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Pikachugirl1990's Pikachu Pokemon Card

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pikachugirl1990

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Hey. I have an idea for a Pokemon TCG card. My idea is called Pikachugirl1990's Pikachu.

The card should have a picture of Pikachu at the beach
HP: 60
Attacks:
Thunderbolt 50 2 lighting enegry cards
Thunder 90 4 lighting cards

Weakness fighting
Reastience steel
Effects for ThunderBolt flip a coin if heads, the Pokemon is now paraylzed.
Effects of Thuder: Discard all of the cards attached to Pikachugirl1990's Pikachu. If you do this the damage will be 100 instead of 90.
Level 20
Poke-body: Light Screen. If the defending Pokemon tries to attack Pikachugirl1990's Pikachu the damage will be reduced by 20 after applying weeakness and reseteince.

Stage 1 evolves from Pikachugirl1990's Pichu

Type Lighting
Retreat Cost: 2 cards

Post your thoughts about this card! :wink:

Peace,
pikachugirl1990 "Sara"
 
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You need to add more than what you put. You put its name, HP, attacks, and damage. You forgot:
Level
Type
Energy Requirements
Stage
Effects
Weakness
Resistance
Retreat Cost


Also, you may want to put the last line you put in your post your signature, because it seems really irrelevant.
 
Hi Pikachugirl, welcome to the CaC forums. Unlike a lot of other site's CaC sections we are a bit more strict on the grammar, but it's all good here.

We like to use a certain text based format, many people have their own style but based on another's.

Here is how I would post your card:
Pikachugirl1990's Pikachu Lv.20 60HP [L]

Stage 1 Pokémon(Evolves from Pikachugirl1990's Pikachu)

PokéBody: Light Screen
Whenever an attack would damage Pikachugirl1990's Pikachu, reduce that damage by 20 (After applying weakness and resistance).

[L][L] Thunderbolt 50
Flip a coin. If heads, the defending Pokémon is now Paralyzed.

[L][L][L][L] Thunder 90
You may discard all cards attached to Pikachugirl1990's Pikachu. If you do, this attack's base damage is 100 instead of 90.
________________________
Weakness:[F]x2
Resistance:[M]-30
Retreat Cost:[C][C]
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[L] is an accepted symbol for Lightning energy. Others used commonly are:

[M]=steel/metal
[R]=fire
[F]=fighting
[C]=colorless
[W]=water
[D]=dark
[X]=rainbow
[G]=grass
 
You should always put the effect of the attack beneath the attack. Put the stuff from the card generally just how it would be on a real card. Usually like this:

NAME LV.# HP## [TYPE]
STAGE

If any: [Poke-Body/Power] NAME OF BODY/POWER
EFFECT

[ENERGY COST] ATTACK NAME DAMAGE
EFFECT

W:[WEAKNESS] +#
R:[RESISTANCE] -#
RC:[RETREAT COST]

For retreat cost, don't put "2 cards", put [C][C].

Comments on actual card:

Needs +/- for W/R
Thunderbolt is broken, 50 for 2 is already broken, but 1/2 chance of Paralasis? BROKEN
Thunder is also a bit overpowered, Stage 1 Pokemon are usually not so powerful, and have attacks that use less Energy. Thunder's effect is dramatically underpowered, discarding all Energy for just 10 more damage? BAD. It would add much more damage anyway, but the attack does not belong on a Stage 1 with 60 HP.

Also, the grammer is poor, try looking at actual cards with similar effects to find out how the text works. To find the text, try PokePedia.net.
 
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