Pokémon TCG: Sword and Shield—Brilliant Stars

Battle for Existance - Chapter 2 Posted!

LegendaryLugia

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Hi people. I seriously mucked up my last story, so here's a more professional story that I will actually concentrate on :)eek: I know, me concentrating!). So far I've only got the prologue but I hope you like it!

Prologue​

‘What if it’s not ready yet?’

There was a wavering tone in the technician’s voice. The man was tall and thin and wore a dark trench coat and polished black shoes. His face was shrouded in shadow as the small dank laboratory the pair were working in had no light source in it, apart from the circular window where the pale, cold light of the moon shone upon the large machine the technician stood. The man had a kind of aura: if you were in the same room as him you felt stone cold and your heart filled with dread. Even in the daylight, he seemed to have shadow cast upon his face.

‘It is ready,’ the man said coldly. The technician got the feeling that the man was staring hard at him. He reluctantly crouched down and wriggled under the narrow gap underneath the machine.

The machine in its self was fairly big: about 2 by 10 metres and at least a metre and a half tall. It looked like a steel box with a large cage on top of it – its contents hidden by a thick curtain – and a control panel beside it. It was almost as if it was designed was made to be intimidating.

As the technician crawled underneath the machine, the shady man crossed his fingers. He really needed this to work. The technician wormed his way underneath the machine until he was about three-quarters of a metre in. He then shuddered, scrunched his eyes shut, and pulled a lever that was directly above him.

For a moment all seemed calm. There was a shrill noise that came from the machine and it shuddered into life. The technician sighed and slowly started to head out from underneath the machine, glad he wasn’t dead. The shady man smiled demonically and looked like he was about to laugh.

Suddenly, a red light appeared flashed on the control board. The man whipped his head around, the evil smile vanishing on his face. He cursed foully as multicoloured bolts of energy surged through the metal box. They had more fight in them than he had originally expected. He moaned softly as a shrill alarm echoed through the room.

The technician knew he was in trouble when he heard the alarms and saw the multicoloured energy charge through the machine. He started to rush out, panicking like he had never panicked before. As he rushed out from underneath the machine, the surges became more and more rapid, the colours more vibrant. He was nearly out, but the energy had started racing through the machine incredibly quickly and he couldn’t see anything for the vibrant, rushing colours. He crawled around blindly and finally poked his head out from underneath the machine. He had just started to heave himself out, when the coloured energy changed into bright, white, pulsing energy that coursed through the machine and hit the neck and body of the technician. He screamed agonisingly and his eyes flew backwards so only the whites showed. The white energy surged through his body, destroying his inner body. He screamed one last time and then slumped as the life finally left his body as the energy stopped flowing. The machine cracked slightly and white and purple smoke spiralled up from the split.

The man shouted out loud and cursed. When he had finished, he looked down at the technician. The technician’s body seemed undamaged from the outside, but the man knew he must have been in incredible pain before he died. It had happened before with different technicians. It had started to get annoying.

But he would get there, the machine would work. And when it did, they would be sorry.

He spat on the dead man’s face before spinning round and exiting the laboratory, his dark trench coat swishing behind him, one thought lingering in his twisted mind. The machine definitely wasn’t ready.
 
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Wow. Good.

But you need to space out paragraphs and indent.
 
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Thanks.

Sorry: I typed it out on word with indenting and stuff but when I posted it, it all went back to block text. Updating...
 
Huh, it's not indenting.

It's like you try to indent, but it fixes it for you. :p

oh well, looks beautiful now it's spaced.
 
Chapter 1

Here's Chapter 1.

Chapter 1 – The Attack of the Ninjas

Niles Beech sat on an aged tree stump in a lush green glade in Viridian Forest with a pad of paper on his knee and a sketching pencil in his hand. He was wearing a plain white T-shirt, ripped, faded jeans and on his feet was sturdy brown hiking boots with thick soles and laces. He also bore a murky green anorak that was splattered with mud. His fair, brown hair was ruffled by the wind and his eyes were that of a hardened explorer.

In front of him, two young Eevee pups were chasing each other round in circles, playing harmlessly. Behind them stood their mother and father, nuzzling each other. Their father was a Leafeon, but their mother was an Eevee like they were. From observation Niles knew that male Eevees and Eeveelutions had darker coats than the female. The young pups had very light brown coats, but Niles knew that within 5 years their coats would darken. You couldn’t tell the gender of an Eevee pup just from looking at it.

