a pokemon called mewtwentytwo

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  1. me-is-human

    me-is-human New Member

    Mewtwentytwo lvl.100 200 hp

    Mewtwentytwo is all types&looks like all pokemon combind


    3:fire:flameblast- 90
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    2:fire: 2:grass: 2:water: 2:fighting: 2:lightning 2:psychic: 2:dark: 2:metal: deflect for 5 of the oponents turns all attacks are done on the defending pokemon(benching pokemon does not end this attack)
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    weakness:
    resistance:fire grass water fighting lightning psychic colorless dark metal
    retreat cost:6:colorless
    copywrighted
     
    Last edited: Apr 4, 2008
  2. Lakak

    Lakak New Member

    This is no different from your other topic, you just took out the font. It was closed for a reason, please come back when you have learned to CaC (and use punctuation....)

    If you want to know what you're doing wrong, just look at the 2nd attack, and ask your self "why?" Why is it there? Put in something better.
     
  3. SD PokeMom

    SD PokeMom Mod Supervisor Staff Member

    me-is-human: you don't have the right to 'ban' anyone from 'your' threads. if you post to the board, anyone who wishes to and who follows the board rules is allowed to post in reply.

    if all you want are posts about how awesome your cards are, if you can't take constructive criticism of your card's wording/grammar/structure, perhaps you should re-think posting them here.

    i am editing the 'ban' out of your OP. do NOT edit it back in; if you do so i will lock or delete your thread. if you have a problem with something another member has posted, REPORT the post via the report (triangle w/exclamation point) button under their name. moderators will get the report and see if there is any cause for an infraction...but i will make it very clear now that simply reporting a post does NOT mean that there will automatically be any consequences to the poster. that decision is up to the moderator(s).

    as i said before in your other threads: constructive criticism ONLY. continued bashing of members will result in infraction points and/or temporary bans for ALL parties involved.

    'mom
     
    Last edited: Mar 31, 2008
  4. PokePop

    PokePop Administrator

    And the flip side of that, me-is-human, is that while those bashing you are getting in trouble, you should listen to those that gave you directions on how to do this correctly. They are trying to help you.
    If you don't listen to the experts, then pretty soon no one will comment in your threads at all.
     
  5. charmander rox

    charmander rox New Member

    Analyzing time!

    1. What type is it?
    2. Why specify Flameblast out of all attacks? It has too much damage for a basic.
    3. Switch Out... discard all Energy, then switch? Sounds like retreating to me.
    4. I have no clue how 16 Energy will fit in an attack cost, or how Deflect would even need those Energy.
    5. Deflect should be worded like this:
    Until the end of your opponent's fifth turn after using this attack, all damage done by either player's Pokemon is done to the Defending Pokemon instead of its intended target. (Benching any Pokemon does not end this effect).
    I would actually suggest taking out the five turns, and just make it until the end of your next turn.
    6. How much is reduced from the resistance?
    7. This card seems like it deserves to be a Pokemon-ex instead.

    :thumb:
     
  6. me-is-human

    me-is-human New Member

    edited verson1.0

    Mewtwentytwo lvl.94 130 hp:psychic:
    looks like shiney mew

    :psychic::water:brain freeze 20
    flip a coin, if heads, the defending pokemon is now paralyzed, if tails, mewtwentytwo is now confused
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    2:psychic:1:colorlessHP-check
    count all of your pokemons remaining HP, then count your opponents pokemons remaining HP, this attack does 10 damage to the defending pokemon for each 30 you get to, then, put 4 damage counters on mewtwentytwo
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    weakness::psychic:+30
    resistance:none
    retreat cost:3:colorless
    my friend helped edit this
     
    Last edited: Apr 4, 2008
  7. Absoltrainer

    Absoltrainer Active Member

    All you did is make the same card again, if you are goign to edit it then do it on the first post. Do not spam post the same card.

    You did not even listen to the suggestions to the first one, did you?



    I will give you the same advice as before.
    This time i will got step by step and my responses and comments are in bold.




    Now here is a much better format of your card.


    Mewtwentytwo
    Lv.100
    [P] (psychic)
    HP 110


    Poke-Body - POWER MAD - If Mewtwentytwo is knocked out by damage from your opponent's Pokemon, your opponent draw 2 prize cards instead of 1.

    [C] Combined Power
    Choose an attack from any Pokemon in play (yours or your opponent's). Mewtwentytwo preforms that attack. That attack does nothing if Mewtwentytwo does not have the energy required to use the attack or is unable to fulfill the requirements of the attack.

    [P][P] Deflect

    Until the end of your next turn, any damage done to Mewtwentytwo is reduced by half (rounded up to the nearest 10) and the remaining damage is done to the defending Pokemon. Also if you attack during your next turn, you may attack a Pokemon on your oppoent's bench instead of his or her active Pokemon. (ignore weakness ressistance for bench Pokemon)

    Weakness : [P] +30
    Ressitance: none
    Retreat : [C][C]

    Even that is still broken, but at least it is formatted much better and is much more balanced out.
     
    Last edited: Apr 4, 2008
  8. me-is-human

    me-is-human New Member

    actually it would be lvl. X
     
  9. Absoltrainer

    Absoltrainer Active Member

    Ok, good to see that you at least made the post I quoted a new card instead of the same one again. However, there are still massive spelling an grammer errors and the attack is way too complicated.

    Tone it down to

    [P][P][P][C] HP CHECK 10+
    Count the number of damage counters on all Pokemon in play. This attack does 20 damage plus 10 more for each damage counter.

    Also the HP is still WAY to high.
     
  10. meisadude

    meisadude New Member

    hay, be nice, he is only a beginner, and besides, its a lot better than his 1st one
     
  11. charmander rox

    charmander rox New Member

    Please, don't mess around with text sizes. It just annoys people.
     
  12. me-is-human

    me-is-human New Member

    but it is fun
     
    Last edited: Apr 12, 2008
  13. charmander rox

    charmander rox New Member

    Alright, Brain Freeze is patheticly underpowered, and HP check is broken. If your opponent has three of the same Pokemon in play , and none of them have any damage counters, then HP check will automatically kill any of them.
     
  14. meisadude

    meisadude New Member

    me-is-human chose the sizes and color, so you can't really blame me.

    I DID NOT SET THE SIZES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
     
  15. me-is-human

    me-is-human New Member

    yes you did
     
  16. Absoltrainer

    Absoltrainer Active Member

    It does not matter who did, It does nto stop you from changing them.
     
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