A story about nine Eevees and a Trainer called Eevee! =0 Chapter TEN OMG Posted!!!!!

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  1. KAZUTO!!!

    KAZUTO!!! New Member

    Prologue - The Nine Eevees

    Well, the first nine Pokemon were, as the title says, nine Eevees. So, the first one, or the original Pokemon, just... existed. We do not know how it was created, only that it was there, in open space, with nothing to do.

    Now, it got bored, oh, maybe after a week of life. There was nothing to do, and there was no one to play with. So, he collected up all the Energy around him, and... Evolved to a Pokemon called Arceus. Well, Evolving didn't help much, and after a day or two, he got bored AGAIN! This time, he created 8 other Pokemon. Guess what they were. You got it, Eevee, Eevee, Eevee, Eevee, Eevee, Eevee, Eevee, and Eevee.

    Finally, Arceus had something to do! Unfortunatly for Arceus, he was too big for all the little Eevees, so he made 7 of them Evolve. Now, there were Arceus, Eevee, Espeon, Umbreon, Jolteon, Vaporeon, Flareon, Leafeon, and Glaceon. They all played together, in open space!

    Now, you may be wondering why they could breath. Well, they had the power of Arceus with them, and as long as Arceus remained with them, they could breath!

    Well, little Eevee was floating higher then the rest, and Arceus lower. So, Arceus created MILLIONS of little planets, and one in paricular, called Earth, where they would live. They all landed on Earth, and now they had a home!

    Now, Arceus created the following Pokemon, off a dare made by Glaceon. Mew, Lugia, Ho-Oh, Celebi, Entei, Raikou, Suicune, Regice, Regirock, Registeel, Rayquaza, Groudon, Kyogre, Latias, Latios, Deoxys, Jirachi, Giratina, Dialga, Palkia, Shaymin, Darkrai, Azelf, Mesprit, Uxie, and Regigigas.

    Now Eevee was getting bored! So, it asked Arceus if Arceus could create more Pokemon, it's size. So, Arceus created them... and more! He created all the Pokemon in the world! Except for 5 - Castform, Porygon, Porygon2, PorygonZ, and what was to be the only Pokemon to even try to usurp Arceus's power, Mewtwo.

    So, that's the story about the nine Eevees, the first Pokemon. But, WAIT! The title of this thread mantions something about a Trainer called Eevee! Well, in Chapter 1, we can all meet Eevee - and his first Pokemon, Eevee!

    Last edited: Oct 17, 2008
  2. Flygon999

    Flygon999 New Member

    Awsome!!! Really cool....and funny somewhat.
  3. KAZUTO!!!

    KAZUTO!!! New Member

    Lol, thanks.

    Chapter 1 will be posted soon!
  4. Flygon999

    Flygon999 New Member

    Great. I'm really interested in the next chapter. Good job Arceus999!!!! :thumb:
  5. KAZUTO!!!

    KAZUTO!!! New Member

    Thanks. Chapter 1 will be posted tomorrow.
  6. Xenoz Blaid

    Xenoz Blaid New Member

    Lemme guess..... someone likes Eevee?
  7. KAZUTO!!!

    KAZUTO!!! New Member

    No... you're wrong...

    I made up the idea about starting Team Candy-Eating Eevees with Flygon999.
    In my sig, it says EEVEE WILL RULE THE WORLD!
    I'm running Eeveelutions.
    Eevee is my avatar.
    I wrote a story about Eevee.



    Chapter 1 - Eevee & Eevee

    Eevee, aged 16, was walking off to 'Palet Town' to get his first Pokemon! His mother had FINALLY convinced him they existed, because Pokemon never came into a city, and he was not aloud to leave the city, Viridian City.

    Well, Eevee now saw his very first Pokemon! He didn't know what it was, but... it followed him!

    "Shoo!" Eevee told the furry little thing, that had a long, bushy tail.

    The creature continued to follow.

    "I said 'shoo!' Eevee shouted at it.

    Eevee decided to ignore it. He continued walking to Palet Town, and when he got their, the creature was still following him!

    "Ah, my newest appren- er, the newest Trainer! Welcome to Palet Town! My name is Professor Oak, and I'm in charge of giving you your first Pokemon! We- What the-? Eevee?!?" An old man said.

    "Yeah, what about me?" Eevee asked Oak.

    "No, not you, kid, the Pokemon following you!" Oak cried.

    "What, this? You can have it, I don't want it."

    "No, no, young boy, you must have it, fore you two, Eevee and Eevee, are destined for each other! Now, I'm not giving you you're first Pokemon, you already got, so shoo!"

    "But... hold on, how did you know my name?"

    "Ah, I have my ways."

    "Tell me, or I won't leave."

    "Well, when I said 'Eevee,' you said 'what about me?' Which led me to the obvious conclusion that your name was Eevee! And I was right, wasn't I?"

    "Yes..." Eevee sighed, then turned, picked up Eevee, and walked away from Oak.

    A new adventure has begun, and the amazing thing is, is that this Eevee was the first Eevee, one of the eight sons of Arceus!
  8. Flygon999

    Flygon999 New Member

    Lol. An Eevee who has Eevee. When will you have Chapter #2 up?
  9. Xenoz Blaid

    Xenoz Blaid New Member

    Hahahaha! Very funny :lol:
  10. KAZUTO!!!

