Orange: Complete! (Completed 11/7)
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Pikamaster
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You should have named him ditzy, ditty is unimaginative
I didn't name it. All characters here, save any member of Team Rocket, is from Pokemon Special, the Pokemon Manga. His NN was not my idea, but I will stay true to the Manga. Also... I had to write an Epilogue, so here it is. You'll definitely see more specialshipping from me, I actually really enjoy writing it. Yes, I know that "Sunrise" isn't technically a color, but it's exactly what I need. Red, orange, yellow and pink, all together. So, for the final time for this story, Read and Review please, and enjoy!
Sunrise
Five years later…
Snow, swirling flakes of frozen white purity, was softly falling on the already-covered overhang near the top of Mt. Silver. It always fell this high up, year round. The mountain stood apart from the others, a lone giant, almost encircled by others. None of the other mountains were as tall as the one, and none of them were as harsh. No trainer had conquered Mt. Silver; it was said to be as untamable as the seasons. But climbing it was easy for the Pokémon League Champion, Red; he had done so to find the perfect place. Everything had to be perfect for the perfect person in his life. Like a golden ray of sun, Yellow was his light, he would be lost without her. That is why, very nervously, he had set out at five thirty in the morning to climb Mt. Silver with her, anxious to be at the top before dawn arrived to the world at six. One hand in his pocket, fingering the precious box, the other grasping the tired hand of the girl he loved.
"Remind me, Red. Why are we at the top of a freezing mountain at such an unreasonable hour?" Yellow asked. But she was unable to keep up the pretense of being annoyed for long. Red had dressed her in warmly enough, giving her a bright yellow winter coat, as well as warm, waterproof boots to wear. And Vee had Teleported them up, so she could not complain about the climb. The only thing that was slightly annoying was the wait, but it was made easier by being with the man she loved.
But he told her to just wait and see, too nervous to trust his voice not to betray him. A thousand Butterfree were in his stomach, bringing every doubt and fear to his mind. What if she says no? Was the thought that buzzed around in his head like an angry Beedrill, relentless in its attack on his remaining shreds of confidence. Red glanced at his watch. Five fifty-nine. Only about one more minute of torturous waiting. He had planned this moment for an entire year, carefully finding what would be the best thing to do. The simple won over the complex in the end, Yellow would enjoy it more like that.
And then the minute passed and the sun started to shed its light on the mantle of darkness that cloaked the world; a brilliant ball of red, staining the clouds orange, yellow, pink and scarlet, as well as turning the snow into billions of tiny diamonds. Red heard Yellow gasp at the sight and knew that he had chosen the right place, now he just had to get the timing right, then the rest was out of his hands. Together they watched the sun rise, sharing their warmth as the colors faded. Just as the last of the hues were leaving the clouds, Red stepped back, pulling out the unadorned red-velvet box. Dropping to one knee, he started his painstakingly thought-out speech.
"Yellow, it's been ten years since we met, four years since we started dating. We've saved each other's lives; we've been through many happy times, as well as some sad ones. But just like that sunrise, I want to take something old and turn it into something beautiful and new."
At this, Yellow turned to him and gasped again, hand flying to her mouth. He opened the box, revealing the contents. A thin golden band rested on a sheet of cotton; a ruby and a yellow sapphire were set in it side by side, creating a tiny heart. Then Red spoke the words that she now knew were coming.
"Yellow of the Viridian Forest, will you marry me?"
Yellow only stood there for a few seconds, but it felt like mini-eternities for Red. Finally she moved. Red felt the Butterfree surge up his throat as he saw Yellow draw breath to respond. Then joy overtook him as she said the one word that he wanted to hear.
"Yes."
ashinto
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Nice dude, just nice. I bet that the guys that do manga special want you to write this as a final chapter or somethin' xD!! Could you do one with the other Dex holders (RubyxSapphire would be nice).
And there is one thing that I don't agree with for you coupling, I'm a larger SilverxBlue supporter than a GreenxBlue supporter, but hey, it's your story.
And there is one thing that I don't agree with for you coupling, I'm a larger SilverxBlue supporter than a GreenxBlue supporter, but hey, it's your story.
Pikamaster
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Thanks, I'd love that, but it's never going to happen.
And, to me, Blue acts more like a big sister to Silver than would allow for a real shipping between them, but that's just my opinion.And no, I hadn't planned on writing more shippings that weren't specialshipping, I'm not sure how well I can accurately portray any of the other characters when going in-depth. Possibly Ruby and Sapphire, though, I'm not sure what I'm going to do for now.
EDIT. Also, I never did put Blue and Green together, I just brought them in because 1. They've known Red the longest of the Dex holders, and 2. They were the closest Dex holders to Cerise Island. But they were never a couple, even though I do support that shipping.
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