Pokemon Naranja: Through the Eyes of a Run Away: Winner Announced!!
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As you can see, I've not been the best with getting chapters out, though the lack of insperation and shear lazyness stopped me, but hey, here it is, enjoy peoplez...
Chapter 4
Vs. Bronzor
Obsidian made it to a room guarded by huge steel doors. ‘This is where that man is, now it’s my time to kill him and end this mess once and for all…’ “Sel, Scar, you ready?”
The Pokemon answered with a nod, knowing that this was going to be an extremely hard fight.
Obsidian opened the door seeing Cronus on a throne, his grey eyes staring at Obsidian. Obsidian then noticed that there was a burn mark on the left side of his face and some of a scar was visible on his hands. He was also missing half a finger.
“You did some damage to me with that little hat trick back in our last face off. Though it won’t be like that this time. You won’t even be able to touch me.”
“Shut your face!!! Sel, night slash, Scar, draco meteor.” Scar attacked the man with a burst of bluish energy, as Sel sprinted towards Cronus. Then Obsidian did the unthinkable. He took his staff out and ran right next to Sel, ready to strike Cronus.
“Hehehe…” A red wall of energy came between Cronus and the attacks towards him. The back wall split open, revealing more walls of the same energy. “To get to me, you’ll have to catch up to me Obsidian.” The admin waited for the red energy to disappear so he could make his way down a corridor. The energy started to disengage, Cronus starting to sprint.
Obsidian ran at full speed towards Cronus, getting real close to him. “Watch your back!!” With that said, the staff was extended and swung at Cronus.
Cronus’ shirt then broke as four purple wings sprouted from his back and carried him over the staff and into the next cell of the corridor as the energy wall went up again. “Do you really think that would trick me, that I would leave my back open? I’m the one that showed you the trick, you shouldn’t be surprised that I’m using it now, should you?”
‘He’s right, but dammit, how does he know all of my moves so easily, God I wish I had a psychic type with me, this would make this so easy. Now, let me think, he has his Pokemon out of there, so there must be a psychic-type somewhere outside so he can read me so well.’ Obsidian examined him looking for any clothing that seemed like it could be a Pokemon. ‘Those are some interesting arm plates, circular…any circular psychic Pokemon…BRONZOR!!’
‘Boss, he’s onto me.’
‘Don’t worry; he’s weak, only two Pokemon on him, we can just hold him out till he gets tired.’ The walls of energy go off again and Cronus makes it out of the corridor into a square, metal room.
Obsidian makes it through the corridor too, running towards Cronus. “Fight me with your all!! Burn him down Scar, fire blast!!”
“Hehehe, you’re too naïve, Dragonair aqua tail.” Cronus held out his right arm and his Dragonair come out of the sleeve and use aqua tail through the fire blast and against Scar, knocking him back.
“Sel, ice punch, make that dragon wish she never let her ugly head out.”
Sel hit the Dragonair successfully; though it didn’t look like that much damage was done to it.
‘What the, why didn’t it do as much damage.’
“You fool, Dragonair just ate a Pache berry that weakens super-effective ice-type attacks, it won’t work.”
‘Boss, you forgot the Bagon, and you don’t have another berry.’
‘Don’t worry Bronzor, I have you.’
“Sel, ice punch again, Scar, dragon pulse!!”
“Dragonair, return, Bronzor, gyro ball on Sel, Larion, iron head on Scar.”
Larion revealed itself from a hiding place against the wall, using it’s metal body as camouflage, and knocked Scar far back before the attack was used as Bronzor hit Sel with the super-effective move.
“Give it up Obsidian, you’ll never be strong enough to beat the one who taught you all your tricks.”
Looking at the state of the battle, Sel and Scar would go down every minute. “Well, let’s not hope you forgot that in each battle, there are up to 7 targets and 14 battlers, up to 6 Pokemon each, and the trainers themselves.” As that was said, Obsidian grabbed his staff and stabbed it wildly at Cronus. Sel and Scar seeing that Cronus was occupied, went to battling Larion and Bronzor.
‘This is too easy, he’s still forgetting something about my battle style.’ Cronus jumped over one of Obsidian’s horizontal sweeps of the staff as Crobat wings sprouted out of his back. “Game, set, match,” Cronus said as Dragonair slithered down his arm and Obsidians pole, constricting the teen.