    KAZUTO!!! New Member

    Chapter 2 will probally be up some time tomorrow, possibly the next day.

  11. meditite rox

    meditite rox New Member

    Castform is also a man-made Pokemon.

    Good story.
  12. KAZUTO!!!

    KAZUTO!!! New Member

    Oh yeah, Castform. Okay, well, let's just say... um... that... Arceus gave man the ingredients for it! Lol. I'll edit.

  13. charmander rox

    charmander rox New Member

    Man, I knew you were in an Eevee phase!

    This is funny, and has a very lighthearted tone. Sort of random, too...
  14. meditite rox

    meditite rox New Member

    "Ah, I have my ways"
  15. KAZUTO!!!

    KAZUTO!!! New Member

    Thanks, everyone! Chapter 2, as I said, will probally be posted tomorrow.
  16. KAZUTO!!!

    KAZUTO!!! New Member

    Chapter 2 - Eevee meets Brock

    "So, now what am I supposed to do?" Eevee thought out loud, "I've got my Pokemon, am I supposed to stand here and do nothing?"

    "No, in fact, you aren't," someone who was just walking out of Palet Town said, "Noob." He added.

    Eevee turned around, and saw some kid, around his age, standing there with a smirk on his face. "Then what are you supposed to do?" Eevee asked.

    "You're supposed to go on to Pewter City, north of Viridian. There, you'll have to verse the first Gym Leader, Brock. Brock uses Rock-types alot."

    "Riiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiight. Can, um, you tell me what exactly, a Gym Leader and a Rock type is?"

    The boy snorted. "A Gym Leader is someone who's really good. They are in a Gym. They'll give you a badge if you beat them. Rock type Pokemon are a type of Pokemon. You're, um, Pokemon there is a Normal type, right?" He pointed at Eevee.

    "No, it's an Eevee-type." Eevee said, smiling that he knew more then this know-it-all boy.

    "There's no such thing as an Eevee-type. There's Fire, Grass, Water, Normal, Dragon, Rock, Steel, Ground, Fighting, Dark, Flying, Electric, Psychic, Ice, Bug, and Poison. Though apparently, we shouldn't know about Dark or Metal, but we Kantans figured it out."

    "I see. But Oak said it was Eevee."

    "That's the Pokemon, noob. Wow, I knew you were stupid, but not that stupid. Anyway, I'm guessing it is the Normal type. If so, you have a negative matchup against Brock. Good luck to you, noob!" He said, then ran off north, to Pewter, probally.

    Eevee started out on his slow pace north, back home. I'll take a "short" brake at home before caontinuing, he thought. Note to reader: By the word "short," he actually meant he would take a looooooong brake.

    However, when he got home, encountering no Pokmeon, except for one, little yellow rat thingy with red cheeks (he kicked it and ran off), thankfully, his mom was so happy that he got his first Pokemon, that she gave him 5 things that she called "Pokeballs." Eevee took them, ate supper, and stayed for the night. When he woke up, he ate breafast, then his mom said...

    "I'll expect you to be off today, huh?"


    "On your journey. Remember?"

    The memories came flooding back to Eevee. "Oh, right... yeah, okay, I guess."

    Eevee (Pokemon) came down, and started hunting for leftovers of Eevee's (human) breafast. Finding none, it wined and looked at Eevee (human), as if asking for food.

    Eevee (human) gave Eevee (Pokemon) an apple, and when it was done, they left.

    When Eevee & Eevee left the town, Eevee (human) took out the Pokeballs.

    "Wierd." He said, and threw them away.

    Continuing on his "journey," Eevee eventually arived at Pewter. He had encountered 5 Trainers on his way. They all wanted to battle, but Eevee just ran away. So, with 5 Trainers running after him, crying out for a battle, and that he "didn't respect the Trainer code" (whatever that was), Eevee went into the Gym. Striding down the middle of the Gym, to his annoyance, he found that there were MORE Trainers in here, ready to ambush him. They couldn't all be Brock, so th obvious conclusion was that the guy at the end was Brock. Running past the Trainers blocking his way, he reached Brock.

    "Where's my Badge?" He demanded.

    "Um... you have to battle me to have it." Brock said.

    "Yeah, well, I don't care. I want my Badge."

    "Well, I'm sorry friend, but you can't just have it without battling me first."

    "Look. I have a mob of seven Trainers running at my back, 2 of them won't come, but the others are coming soon. Either give me my Badge, or I'll punch you."

    "What? You need to beat me with Pokemon, not fists, to win the Badge."

    Eevee, annoyed now, punched Brock in his stomach, winding him, then grabbed the Badge case from Brock, and ran the long way around the Gym. As he pushed open the doors, he heard Brock shout...

    "Hey! Get him! He stole my Badges!"


    Sorry it took so long...
    Last edited: May 10, 2008
  17. charmander rox

    charmander rox New Member

    Wow, he really is a n00b. And he punched Brock in the stomach and stole the badges...
    and threw away his PokeBalls...
    and has plenty of trainers waiting to ambush him...
  18. KAZUTO!!!

    KAZUTO!!! New Member

    Lol. I know. He hasn't battled anyone yet, but he has around 10 Badges. o_O
  19. Xenoz Blaid

    Xenoz Blaid New Member

    That is insane lol!
  20. meditite rox

    meditite rox New Member

    Eevee is mad... just wait til' the police come and arrest him... he's got a great start so far.

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