powr: Auto Poison
when you play Toxicroak from your hand to evolve your active Toxicroak, the defending pokemon is now poisioned. Put 10 damage times the nuber of croagunk you have in play to the defending pokemon between turns.
Hmm, a not really broken, but too complicated and worded wrong as per Pokemon card grammer. Lv. Xs do not evolve from the pokemon before it. I would also make it a Poke -Body. Here is how I would re-word it:
body:
Toxic Presence
If Toxicroak is your active Pokemon, and the defending Pokemon is knocked out between turns, you may draw 2 prizes instead of 1.
Double posioning (NO ENERGY) The defending pokemon is now poisned, if the pokemon is knocked out by poisoning, take 2 prize cards.
First of all, specify that it is "energyless before the name. It looks better. Next, you mispelled "Poison" (remember to capitalize it). Since I took the effect of this attack and put it in the Poke-Body, let's take the old Poke- Power, and put it into the attack.
(0) Double Posion
The defending Pokemon is now Poision. Put 2 Damage Counters instead of 1 on the defending Pokemon, between turns.
Poison Jab. 50
sychic:
sychic:
the defending pokemon is now Poisoned, flip a coin, if heads put 2 damage counters on the defending pokemon between turns.
Ok, you do not need more then one attack that poisons the defending Pokemon, so lose that line. If you want to keep with the "Posion" theme, then I suggest a COMPLETE revamp of the card.
[P][P][C] Posion Jab
50
If the defending Pokemon is Posioned, this attack's base damage is 100, and the defending Pokemon is now confused.
Weakness:
sychic:
Resistance: N/A
HP: 110
Ok a few things here.
First, HP should be at the top along with type, and name.
You do not have a retreat cost listed, or the Lv. X rule.
Current Weaknesss is good, but it needs to say "X2" after it to signify "times 2"
Instead of N/A, just put "none"
Weakness: [P]x2
Ressistance: none
Retreat: [C][C]
Remember that as a Lv X, it is suppose to have something that makes it worth used (in this case, the Poke Body) or the attack too.
This is how the final one would look like:
Toxicroak Lv. X
[P]
HP: 110
Put on to Toxicroak
body:
: Toxic Presence
If Toxicroak is your active Pokemon, and the defending Pokemon is knocked out between turns, you may draw 2 prizes instead of 1.
(0) Double Posion
The defending Pokemon is now Poision. Put 2 Damage Counters instead of 1 on the defending Pokemon, between turns.
[P][P][C] Posion Jab
50
If the defending Pokemon is Posioned, this attack's base damage is 100, and the defending Pokemon is now confused.
Weakness: [P]x2
Ressistance: none
Retreat: [C][C]
[Lv. X rule]