Hey I am posting the introduction of my story: Eon PS I am using a fan made pokemon that i do not own, (Celesteon) Introduction Everyone believed it to be true. Celesteon and Arceus were the creators of the world! They controlled, and protected the people and pokemon of the Earth. All evil was eliminated from the world, not a bit of bad in the world. The people and pokemon were in peace and harmony for all eternitiy. Until one fateful day, someone, or something, came to challenge the Earth and it's life. Celesteon was paniking. Her people were in danger! She and Arceus couldn't be everywhere at once, saving people and pokemon! They had to do something and FAST! So they did the only thing they had the power for. Creating more pokemon. Together they made the powerful Legendaries and Mythicals, and sent them to drive away the darkness that raided upoun the Earth. Celesteon and Arceus were forced to go into a deep sleep to regain power. They knew that if they woke up, the world would be safe. They realised though, the people would be on their own now. About a millenia later, Celesteon awoke from her sleep up in the clouds. She sighed in relief. The Earth was safe, and in control, but no other Legendary or Mythical pokemon was awake. This puzzled her. If she was the only one awake, what was she supposed to do? Surely there was nothing that only she was able to do. A couple of miles away, a cloud of thunder crashed, and lightning soared. A spot of glowing black magic surrounded the cloud, then vanished. Memories popped in Celesteon's mind. That was the sign of the darkness from the last time I saw the Earth. But how could it return? Did the Legendaries not entirely destroy it? Was it slowly growing back? At last, she knew what to do... Do as she had done the last time she needed to save the Earth. Create more pokemon! Celesteon didn't have enough power to make Legendaries and Mythicals, so she made seven forms of herself. To the people, they were known as Eevees. She carefully created them as powerful as she could, ready to explain to them their destiny to save the Earth, but it was too late. The darkness curled on her body, making it impossible to even breathe, and the Eevees being confused lost the connection of their mother, and fell down from the sky. Celesteon had no more power, giving it to her children, so she let the darkness grasp her. When the darkness at last let go of her face, she said heavily, "Good luck my children. Fulfil...your...destinies..." and she fell into another sleep. The darkness carried her away, to the master that would be pleased that she was nearly dead. Although, he would not be pleased at the fact that her children had been brought to the Earth. He watched as each Eevee seperated, going to a different location. The darkness snickered, and said, "What brains she gave to them. They'll never figure out their true powers! Hah!" And with that he left. And with that, the war began. Thanks guys! I'll make chapter one really soon! I hope you guys enjoyed!!! Please give me feedback!!!!! ---------- Post added 11/20/2012 at 04:06 PM ---------- I know I know... it's a short work-in-progress!