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Evanescence - Going Under Parody

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HypnosProjectHQ

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Ok. I'm not competing with Yoshi, if thats what some of you think. I just like writing parodies at the same time because I get the idea then... Ok. Anyways, This parody is Evanescence's "Going Under" in a TCG format... kind of. It doesn't have any Pokemon terms in it, but it does have some TCG terms. Please comment on it.

Original Song Lyrics: Available HERE

Original Song: Can be heard HERE

Here is... Evanescence Parody #1: Going Under
By HypnosProjectHQ
Subtitled as: Losing It

Now I will tell you what I've learned from you
50 thousand cards in all
Sitting, recieving, and thinking for it
And it still won't help me (I'm going under)
Don't want your hand this time - I'll save myself
Maybe I'll just win for once
Not tormented daily defeated by you
Just when I thought I'd reached the bottom
I'm losing again

I'm going under (Going under)
Losing it (Losing it)
I'm falling forever (Falling forever)
I've got a break through
I'm going under

Planning and writing the deck list at night
So I don't know what's right and what's wrong
Always confusing the plans that I had
So i can't trust myself anymore
I'm losing again

I'm going under (Going under)
Losing it (Losing it)
I'm falling forever (Falling forever)
I've got a break through

So go on and tell
Tell it to me - I'm so far away
I won't play broken
I've got to play - I can't keep going under

I'm losing again
I'm going under (Going under)
Losing it (Losing it)
I'm falling forever (Falling forever)
I've got a break through
I'm going under

Remember...

~*~EvAnEsCeNcE RoCkS~*~
 
Hmmm....

There doesn't seem to be much to set it apart from the orignal song. I think you need to change a few more lines to establish a base for your song.
 
Oh well. I could really find anything. The meaning was there in the original anyways and all I tried to do was add some gaming terms. Is it really bad or...? If so, I'm gonna throw it out... I don't want to use crap.

Plus, Evanescence is my all time favorite group and I don't wanna tear the lyrics up too badly.
 
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Dude, nice try but you should be beaten for bringing shame to such a damned good song.
 
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I know I should *smakes forehead into wall*.
But as I said before, "Plus, Evanescence is my all time favorite group and I don't wanna tear the lyrics up too badly."
 
HypnosProjectHQ said:
I know I should *smakes forehead into wall*.
But as I said before, "Plus, Evanescence is my all time favorite group and I don't wanna tear the lyrics up too badly."
Click to expand...

You're gonna have to let that go at some point. Parody is albout of taking a song and turning it upside down.
 
I give up anyways... Yoshi, this is your thing. Make it happen. Someone, lock this thread... PLEASE?

Thanks to whoever closes this... If anyone...
 
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