Yanmega Lv X

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  1. jeffrey123

    jeffrey123 New Member

    Yanmega Lv X.
    Hp; 150

    :ppowr: "Clear Vision"
    "once during your turn, before you attack, you may use this power. Choose a card from your opponent's hand without looking, and put it at the bottom of his or her deck. You may not use this power if Yanmega lv. X is affected by any special conditions."

    (0) Swarm; 50x. Search your deck for up to 3 [G] type Pokemon and place them on your bench. This attack does 50 times the number of Pokemon placed on the bench. Discard the top 3 cards of your opponents deck. You may only use Swarm once per game.

    :grass::colorless: Bug Buzz 60

    You may shuffle your hand into your deck and draw 4 card, if you do, your opponent shuffles their hand into their deck and draw 4 cards.

    Weak; :lightning: x2
    Resist; :fighting: -20
    Retreat; 0
     
    Last edited: Apr 12, 2011
  2. Porii Sames

    Porii Sames Active Member

    Swarm is WAY too confusing man...
     
  3. ShuckleLVX

    ShuckleLVX Active Member

    I think what he wants is:

    Search your deck for up to 3 [G] type Pokemon and place them on your bench. This attack does 50 times the number of Pokemon placed on the bench. Discard the top 3 cards of your opponents deck. You may only use Swarm once per game.

    You should read some real cards to get a better idea of how to word fakes, none of your text is in line with real cards.
     
  4. perhaps "clear vision" would be easier to understand if it said "once during your turn, before you attack, you may use this power. Choose a card from your opponent's hand without looking, and put it at the bottom of his or her deck. You may not use this power if Yanmega lv. X is affected by any special conditions."
     
  5. rayquaza2222

    rayquaza2222 New Member

    I think Swarm needs to have the energy cost of a :grass: energy.
     
  6. dark wobbuffet

    dark wobbuffet New Member

    I take it you mean shuffle all cards in you hand into your deck not just shuffling your hand. also 150 hp seems a little unfair, maybe 130 or 120 would be better.
     
  7. cabd

    cabd New Member

    Disclaimer: I'm assuming you intend us to judge this card for the actual meta-game currently

    This would obviously be paired with Yanmega Prime TM, and that card has 110 hp, so 130 or 140 is fair, 150 seems a bit much. I'd up the cost of that second attack, because it's a bit too cheap. Either that, or require a discard of one energy card if you choose the secondary effect.
     
  8. vaporeon

    vaporeon Moderator

    Reword the second attack.

    [G][C] Bug Buzz 60

    You may shuffle your hand into your deck and draw 4 card, if you do, your opponent shuffles their hand into their deck and draw 4 cards.
     
  9. ArceusRules

    ArceusRules New Member

    Pokémon cards have never said LV. X in the name. And the wording is wrong.

    This Power can't be used if Yanmega is affected by a Special Condition.
     
  10. OllieK

    OllieK New Member

    I don't know why, but I can only imagine yanmega having 130/140HP
     

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