Pikachugirl1990's Pikachu Pokemon Card

Discussion in 'Create-A-Card' started by pikachugirl1990, Feb 9, 2008.

  1. pikachugirl1990

    pikachugirl1990 New Member

    Hey. I have an idea for a Pokemon TCG card. My idea is called Pikachugirl1990's Pikachu.

    The card should have a picture of Pikachu at the beach
    HP: 60
    Attacks:
    Thunderbolt 50 2 lighting enegry cards
    Thunder 90 4 lighting cards


    Weakness fighting
    Reastience steel
    Effects for ThunderBolt flip a coin if heads, the Pokemon is now paraylzed.
    Effects of Thuder: Discard all of the cards attached to Pikachugirl1990's Pikachu. If you do this the damage will be 100 instead of 90.
    Level 20
    Poke-body: Light Screen. If the defending Pokemon tries to attack Pikachugirl1990's Pikachu the damage will be reduced by 20 after applying weeakness and reseteince.

    Stage 1 evolves from Pikachugirl1990's Pichu

    Type Lighting
    Retreat Cost: 2 cards

    Post your thoughts about this card! :wink:

    Peace,
    pikachugirl1990 "Sara"
     
    Last edited: Feb 9, 2008
  2. meditite rox

    meditite rox New Member

    You need to add more than what you put. You put its name, HP, attacks, and damage. You forgot:
    Level
    Type
    Energy Requirements
    Stage
    Effects
    Weakness
    Resistance
    Retreat Cost


    Also, you may want to put the last line you put in your post your signature, because it seems really irrelevant.
     
  3. ensignmerlin

    ensignmerlin New Member

    Hi Pikachugirl, welcome to the CaC forums. Unlike a lot of other site's CaC sections we are a bit more strict on the grammar, but it's all good here.

    We like to use a certain text based format, many people have their own style but based on another's.

    Here is how I would post your card:
    [L] is an accepted symbol for Lightning energy. Others used commonly are:

    [M]=steel/metal
    [R]=fire
    [F]=fighting
    [C]=colorless
    [W]=water
    [D]=dark
    [X]=rainbow
    [G]=grass
     
  4. meditite rox

    meditite rox New Member

    You should always put the effect of the attack beneath the attack. Put the stuff from the card generally just how it would be on a real card. Usually like this:

    NAME LV.# HP## [TYPE]
    STAGE

    If any: [Poke-Body/Power] NAME OF BODY/POWER
    EFFECT

    [ENERGY COST] ATTACK NAME DAMAGE
    EFFECT

    W:[WEAKNESS] +#
    R:[RESISTANCE] -#
    RC:[RETREAT COST]

    For retreat cost, don't put "2 cards", put [C][C].

    Comments on actual card:

    Needs +/- for W/R
    Thunderbolt is broken, 50 for 2 is already broken, but 1/2 chance of Paralasis? BROKEN
    Thunder is also a bit overpowered, Stage 1 Pokemon are usually not so powerful, and have attacks that use less Energy. Thunder's effect is dramatically underpowered, discarding all Energy for just 10 more damage? BAD. It would add much more damage anyway, but the attack does not belong on a Stage 1 with 60 HP.

    Also, the grammer is poor, try looking at actual cards with similar effects to find out how the text works. To find the text, try PokePedia.net.
     
  5. charmander rox

    charmander rox New Member

    I would suggest making Pikachu a Basic, with a Baby Evolution Pichu. After all, 60HP is LOW for a Stage 1.
     

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