‘God, how could I be so foolish, I can’t believe I was just beat…I’m going to die.’
“Raichu, iron tail!!” A teen called out of no where, his Raichu attacking the Dragonair and knocking it off of Obsidian.
“Kertix, thank God you came here.” ‘Get back in the battle Obsidian.’ Noticing that Scar and Sel were in a stalemate with the other two Pokemon, he decided to wait for him to make the first move and then work with it, just to see what he gives him.’
“Obsidian, you OK?”
“No time for that, we have to beat this man.”
“I’m on it, Raichu, thunder on the Bronzor.”
Kertix’s Raichu attacked Bronzor with minimal damage done. The Pokemon moved it way towards Raichu with a gyro ball attack.
“Sel, low kick on Larion, Scar, fire blast!!”
Sel sprinted over and slid down low, giving Larion a super-effective sweeping kick that knocked it off it’s feet, unable to attack Scar as Scar knocked out the Bronzor with the super-effective hit.
‘Not again, I can’t believe me, Cronus, Brodie’s top admin would be defeated by just teens. Though from Obsidian, I should expect it from his lineage.’ “You two think you have won, well there’s a little thing with this base, it’s actually really a huge bomb. Yes, right now we’re inside a bomb and it will blow up at the touch of this button.” As Cronus said this, he returned his Pokemon and had Crobat take him away from the base. “You have 20 seconds to get out of here, if not, it’s big boomy time!!!” Cronus called out with a sick laughter in his voice as he flew away.
“Kertix, quick, get Fearow out, we’ll die if you don’t.”
“He was knocked out by a couple of grunts that I came by following you, this would’ve never happened if you didn’t listen. Now from what I know, none of the other members made it, actually, they retreated because we all thought you lead us into a trap. Thank God we did, or the whole team would be dead.”
“Stop reminding me, put the Pokemon in there pokeballs.”
The two returned Raichu, Sel, and Scar. As they did, the building exploded, bursting into flames. In a matter of seconds, Obsidian and Kertix went unconscious due to smoke. Soon after, four teens walked into the burning oblivion.
“Nagato, do your thing.” One of the teens said.
“Yes boss.” Nagato took out a flute and a blue plate and started to play the flute. A blue light shown in the sky and it started to rain, the fire going out.
“They’re living, right?” Another teen asked.
“There aura is still here, they’re alive, but barely, we’ll get them to the base and then get them better.”
The largest out of the four walk over to the teens and pick them up, placing one on each shoulder. He then sent out a Flygon and hopped on it. The tallest of the four sent out a Drifblim, Nagato sending out a Crobat, and a man in a silver cloak who seemed to be the leader sent out a Honchkrow.
“Boys, we fly to the base and start working, for them two, tomorrow’s the first day of the rest of there lives.”
As that was said, all four flew off with Kertix and Obsidian into the night.
Who are these teens? What do they want with Obsidian and Kertix? What was that flute and plate? Who’s side are these people really on? Find out next chapter (and hopefully it’s out quicker this time, God I’m too lazy…)!!!
As you can see, I've not been the best with getting chapters out, though the lack of insperation and shear lazyness stopped me, but hey, here it is, enjoy peoplez...
Chapter 4
Vs. Bronzor
Obsidian made it to a room guarded by huge steel doors. ‘This is where that man is, now it’s my time to kill him and end this mess once and for all…’ “Sel, Scar, you ready?”
The Pokemon answered with a nod, knowing that this was going to be an extremely hard fight.
Obsidian opened the door seeing Cronus on a throne, his grey eyes staring at Obsidian. Obsidian then noticed that there was a burn mark on the left side of his face and some of a scar was visible on his hands. He was also missing half a finger.
“You did some damage to me with that little hat trick back in our last face off. Though it won’t be like that this time. You won’t even be able to touch me.”
“Shut your face!!! Sel, night slash, Scar, draco meteor.” Scar attacked the man with a burst of bluish energy, as Sel sprinted towards Cronus. Then Obsidian did the unthinkable. He took his staff out and ran right next to Sel, ready to strike Cronus.
