 New Member

    Metagross LV.X 160 HP :metal:

    :pbody: Heavy Metal
    Each Metal energy attached to Metagross provides 2 Metal energy.

    :pbody: Mega Metal
    Each basic [M] Energy card attached to your [M] Pokemon now has the effect "If the Pokemon Metal Energy is attached to is damaged by an attack, reduce that damage by 10 (before applying weakness and ressistance.)You can't use more then 1 Heavy Metal Poke-Body each turn.

    :metal::metal::colorless:colorless Iron Gravity 70+
    This attack does 70 damage + 40 damage for each [C] in the defonding pokemons retreat cost.

    Weakness- :fire:x2
    Resistence-G-30
    Retreat- :colorless:colorless:colorless:colorless


    Salamence LV.X 160 HP :colorless

    :pbody: Intimidate
    As long as Salamence is your Active Pokemon, any damage done to Salamence is reduced by 20.

    :colorless:colorless:fire::fire: Ultimate Dragon Destroyer 150+
    Discard all energy attachedto Salamence. This attack does 150 damage + 10 damage for each damage counter in play.

    Weakness-:colorlessx2
    Resistence-:fighting:Fire -30
    Retreat- CCC
     
    Last edited: May 29, 2008
  2. PokePockets

    PokePockets New Member

    Metagross Lv.X is broken, it's body should probably only apply to Metal Energy

    Ultimate Dragon Destroyer on Salamence should probably discard all energy cards attached to it
     
  3. darkrai_90

    darkrai_90 New Member

    Changed
     
  4. poketo

    poketo New Member

    Whee Metanite with a lv x
    Salamance + Prinplup + alakazam= evil combo
     
  5. darkrai_90

    darkrai_90 New Member

    Muahaha.
     
  6. meditite rox

    meditite rox New Member

    its almost pointless that Dragon Destroyer does extra damage, becasue it destroys almost anything.
     
  7. poketo

    poketo New Member

    Then he should have Blaziken EX Side effect (fighting)
     
  8. darkrai_90

    darkrai_90 New Member

    ??
     
  9. poketo

    poketo New Member

    CG Blaziken ex when you do more damage than is needed it does the leftover damage to itself
     
  10. charmander rox

    charmander rox New Member

    A tad bit broken, doing about 110-150 for 4 Energy without discarding on Metagross.
     
  11. meditite rox

    meditite rox New Member

    reduce dragon destroyers damage and energy cost, and make it plus 10, not 20, to make the effect more important
     
  12. AnimeDDR110

    AnimeDDR110 New Member

    In Metagross X Poke-Body, it should say all Basic Metal Energy.
     
  13. darkrai_90

    darkrai_90 New Member

    It already discards all energy attached to itself. I LOVE Metagross, so I made it strong.
     
  14. AnimeDDR110

    AnimeDDR110 New Member

    It doesn't say about discarding energy in the attack.
     
  15. PokePockets

    PokePockets New Member

    Perhaps he was talking about the Salamence Lv.X
     
  16. darkrai_90

    darkrai_90 New Member

    True.
     
  17. darkrai_90

    darkrai_90 New Member

    Metagross KILLS 30% of the decks out there.
     
  18. Absoltrainer

    Absoltrainer Active Member

    Guess who's here?

    *cracks knuckles*


    hmmm well overall, I think they are WAY too over powered, both of them.



    Remember that Level X's useally add only 20 or 30 HP at Max, so this would mean Normal Metagross has 140 HP as it is. This needs to be reduced to 140, thus assuming that a normal metagross is running 110 or 120.

    name and type are fine.

    First of all, I see no reason to simply speed up the energy attachment on a Pokemon that does not really need it. Also since it ONLY affects Metagross, it serves little Level X like quality. For this, you have a few options, which I think are a bit better.

    The first being a metal version of Sceptile:

    :pbody: Heavy Metal
    Each basic [M] Energy card attached to your [M] Pokemon provides [M][M] Energy instead. You can't use more then 1 Heavy Metal Poke-Body each turn.

    Or go the Darkrai Level X way:

    :pbody: Heavy Metal
    Each basic [M] Energy card attached to your [M] Pokemon now has the effect "If the Pokemon Metal Energy is attached to is damaged by an attack, reduce that damage by 10 (before applying weakness and ressistance.)You can't use more then 1 Heavy Metal Poke-Body each turn.

    I can honestly say I like this attack. It does a lot of damage, but I think is does TOO much. Here is how I would word it.

    [M][M][C] Iron Gravity 70+
    This attack does 70 damage, plus 10 more for each [C] in the Defending Pokemon's Retreat Cost.

    All good except for ressistace. Although the HL metagross was ressistant to [P], all the other metagross follow the path of grass ressistance, and that is where I feel this should fall at.


    Remember that Level X's useally add only 20 or 30 HP at Max, so this would mean Normal Salamence has 140 HP as it is. This needs to be reduced to 140, thus assuming that a normal Salamence is running 110 or 120.

    name and type are fine.

    This is worded wrong.

    "As long as Salamence is your Active Pokemon, any damage done to Salamence is reduced by 20."

    ^ is the correct wording.

    Why do you need an over kill attack like that? I mean consider the current Salamence from SW, that rithg now does 100 at the cost of 2 energy, so what would I want to use this attack? You want the level X to compliment the pokemon it leveled up from. This is an EXTREMELY OverKill attack, that is completley pointless on Salamence.
    Also, colorless energy ALWAYS comes last, so it needs to say fire, fire, colorless, colorless.
    However, running with the theme you have here, this is what I suggest for the attack:

    [R][W][C] Power of Rage 50+
    This attack does 50 damage plus 10 more for each damage counter placed on your Pokemon.



    Salamence is always known to be ressistant to fire and fighting, so make it say:
    Ressistance: [F][R]
    Retreat needs to be 1 more [C]



    Well that's my opinion, it's not HOW you have to do it, but it's suggestions to make it better ala how most people format their cards, and making it so that theororetically someone would want to play it, if it was real.

    I hope I helped

    Good luck faking.
     
    Last edited: May 30, 2008
  19. charmander rox

    charmander rox New Member

    Absoltrainer wins yet another thread.

    You said Metagross in your Salamence explanation.
     
  20. Absoltrainer

    Absoltrainer Active Member

    whoops, well I CPed the same thing from the top
     

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