The Leafeon was tall and proud, his leaves swaying slightly in the wind, his sandy coat lying flat. The mother Eevee was fair brown in colour with clear blue eyes and thick fur. The Eevee pups were now rolling around on the soft grass, pawing at each other. Their green eyes twinkled in the bright morning sun. Niles assumed they were twins.

Niles was a pokémon naturalist. He studied the behaviour of pokémon and specialised in Seed pokémon – in other words, the Saur family. But unlike pokémon professors (Professor Oak, Professor Ivy, Professor Elm etc.) he studied pokémon by drawing them and watching them, rather than scientific testing. He was probably the most prolific pokémon naturalist in the whole of Kanto, but he tried not to boast about it. He had actually taken a professor’s course in pokémon so he was, in fact, Professor Beech.

He only had two pokémon – a Pidgeotto and an Ivysaur. When he was 10 he dreamed of being a pokémon trainer, beating Gym Leaders and the Elite Four and becoming the best pokémon trainer in the world. He was thrilled when he got a Bulbasaur as his first pokémon and even more so when he caught his first pokémon – a Pidgey. He trained up his Bulbasaur and Pidgey until both of them had evolved into their Stage 1 forms and challenged the Gym Leaders all the way up to Misty. Unfortunately, Misty proved too much for him and he lost his first battle by a swimming pool, defeated by a Gym Leader. He returned downhearted to his home and never raised hope of being a pokémon trainer ever again.

But gradually he got better and better at battling and got interested in studying pokémon, so when he was old enough, he took the professor course and became a pokémon professor at the mere age of 18 years and two months. He could have challenged the Gym Leaders and Elite again when he was younger, but pokémon professors were not allowed to battle them. Instead they had mini tournaments called “Professor Cups”, which Beech had won every time he had competed.

Both of his pokémon were at an incredibly high level. Ivysaur was at level 100 and Pidgeotto was at level 97. Ivysaur knew the moves Razor Leaf, Synthesis, Grass Knot and Leaf Storm. When he first became a professor, Niles tracked down Professor Oak (who had given him his Bulbasaur) and asked if his Bulbasaur had been bred. Professor Oak knew that his Bulbasaur had been bred with a Sunflora so Niles made his Ivysaur learn Leaf Storm which he otherwise wouldn’t have been able to learn. His Pidgeot knew Fly, Air Slash, Roost and Aerial Ace.

Niles sat up straighter and glanced down at his pad. He stared down at the picture he had drawn a while back when the morn was breaking – the two Eevee pups sleeping peacefully. Niles was also a very good artist.

He stretched and rose from the stump. He called for his Ivysaur using a special flute made of grass that he had taken out of his pocket. He blew on the small hole at the top of it and it made a beautiful, high-pitched nose. From a glade some way away his Ivysaur answered with a shrill cry of pain. Niles knew something was wrong. He hurriedly pulled out another flute made from feathers that were secured by twine. It was longer than the grass flute and when Niles blew into it, it made a low humming sound.

Far away, a Pidgeotto hovering swooping and diving above a mountain heard the flute. It flew quickly with all its speed to the origin of the sound and less than 30 seconds later, was standing by Niles’s side. Niles talked to it by making a few clicking noises with his tongue. Pidgeotto listened, then nodded and Niles climbed on its back. They flew high above the forest, for it is well known Pidgeotto have incredibly good eyesight. They spotted Ivysaur in a glade about half a mile from where Niles had been looking at the Eevee. Niles had had Ivysaur with him at first, but he went for a walk around the forest.

They nose-dived to the ground and pulled up just as the were about to hit the ground. Ivysaur was standing in the middle of the glade, looking utterly terrified. It glanced around in different directions, randomly lunging forward at the air.

Niles made several roaring-like noises but Ivysaur didn’t reply. Suddenly, a purple and black ball of what appeared to come from nowhere hit Ivysaur on the face. Ivysaur collapsed into a heap as several more Shadow Balls were hurled at him. Ivysaur managed to stand and was about to use Synthesis to restore his HP when a grey shimmer fell upon Ivysaur – a Heal Block.

‘Show yourself!’ Niles shouted angrily. He didn’t like his Ivysaur being badly hurt, and at the moment Ivysaur was bruised and clearly injured. Even as he looked, Ivysaur finally gave in and fainted, his eyes slumping shut.

The air in front of Ivysaur shimmered, and slowly 5 pokémon appeared, hovering in the air.