“Hehehe…” A red wall of energy came between Cronus and the attacks towards him. The back wall split open, revealing more walls of the same energy. “To get to me, you’ll have to catch up to me Obsidian.” The admin waited for the red energy to disappear so he could make his way down a corridor. The energy started to disengage, Cronus starting to sprint.
Obsidian ran at full speed towards Cronus, getting real close to him. “Watch your back!!” With that said, the staff was extended and swung at Cronus.
Cronus’ shirt then broke as four purple wings sprouted from his back and carried him over the staff and into the next cell of the corridor as the energy wall went up again. “Do you really think that would trick me, that I would leave my back open? I’m the one that showed you the trick, you shouldn’t be surprised that I’m using it now, should you?”
‘He’s right, but dammit, how does he know all of my moves so easily, God I wish I had a psychic type with me, this would make this so easy. Now, let me think, he has his Pokemon out of there, so there must be a psychic-type somewhere outside so he can read me so well.’ Obsidian examined him looking for any clothing that seemed like it could be a Pokemon. ‘Those are some interesting arm plates, circular…any circular psychic Pokemon…BRONZOR!!’
‘Boss, he’s onto me.’
‘Don’t worry; he’s weak, only two Pokemon on him, we can just hold him out till he gets tired.’ The walls of energy go off again and Cronus makes it out of the corridor into a square, metal room.
Obsidian makes it through the corridor too, running towards Cronus. “Fight me with your all!! Burn him down Scar, fire blast!!”
“Hehehe, you’re too naïve, Dragonair aqua tail.” Cronus held out his right arm and his Dragonair come out of the sleeve and use aqua tail through the fire blast and against Scar, knocking him back.
“Sel, ice punch, make that dragon wish she never let her ugly head out.”
Sel hit the Dragonair successfully; though it didn’t look like that much damage was done to it.
‘What the, why didn’t it do as much damage.’
“You fool, Dragonair just ate a Pache berry that weakens super-effective ice-type attacks, it won’t work.”
‘Boss, you forgot the Bagon, and you don’t have another berry.’
‘Don’t worry Bronzor, I have you.’
“Sel, ice punch again, Scar, dragon pulse!!”
“Dragonair, return, Bronzor, gyro ball on Sel, Larion, iron head on Scar.”
Larion revealed itself from a hiding place against the wall, using it’s metal body as camouflage, and knocked Scar far back before the attack was used as Bronzor hit Sel with the super-effective move.
“Give it up Obsidian, you’ll never be strong enough to beat the one who taught you all your tricks.”
Looking at the state of the battle, Sel and Scar would go down every minute. “Well, let’s not hope you forgot that in each battle, there are up to 7 targets and 14 battlers, up to 6 Pokemon each, and the trainers themselves.” As that was said, Obsidian grabbed his staff and stabbed it wildly at Cronus. Sel and Scar seeing that Cronus was occupied, went to battling Larion and Bronzor.
‘This is too easy, he’s still forgetting something about my battle style.’ Cronus jumped over one of Obsidian’s horizontal sweeps of the staff as Crobat wings sprouted out of his back. “Game, set, match,” Cronus said as Dragonair slithered down his arm and Obsidians pole, constricting the teen.
‘God, how could I be so foolish, I can’t believe I was just beat…I’m going to die.’
“Raichu, iron tail!!” A teen called out of no where, his Raichu attacking the Dragonair and knocking it off of Obsidian.
“Kertix, thank God you came here.” ‘Get back in the battle Obsidian.’ Noticing that Scar and Sel were in a stalemate with the other two Pokemon, he decided to wait for him to make the first move and then work with it, just to see what he gives him.’
“Obsidian, you OK?”
“No time for that, we have to beat this man.”
“I’m on it, Raichu, thunder on the Bronzor.”
Kertix’s Raichu attacked Bronzor with minimal damage done. The Pokemon moved it way towards Raichu with a gyro ball attack.
“Sel, low kick on Larion, Scar, fire blast!!”
Sel sprinted over and slid down low, giving Larion a super-effective sweeping kick that knocked it off it’s feet, unable to attack Scar as Scar knocked out the Bronzor with the super-effective hit.
