Raichu Line

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  1. PokePockets

    PokePockets New Member

    Pichu HP 50 L
    Basic


    Poke-Power:Baby Evolution
    Once during your turn (before you attack) You may put Pikachu from your hand onto Pichu (this counts as evolving Pichu) and remove all damage counters from Pichu

    L-Chupi Zap 10
    Search your deck for a L energy card and put it into your hand. Shuffle your deck afterwards.

    W-F+10
    R-M-10
    RC:1

    Pikachu HP 60 :lightning
    Basic

    Item:Light Ball
    If Pikachu is an evolved pokemon. All of Pikachu's attacks do an additional 10 damage to the defending pokemon

    :colorless-Sudden Strike 30
    Flip a coin, if tails, this attack does nothing

    :lightning:lightning-Thunder Jolt 40
    Pikachu does 20 damage to its self

    W-:fighting:+10
    R-:metal:-20
    RC::colorless

    Raichu HP 90 :lightning
    Stage 1-Evolves from Pikachu

    :lightning-Dazzle Blast 20
    The defending pokemon is now Confused

    :lightning:lightning:colorless-Guided Spark
    This attack does 60 damage to 1 of your opponent's pokemon. Raichu cannot use Guided Spark during your next turn.

    W-:fighting:+20
    R-:metal:-20
    RC::colorless

    Raichu Lv.X HP 110 :lightning
    Level-Up:put on your active Raichu

    Poke-Body:Empowered Drive
    Whenver Raichu does damage to a pokemon that has Resistance to :lightning type, that attack does an additional 30 damage

    LLC-Perfect Agility 70
    You may discard 2 :lightning Energy cards attached to Raichu. If you do, Prevent all effects of attacks, including damage, done to Raichu during your opponent's next turn.


    W-:fighting:x2
    R-:metal:-20
    RC:None
     
    Last edited: Jun 15, 2008
  2. charmander rox

    charmander rox New Member

    Nice, although Perfect agility can be a bit broken.
     
  3. Carrington388

    Carrington388 New Member

    Uh, where's Pichu?
     
  4. PokePockets

    PokePockets New Member

    ah, thought i was forgetting something, thank you Carrington.

    Charmander:Yeah i know, however i am trying with the discard thing to prevent the use of it the next turn, without specifically saying that you cant.
     
  5. stalkerex

    stalkerex New Member

    If the L energy discard had to be basic energy for Perfect agility, then that would be the case
     
  6. ShuckleLVX

    ShuckleLVX Active Member

    Pichu's attack is too strong for a baby imo.... 1 for 20 isnt something you see too often anyway, let alone on a baby.
     
  7. meditite rox

    meditite rox New Member

    Using things like Dragonite d and its free retreat could make it used every turn.
     
  8. charchar

    charchar New Member

    a tiny bit broken maybe no discarding and flip a coin? the perfect agility.
     
  9. PokePockets

    PokePockets New Member

    It is :lightning energy CARDS, so in this case you would have to discard basic :lightning energy

    Fixed

    True, True

    There is a reason it is Perfect Agility, you don't have to flip a coin.

    Perhaps another energy discard on the Raichu then?
     
  10. Abyss

    Abyss New Member

    make pichu hp 40
     
  11. meditite rox

    meditite rox New Member

    Even if it is CARDS, it doesn't have to be basic, but a DRE wouldn't cut it. It could be 2 Special Energy, each providing L.
     
  12. charchar

    charchar New Member

    i think 2 energies are okay to discard but its just that i never saw a card that provides 100% prevent damage,wait....oh, wait a minute, theres elctrive lvl.x then nvm. its pretty good.
     
  13. PokePockets

    PokePockets New Member

    True. But i guess the point i was trying to make was you couldnt discard scramble or DRE
     
  14. Absoltrainer

    Absoltrainer Active Member

    Ok, analyzing this group now =)



    These days, 30 HP does not last long, and with Pichu, I think you can boost it up to 40 if not 50 HP.
    Props for declaring that it is a basic.
    The Poke- Power is just SLIGHTLY, VERY SLIGHTLY off worded. The Baby Evolution power useally reads like this
    "Once during your turn (before you attack), you may put Pikachu from your hand onto Pichu (this counts as Evolving Pichu) and remove all damage counters from Pichu.

    As for the attack. Baby Pokemon often (not always) but often have an energyless attack or 1 energy attack and can do something like search for energy, or set up for their later evoltions. What you have is perfectly fine, just a bit ordinary if anything.

    Weakness and ressistance and retreat are all good.


    I say, ramp up the HP to 60, as per the Pikachu of the newer sets. I really like the video game referace in the Item. Add "too the defending Pokemon to that line" other wise, Pikachu is doing 30 damage to itself on the second attack.

    First attack is perfect, no improvment needed.
    Second attack is also good as well. As is Weak., Ressis. and retreat.




    This card looks fine, I think the HP can go up to 90 or 100, and Guided Spark, is balanced, although personally I would prefer that it discarded energy instead, but that does not compliment the level X as much, and 60 to anyone from a stage 1 is nice.

    Over all good.

    "Confused" needs to be capitalized.



    ahhh, this is truely the main attraction of the thread. Well let's see.

    The body, is creative and serves a purpose. Again props on declaring to evolve/ level up and declaring the stage.

    110 HP seems about right.

    The attack needs to use only 3 energy, [L][L][C]. Remember that this is technically a stage 2 or sometimes a stage 3 pokemon, and takes effort to get out. The other thing is you should put a "You may discard 2 [L] energy cards............." so that the discard is optional. Then you need to add "If you do prevent......."




    These are all well formatted, and balanced. I give you props.

    Good job.
     
  15. PokePockets

    PokePockets New Member

    Edited a bit. Glad that you liked them Absoltrainer
     

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