‘Shedinja,’ Niles muttered. ‘I didn’t know they could turn invisible.’ Thankfully Ivysaur’s eyes were closed because if they weren’t he would have lost his soul.

The pokémon looked like the exoskeletons of insects. They were, in fact, the re-animated shed Exoskeletons of Nincada that evolved into Ninjask. Above their heads 5 white halos shone brightly, even in the bright sunlight. The good news was, Shedinja could only be defeated by a move that was super effective to them, aka Pidgeotto’s Air Slash. The bad new was, if you look into the hole on Shedinja’s back, they stole your soul. Niles now knew why Ivysaur had succumbed to their attack: Grass moves weren’t super effective against Bug or Ghost types. Still, the Shedinja must be about level 100 to do so much damage to his Ivysaur.

Niles had to act fast. The Shedinja were starting to turn around. He made some quick clicking noises with his tongue and Pidgeotto’s wings started to glow. The Shedinja stopped turning, looking at Niles and Pidgeotto with what seemed to be uncertainty.

After about 3 seconds of its wings glowing, Pidgeotto unleashed a wave of white and blue energy with a sharp cry. It hit all five of the Shedinja and the Shedinja fell to the ground, their halos vanishing and the wave evaporated into mist. Pidgeotto had used Air Slash, its strongest move. Pidgeotto cawed triumphantly, then rushed forward with Niles to heal Ivysaur.

Niles produced a bottle of Moo-Moo Milk from his pocket and gently eased it down Ivysaur’s throat. Ivysaur’s eyes flickered open briefly then shut again. Niles found a diamond shaped stone in his pocket. He gently prised open the pink flower on Ivysaur’s back and placed the stone inside. He removed his hand carefully and let go of the petals and the flower snap shut to its original position. The flower glowed a gold colour and Ivysaur’s eyes snapped open. It stood up and shuddered. It looked affectionately at Niles and followed him out of the glade.

But just as they were exiting, a band of Ninjask appeared as if from nowhere: they were incredibly fast. They were angered by the defeat of the Shedinjas. Niles assumed they were the Shedinjas soul mates, since there were five. The Ninjask darted forward and used Quick Attack on Niles, Pidgeotto and Ivysaur. They were too fast for any of them, even Pidgeotto. With effort, Ivysaur raised its head, flinching as the Ninjask attacked his head. The plant on his back glowed and he tilted it towards the Ninjask. Pidgeotto flew high into the air and Niles lay flat on the ground as they realised what was going to happen.

Without any warning, leaves flew thick and fast out of the flower. All the leaves were an unnatural shining green colour and were razor sharp. The Ninjask were forced back and Knocked Out in less than ten seconds. When they were all down, Ivysaur barked a short command. The flurry of leaves hung in the air and changed into lush, glossy, deep green leaves. Then they fell to the ground, leaving the glade layered in thousands of leaves. Pidgeotto slowly descended from the sky and Niles stood up. Ivysaur stood there proudly, smiling, although it looked weak.

Niles cuddled Ivysaur and Pidgeotto and rubbed some scented oils into Ivysaur’s soft and firm hide as Leaf Storm was an incredibly powerful move and was hard for Ivysaur to use.

After the massage, Ivysaur felt much better. Pidgeotto looked at Niles and squawked a few times. Niles waved an airy hand at Pidgeotto. Pidgeotto nodded and darted like a bullet up into the air and vanished.

Niles smiled and exited the glade with Ivysaur behind him, leaving behind the 10 pokémon who had unfortunately messed with the best pokémon battler in the whole of Kanto.
 
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Also, leaf storm isn't super effective against shedinja, so how could it KO them? You might want to go back and fix that, and fix calling pidgeotto pidgeot that once. But otherwise, pretty good.
 
Chapter 2

It's Pidgeotto: sorry, it gets confusing. Edit...

Back to back posts merged. The following information has been added:

Here is Chapter 2 - enjoy!

A Night Visit​

The hut that Niles and Ivysaur lived in a small, one-roomed thatched hut in the middle of Viridian forest. It was a simple house made from timber and wound together with vines. Inside there was a small, round table made from oak and a wooden stool beside it. There was a shelf with various rare artefacts crammed on top and a chest-of-drawers that Niles had crafted with his own hands. It was ornately decorated with rare stones and engraved patterns that had been carved by Niles with a blunt knife. It had three drawers, each with a round handle made from varnished mahogany and engraved with the letter N. In the centre of the hut were two bundles of hay and straw – Niles’s and Ivysaurs’s beds.

