Arceus/Arceus lv X

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  1. poketo

    poketo New Member

    Arceus 110 hp

    :pbody: Color obsorb
    Arceus is the same type as all the basic energy attached to Arceus.

    :colorless:colorless:colorless Judgement 120
    If Arceus has less than 3 different types of Energy attached to it, this attacks base damage is 70.

    Weakness none
    Resistance none
    Retreat :colorless

    Arceus Lv X 130

    :pbody: Machine change
    All basic energy change into rainbow energy (with out added or loss of damage) when a TM is attached to Arceus.

    :ppowr: Body Off
    If you have a special energy on Arceus, all bodies don't work on Arceus... Bodies will only work in this way if Arceus has a special condition.

    CCCC God's Rage
    Discard 2 energy from Arceus and Arceus does 90 damage to 1 of your oppoent's pokemon

    Weakness :colorless x2
    Resistance Same as defending pokemon (excluding :colorless)
    Retreat :colorless

    Many TMs and new special conditions are going to be added.

    This is my first one and I didn't want to be to broken. Next idea of mine might be new Galactic pokemon.

    I made the lv X version more like Blaze ex (The TMvTA one the best one you know what i mean)
     
    Last edited: Dec 12, 2007
  2. Lucario EX

    Lucario EX Moderator<br>Fanfic Contest Host

    You need to change the wording a bit. And the Poke-Bodies overlap too much. Might want to fix that.
     
  3. poketo

    poketo New Member

    Does that help I don't have an idea how to get it to the right reading.
     
  4. Lucario EX

    Lucario EX Moderator<br>Fanfic Contest Host

    Arceus 110 hp Colorless

    Poke-Body Color Absorb
    Arceus is the same type as all basic energy attached to Arceus.

    (C)(C)(C)Judgement 120-
    If Arceus has less than 3 types of energy attached this attack's base damage is 70.

    Weakness none
    Resistance none
    Retreat (C)

    Arceus Lv X 130 HP Colorless

    Poke-Body Machine Change
    As long as a Technical Machine is attached to Arceus, all basic energy attached to your Pokemon in play provides every type of energy(but only provides one energy).

    Poke-Body Body Off
    As long as a Special Energy card is attached to Arceus, all other Poke-Bodies stop working. This Poke-Body stops working if Arceus is affected by a Special Condition.

    (C)(C)(C)(C) God's Rage
    Discard 2 Energy from Arceus and this attack does 150 damage to 1 of your opponent's Pokemon.

    Weakness (C) x2
    Resistance (G)(F)(D)(P)(R)(W)(M)(L)
    Retreat (C)

    This is better, probably not perfect as I just did it by memory. You should maybe remove the resistances on the Lv. X and change God's Rage to only do 80 or 100 damage though, this is too broken.
     
    Last edited: Dec 12, 2007
  5. poketo

    poketo New Member

    I might try that; the orginal of this the lv x didn't have an attack, but i might make the attack 90 just to average it out and you need a type and must be a stage 1 or else like you said broken
     
  6. meditite rox

    meditite rox New Member

    For Judgement, if it has a minus sign, it must say "...does # damage minus # damage for...", so it would say:

    [C][C][C] Judgement 120
    If Arceus has less than 3 different types of Energy attached to it, this attacks base damage is 70

    or

    [C][C][C] Judgement 120-
    If Arceus has less than 3 different types of Energy attached to it, this attack does 120 damage minus 60 damage.

    I would recomend the first one, because the lower one is usually used for when it could subtract a variety of damage, not just a set amount.
     
  7. poketo

    poketo New Member

    Machine change only effects Arceus btw i thought i had that covered but i may not have :frown:

    Back to back posts merged. The following information has been added:

    Thanks I have problems wording cards correctly
     
    Last edited: Dec 12, 2007
  8. Gordon Siu

    Gordon Siu New Member

    hi everyone!! im new here so please lead me around this place, and besides, this place is AMASING!!!!!!! so i love you everyone!!

    Gordon Siu
     
  9. nuva267

    nuva267 New Member

    To Gorden Siu,

    LOVE!? You give me the creeps.Anyway,welcome to the PokeGym.
     

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