Ho-oh's Test Trailer

Discussion in 'Pokemon Fan Fiction' started by Cooltrainer Aaron, Nov 16, 2003.

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  1. Cooltrainer Aaron

    Cooltrainer Aaron New Member

    OK, here is my first attempt at Fan Fiction. I've had this idea in my head about the final Pokemon movie for a few months now and I'm working on putting it on paper. Now, what I invisioned is hard to describe on paper, so it might not be as good to you as I think it is, but I'll give it a shot. Here is the trailer for Pokemon: The Final Chapter. Tell me what you think about it. If you like what I've got here, I'll try to put the whole thing on once I finish getting it down.

    Well, here goes nothing.

    :pokeball: Pokemon: The Final Chapter :pokeball:
    :fire: Ho-oh’s Test :fire:

    The Trailer​

    At a small Pokemon Center in the middle of the night, Ash and May awoke by a knocking on the door, while Brock and Max still slept.
    “Who is it?” May groaned as she sat up and rubbed her eyes.
    “It’s me, Nurse Joy,” she opened the door, “Ash, I have a phone call holding for you from Professor Oak, he says it’s urgent.”
    Still half asleep, Ash stood up, “Professor Oak? Why would he call so late, he knows what time it is, even if we are in the Hoenn time zone.”
    Ash walked to the phone with his eyes still glazed over from sleep. May and Pikachu shuffled their way a few feet behind him in the same stupor. Ash picked up the receiver, but didn’t turn on the video monitor. “Hello? Professor Oak?” He paused, said a few acknowledging hums, and then became fully awake, “What!!??”
    Nurse Joy, May, and Pikachu all jumped at his outburst, and Brock and Max ran into the lobby to join them.
    “What’s going on?” Brock asked anyone that wished to answer.
    May was the one that responded, “I don’t know, but whatever it is, I’ve never heard such fear in Ash’s voice before.”
    All this time, Ash was yelling into the phone, “What happened? How could something like this happen? Where is she now? Professor!! Professor!!!! Grrr, forget it! I’m coming down there.” He slammed the phone down, sat in the seat of the phone booth, and put his head in his hands.
    A moment later he got up and ran to the room, and returned with his jacket and backpack. He said as he stuffed his arms into his sleeves, “I have to go. There’s a problem in Kanto at CC. Pikachu, lets get moving.” He and Pikachu ran out the door at a full run.
    Brock ran after him in a mad dash, “Ash, wait! What’s going on?”
    “Something’s wrong with Misty, Brock.”
    “Pika!!!” Pikachu was stunned by this news and Brock was too.
    “Misty? Ash, let us go too. She’s my friend as much as yours.”
    “No Brock, I need to go this one alone. I have to get to Cerulean City.”
    “Then take this Ash.” Ash turned around and saw Nurse Joy holding a ticket, “It’s a pass for the fastest boat in the area. Professor Oak sent it to me, as he was anticipating that you’d be going down to Cerulean.”
    “Thanks Nurse Joy.” Ash took the ticket and ran out to the dock without saying a word.
    “Good luck Ash, I wish we were going with you.” May said quietly, even though Ash was beyond earshot.
    As Ash arrived at the boat, a light red tint appeared in the sky near a mountain in the distance. Looking at the top of the mountain, there was a silhouette of a flying Pokemon outlined in red. And it said, looking down on the boat as it pulled away from the dock, “And so it begins.”
    Get ready for the biggest adventure of the Pokemon World. To save the one he loves, Ash must go through the past, present, and future, battle the fiercest Pokemon in existence, and decide the fate of people and Pokemon alike in a challenge of epic proportions! You won’t want to miss a single moment of this suspenseful, action packed adventure that will take you through the history of Pokemon, with an ending that will leave you breathless. “Pikachu??” Ash says in an echoey chamber.
    Pokemon: The Final Chapter. Coming soon to the Pokegym Fan Fiction board.
  2. Cooltrainer Aaron

    Cooltrainer Aaron New Member

    I need to know what you think so I can consider putting the entire story on. Feel free to PM me or post something. I need the input.
  3. Dek

    Dek New Member

    Xatu, you do realize it is very inconsiderate (and maybe against the Pokegym rules) to advertise your stuff on someone else's post.
  4. Dek

    Dek New Member

    The moderators sure as heck care.
  5. Cooltrainer Aaron

    Cooltrainer Aaron New Member

    I'm glad you like it xatu, I'll try and get it started in a different thread
  6. Cooltrainer Aaron

    Cooltrainer Aaron New Member

    OK I've set a deadline for the first part, it will come out on New Years. I'm trying to keep the anticipation alive.
  7. Cooltrainer Aaron

    Cooltrainer Aaron New Member

    Two weeks left until the posting of the first chapter of Ho-oh's Test. I'm still writing it down, but it seems that it will be in 10 parts, I'll release a new one each week if possible.
  8. xatu828

    xatu828 New Member


    this is cool.[​IMG][​IMG]
  9. Cooltrainer Aaron

    Cooltrainer Aaron New Member

    Wouldn't this work better in your profile instead of like spamming the string?

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