When they arrived at the house, Niles opened the top drawer of the chest of drawers and removed about two dozen pecha berries. He ate about a quarter of the berries, put half of them on Ivysaur’s bed for Ivysaur to eat and laid the rest on his bed. He then pulled out an ornately carved wooden flute from his jacket pocket and played a soft, gentle tune on it. Several seconds later, a small Electric Mouse tumbled through the small hole in the door that had been made for it and rushed towards the berries. The Pichu then ate the berries ravenously and, when he had finished, leapt into Niles’s arms. It wasn’t a long jump since he was kneeling on the floor beside his bed.

Niles had found the Pichu injured in the woods, being taunted and attacked by a large collection of various ghost type pokémon including Haunter, Shedinja and Shuppet. Niles scared them off with his Ivysaur, then rescued the small Electric Mouse and took him in. He had been looking after the Pichu for months and he would be sad to see it go. He had even thought of asking it if it wanted to stay.

Niles was known throughout the pokémon world as the Pokémon Whisperer, as Niles had the incredible ability to talk to pokémon. He communicated with them by making various squawking clicking, howling, whining and moaning noises. They seemed to understand him and he could also understand them when they replied. Many pokémon travelled from all corners of Kanto to talk to him and seek his advice. Niles was also very wise and helped hundreds of pokémon every week. He was also highly regarded amongst powerful pokémon such as Jirachi, Mew and Lugia.

After a light tea at about 5 O’clock, Niles slept for two hours with Pichu by his side and Ivysaur sleeping on the adjacent bed. Then at 7 O’clock, the pokémon started pouring in. He made a fire in the grassy area surrounding his hut and advised various pokémon for three hours, helping the many toubled characters that had gone out of their ways to find him.

*​

After three hours spent by a fire, Niles extinguished it by throwing over it a bucket of water from a nearby spring. The troubled pokémon, now happy and content, wandered off back to their homes or to ramble in the wild.

About fifteen minutes after the fire had been extinguished, Pidgeotto returned back from wherever it had been with its friend, a Staraptor that often travelled the many miles from Sinnoh to visit Pidgeotto. Every couple of months or so, Pidgeotto would fly to Sinnsoh and stay there for a few weeks before returning home. The pair settled themselves down on the thatched roof of Niles’s hut and talked to each other for hours on end.

Just after Pidgeotto returned back, there was a bang at the door. Niles opened it and a few pokémon walked into the hut. These pokémon were friends of Niles and Ivysaur and often visited. There was a Wigglytuff, a Ledyba, a Chickorita, an Ekekid and a highly regarded Alakazam that Niles knew well. They were wonderful company and they chatted until it was well into the night. Ivysaur, Ledyba, Chickorita and Elekid talked around Ivysaur’s bed, while Niles, Wigglytuff and Alakazam talked around the oak table. Wigglytuff was a famous explorer and was the Guild Master of Wigglytuff’s Guild. He was cheerful and was good to talk to. Although he seemed like a bit crazy, he was in fact a very wise and powerful pokémon and knew several legendary pokémon. Alakazam was a slightly weaker pokémon, though he held a high place in the community of a far off pokémon village. They had both travelled a long way to make this meeting and Niles was very grateful. After talking about mundane matters for a while, the talk turned to serious subjects. After discussing some old relics and interesting rumours, the chat ceased and they had a late supper. Soon after they realised there was food going about, the group chatting with Ivysaur broke off communication and started eating as well.

About forty minutes later, the visiting pokémon left, exiting one by one. As Niles moved outside to see them on their way, he saw a familiar face. A parrot pokémon with a musical note on his head was hovering in the air outside the hut, waiting for Wigglytuff. Niles knew its face from when they had last met about a year ago. It was Chatot, the ex-assistant Guild master to Wigglytuff. Chatot had retired soon after Niles had last seen him to become a proper explorer. He wasn’t a particularly powerful pokémon when it was at the Guild, but from what he had heard about Chatot in the last few months, he had become an esteemed explorer and had reached level 100.

Chatot noticed Niles and flew over to say hello. Their conversation went a bit like this in English:

‘Hi, Chatot,’ Niles said.

‘Greetings,’ Chatot said, bowing his head. ‘How have you been keeping?’

‘Fine. Yourself?’

‘Very well,’ Chatot said. ‘I’ve been putting in some serious training and I’ve improved by battling techniques since leaving the Guild. I still visit everyone from time to time.’

‘How is Bidoof doing?’ Niles asked. ‘I heard he had left the Guild.’

