pokemon coffe shop

Discussion in 'Pokemon Fan Fiction' started by xatu828, Nov 16, 2003.

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  1. xatu828

    xatu828 New Member

    welcome to pokemon coffe shop.


    this is a comedy o.k.?
    here is the story.


    (chapter 1)

    (At the shop, Gary walks in)

    gary: I'd like a cup of joe with an extra large fry. okay ash?

    joe: ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!

    (joe runs into chirizard and gets burned)

    ash: okay, hey pikachu 1 cup of coffe and an extra large fry.

    pikachu: pika pika pi.

    ash; so gary, what's up?

    gary: team aqua robbed me.

    (treeco walks out of the kitchin with gary's coffe.)

    gary:thanks.

    ash: not good.

    may: that will be $9,876 please.

    gary: but i was robbed.

    joe: then you will work for us now.

    ash, gary, and may: cup of JOE!!!

    joe:ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!

    pikacu: PI-KA-CHUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU!!!

    JOE: ouch, i'm just an old fart in pokeball pajamas who doesn't know what he's talking about.

    _____________________________________________________________________

    that's all folks!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
     
    Last edited: Nov 23, 2003
  2. Sensei

    Sensei Team Compendium Emeritus Staff Member Trader Feedback Mod

    Transferring to the fan fic section...

    `Sensei
     
  3. xatu828

    xatu828 New Member

    anyone can add a new chapter if you want, just pm me.
     
  4. xatu828

    xatu828 New Member

    please add a new chapter. or pm me with an idea. ok?
     
  5. xatu828

    xatu828 New Member

    i will close this thread if there are no new chapters by 7:00 pm. and i will do anything to help later.
     
    Last edited: Nov 24, 2003
  6. Charizard19190

    Charizard19190 New Member

    It's a tad creepy, & i like it {it's ok} so, i'll try to add....
    Chapta 2

    Gary: I got robbed, people!
    Gary sobs.
    Ash: Ok ok! we know! But what wer ya robbed of?
    Gary: My underwear..
    Pikachu: CHIIIIIiiiiiiIIIIIiii......
    May: I like PokeBall p. j.'s....
    Ash: OH! YOU DON'T LIKE MINE?!
    May: noo......
    Ash: Ok
    PIkachu: Pika Pi?
    Ash:Oh well.
    May puts on PokeBall PJ's
    May: WHEEEE!
    Gary: i want more coffee!!!!
    Joe: ok ok.......
    Joe pours coffee on Gary
    Gary: mmmmm....soooo warm.......
    Ash: can we have doughnuts with that?
    Joe: sure
    Joe throws doughnuts to everyone in the Coffee Shop
    Everyone: MMMMMMMM........................Doooooouuuugghhhnnnnuuuuuutsss..
    _________________________________________________________
    Someone can take it from there
     
    Last edited: Nov 25, 2003
  7. Cooltrainer Aaron

    Cooltrainer Aaron New Member

    ok I didn't follow that chapter 2 at all, could you elaborate please?
     
  8. Charizard19190

    Charizard19190 New Member

    Heh, i didn't see anything in Chapter 1! :lol:

    *sigh* i'm bad, arn't i? :nonono: :nonono: :nonono: ....
     
  9. Cooltrainer Aaron

    Cooltrainer Aaron New Member

    I didn't say that. You just need to make more sense of what you've got. I'd stick to what actually exists in the Pokemon World. I don't know where you pulled out the Snail Plasma, and why did Gary keep saying meow?
     
  10. xatu828

    xatu828 New Member

    read chapter 1 and you will see what you did wrong.
     
  11. Cooltrainer Aaron

    Cooltrainer Aaron New Member

    Actually, I've never watched Sponge Bob in my life, I don't get Nickelodeon. Even so, why did you integrate that into a Pokemon story?
     
  12. xatu828

    xatu828 New Member

    i was not finished.

    (chapter 3)

    (Richy walks in.)

    ash: hey richy! what's up?

    Richy: hi ash! i would like a......

    (gary whispsers something.)

    Richy: cup of joe.

    joe: ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!

    gary: okay.

    :pokeball:, go!

    sparky and pikachu: pika pi.

    (brock and max walk in carrying groceries.)

    ash: it's about time you got back.

    (treeco and tailow approach Richy.)

    Richy: thank you.

    joe: ASH!!!

    Ash: yeah?

    joe: you forgot the free fries.

    (sparky and pikachu walk out with a bag and a bowl.)

    joe: never mind.

    may: that will be $10,000.00 please.

    Richy: okay.

    (richy hands over the money.)

    may: thank you and please come again.

    <THE END.>
    ________________________________________________________________

    that's all folks!
     
    Last edited: Nov 26, 2003
  13. Joe Monkey

    Joe Monkey New Member

    HAHAHAHahaha.... I don't get it, I'm just playing around. But are really ending it?
     
  14. xatu828

    xatu828 New Member

  15. xatu828

    xatu828 New Member

    )(5\5\04)
     

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