‘Bidoof’s fine,’ Chatot said. ‘I saw him a couple of weeks ago. He and Sunflora have become hardened explorers and are now a very well respected, Gold Ranked rescue team.’

‘Wow,’ Niles said. Behind him, Wigglytuff exited the hut.

‘Ah, there’s Wigglytuff,’ Chatot said. He flew to Wigglytuff’s side and exchanged a few quiet words before talking to Niles.

‘Niles,’ Chatot said, ‘would it be possible to battle Ivysaur? I know I have a type advantage, but it would be good practice.’

‘I doubt you’d beat him, but by all means battle him,’ Niles replied. He called for Ivysaur and Ivysaur came bounding out from inside the hut. Niles made some funny nosies, directed at Ivysaur and Ivysaur nodded, grinning at Chatot. Niles pulled his wooden flute from inside his jacket pocket and blew a few shrill notes. All of the pokémon that had gathered outside his hut hastily withdrew to right beside the hut. Niles picked up a blunt stick from the ground and drew a muddy rectangle in the grass. He drew a line in the middle of the rectangle and a circle that overlapped the line in the middle of the rectangle. Ivysaur moved into one half of the rectangle and Chatot flew into the other. The two pokémon faced each other, both smiling pleasantly. They said a few encouraging words to each other before falling silent. When all was calm, Niles made a shrill noise on his wooden flute and the battle begun.

Chatot wasted no time and hurled dozens of feathers at Ivysaur viciously, a Feather Dance attack. They were too quick for Ivysaur to dodge them and they struck him hard before disintegrating into white ash. Ivysaur moaned softly as his attack sharply fell. He recovered quickly, however, and used Razor Leaf, sending green leaves flying at Chatot from the flower on its back. Chatot reacted quickly and squawked shrilly. The leaves that Ivysaur attacked with were ripped into shreds and fluttered onto the ground. Ivysaur squirmed in pain as the squawking hit its sensitive ears. After about twenty seconds of Chatot squawking, Ivysaur collapsed in a heap. ‘That was one powerful Hyper Voice,’ Niles muttered.

Chatot saw that Ivysaur’s defences were down and swooped in to unleash some powerful attack for the KO. But as Chatot approached, Ivysaur picked itself up quickly, smiling. Chatot realised too late that Ivysaur had been feigning injury as Ivysaur leaned to the side and threw its weight onto Chatot in a powerful, normal attack. Chatot was sent flying through the air and crashed into a tree just outside of the rectangle. Chatot desperately threw out its foot as it landed. The foot was inside the rectangle, so Chatot hadn’t been beaten.

Chatot got up sluggishly and put its whole body back into the arena. It stood on both legs and eyed Ivysaur for a few seconds, then rose into the air slowly. The pokémon watching the battle all cheered and Ivysaur smiled at Chatot, silently congratulating it. Chatot paid no attention and concentrated. It started shifting left to right – slowly at first but it gradually built up speed. Soon it was no more than a multicoloured blur. Niles was impressed: it took a lot of power to use an Agility that fast.

Suddenly, Chatot dashed forward to Ivysaur. It moved so quickly, it looked like it had simply teleported to beside Ivysaur, rather than flown. Chatot attacked Ivysaur with rapid Plucks. It attacked so quickly it looked like it was standing still rather than flying from side to side and pecking. Ivysaur’s body was soon a mass of bruises and Chatot was moving to quickly to attack. Using all its strength, Ivysaur stood upright and let out a roar. It wasn’t even a move, but the roar was so powerful it created a powerful wind that sent Chatot flying backwards. Niles and the other pokémon covered their ears and scrunched up their eyes until the roar had passed. Ivysaur stopped roaring and the pokémon and Niles opened their eyes and ears. Chatot looked up (it had flown down to the ground to prevent being blown off the battlefield. Ivysaur’s whole body turned a bright, glowing green. It’s eyes were the only thing that didn’t go green: they went a deep purple. Ivysaur barked a command and a nearby tree uprooted itself. It flipped around until it was horizontal and then held in place, levitating off the ground. Ivysaur barked another command and the grass around Chatot uprooted itself. It twisted and formed two large chains. Ivysaur roared loudly and the chains solidified, then latched themselves onto Chatot’s wings and pulled him a couple of metres up into the air. Chatot struggled wildly but he couldn’t break free. Ivysaur lifted its foot and the blossom off of a nearby tree flew into the air and solidified to create a pink club. The club hung in the air with nothing supporting it. The tree that was levitating, following a nod from Ivysaur, flew forward at an incredible speed. It stopped suddenly in front of Chatot. Ivysaur nodded at Chatot. A forest green aura surrounded Chatot. The grass-chains holding Chatot in place un-solidified and flew gracefully down to the ground and planted itself back down where it had originally been standing. Chatot remained suspended in the air. The tree swung slowly backwards, then sharply forwards, like a baseball bat. Chatot went flying through the air at an incredible speed and hit the side of the hut with a loud thud. Luckily, no pokémon were standing at that bit of the hut. Finally, the pink blossom club moved over to where Chatot was sitting groggily, then bashed Chatot on the head before un-solidifying and floating onto Chatot’s body. Chatot slumped and his body went slack. His eyelids dropped down slowly. He was KOd.

Everyone stared at Ivysaur as he gained his original colour. He nodded, modestly, then let out a roar of triumph. Everyone cheered and rushed over to Ivysaur, apart from Wigglytuff and Niles, who went to revive Chatot. In pokétongue, the universal language of pokémon, Niles said to Wigglytuff:

‘I’m sorry about Chatot.’

Wigglytuff laughed softly whilst gently rubbing Chatot’s bruises. ‘Don’t worry yourself,’ Wigglytuff said cheerfully. ‘Chatot will be fine, he’s been through worse… That Ivysaur is one seriously over-powered pokémon.’

‘I know,’ Niles said. ‘I don’t even know how he pulled that stunt off. It looked like a psychic type move, but no Ivysaur could have learnt a move like that unless someone had helped them…’ He trailed off, looking to Wigglytuff for answers.

‘And no pokémon I know could have taught a Grass type that kind of move, so cheer up,’ said Wigglytuff. Niles passed Wigglytuff a Reviver Seed. ‘Thanks,’ Wigglytuff said. Wigglytuff opened Chatot’s beak and shoved the Reviver Seed down it. Chatot shuddered violently and started to faint again.

‘YOOM-TAH!!!’ Wigglytuff boomed, jumping two foot in the air before descending down gracefully. Chatot’s eyes snapped open. He jumped onto his feet and looked at the Guild Master. ‘Hello Guild Master,’ he said. ‘I take it I lost the battle?’

Wigglytuff nodded brightly. ‘Yes, but never give up! One day soon you may be able to beat that Ivysaur!’

‘I doubt it,’ Chatot said doubtfully.

*​


Ivysaur was tired after the effort of the battle, so after celebrating briefly, he retired to the hut and fell fast asleep. After a light-hearted talk with Wigglytuff about happenings in Treasure Town, Niles too also fell asleep. It was past midnight when he dropped off, so he would have slept comfortably until noon the next day, except…

‘Professor… Professor…’

Niles heard the voice while he was sleeping in the back of his mind. It continued for about half an hour until –

‘Professor… KYWAAH!’

Niles woke up immediately. He sat up straight for about ten seconds. There was a tingling feeling in the air – it made the hairs on your neck stand straight up on end.

‘Niles…’

Niles thought he recognised the voice. He retrieved a special black and gold flute from his mackintosh pocket (he taken it off before he went to sleep and it now lay beside his bed) and started to play a tune on it, one of the very first tunes that had ever been written.

‘Yes, it is me,’ the deep, calm voice said.

Niles picked himself up off his bed and went outside (he was still wearing the clothes he had worn last night). In front of his hut stood a large pokémon. It resembled a white bird with royal blue markings round its eyes and spine-like attachments on its back.

‘Lugia,’ Niles said, nodding his head. ‘Nice to see you again.’

‘It is nice to see you again, too, Niles,’ Lugia replied.

‘What brings you here?’ Niles asked.

‘I have come on a matter of great importance,’ Lugia said solemnly. ‘You are aware of the legendary
beings of Sinnoh, Azelf, Uxie and Mesprit?’

Niles nodded. He had met them just less than five years ago when they were visiting Treasure Town.

‘They have vanished,’ Lugia said gravely. ‘They disappeared two months ago and have not been seen since.’

‘How dreadful!’ Niles said. ‘What happened?’

‘Details and business will come later, Professor,’ Lugia said, with a twinkle in its eye. ‘For now, let us fly.’
 
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The second time you put "sinnoh"you spelled it wrong. But otherwise, it's a pretty good story, other then adding mystery dungeon. But do what you want, it's your story. Oh, BTW, was that frenzy plant?
 
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