‘Not again, I can’t believe me, Cronus, Brodie’s top admin would be defeated by just teens. Though from Obsidian, I should expect it from his lineage.’ “You two think you have won, well there’s a little thing with this base, it’s actually really a huge bomb. Yes, right now we’re inside a bomb and it will blow up at the touch of this button.” As Cronus said this, he returned his Pokemon and had Crobat take him away from the base. “You have 20 seconds to get out of here, if not, it’s big boomy time!!!” Cronus called out with a sick laughter in his voice as he flew away.
“Kertix, quick, get Fearow out, we’ll die if you don’t.”
“He was knocked out by a couple of grunts that I came by following you, this would’ve never happened if you didn’t listen. Now from what I know, none of the other members made it, actually, they retreated because we all thought you lead us into a trap. Thank God we did, or the whole team would be dead.”
“Stop reminding me, put the Pokemon in there pokeballs.”
The two returned Raichu, Sel, and Scar. As they did, the building exploded, bursting into flames. In a matter of seconds, Obsidian and Kertix went unconscious due to smoke. Soon after, four teens walked into the burning oblivion.
“Nagato, do your thing.” One of the teens said.
“Yes boss.” Nagato took out a flute and a blue plate and started to play the flute. A blue light shown in the sky and it started to rain, the fire going out.
“They’re living, right?” Another teen asked.
“There aura is still here, they’re alive, but barely, we’ll get them to the base and then get them better.”
The largest out of the four walk over to the teens and pick them up, placing one on each shoulder. He then sent out a Flygon and hopped on it. The tallest of the four sent out a Drifblim, Nagato sending out a Crobat, and a man in a silver cloak who seemed to be the leader sent out a Honchkrow.
“Boys, we fly to the base and start working, for them two, tomorrow’s the first day of the rest of there lives.”
As that was said, all four flew off with Kertix and Obsidian into the night.
Who are these teens? What do they want with Obsidian and Kertix? What was that flute and plate? Who’s side are these people really on? Find out next chapter (and hopefully it’s out quicker this time, God I’m too lazy…)!!!
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Lazy gets everyone once in a while. It's very good to see this chapter. 5 will be better. 4 is
great with the description and such. Good work. -David
great with the description and such. Good work. -David
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Chapter 5
FormEx
Obsidian woke up the next morning to something poking at his right hip. He looked around to the unfamiliar place he was in, seeing he was on a cot in what looked to be a guest room. Around him, there was Sel, Scar, the Eevee he saw in the forest where Smog was harvesting Pokemon and the Munchlax with the tattered umbrella which the Pokemon was using to poke his hip. All he could remember was the explosion last night; he was extremely surprised that he was even alive. “Where am I?”
“Hey, he’s finally up.” A voice said.
“Took him long enough, the other boy got up a ton faster.” Another voice said to the first one.
“He’s had a harder fight than me; I wasn’t there for that long.” A third person said.
‘Hey, that sounded like Kertix.’ “Kertix, is that you?” Obsidian called out.
“Ya, it’s me, I’m right here,” Kertix stated as he walked in with a teen in a white tunic and forest green pants and a man clad in black. “Obsidian, these people said that they saved us yesterday!”
“Um…thanks. …Who are you.”
The boy in green answered first. “I’m Nagato, and this right here is Makai. There are more that live at the manor, but we are the only ones here right now, Jirou and Peine-sama are out getting more supplies.”
“Nice to meet you two, and supplies for what?”
“Something that we may need you two for, but first, let’s see how your temperature is, you may have a fever from the huge amount of heat the explosion exposed you to yesterday.” Nagato felt around the table for the thermometer, knocking it over. “Crap, Makai, can you get this boy’s temperature.”
“Hehehe, sure thing.” Makai picked up the thermometer and put it in Obsidian’s mouth. After a couple of seconds, he took it out and checked the temperature. “Nagato, it looks fine.”
“That’s good, now, let me get you four new pokeballs, you lost two and two broke.”
“Nagato, the Munchlax and the Eevee aren’t mine, they’re wild Pokemon. The Sneasel and the Bagon are mine.”
“That’s weird; all four have never left your side. Maybe you should catch them.”
“You have a point there, would you two like to join my party.”
Munchlax and Eevee both nodded there heads in agreement.
“OK, I’ll have Makai grab the four pokeballs for you.” ‘Since I can’t see them anyway…’
Makai walked into the other room which was full of pokeballs, most of them were full with Pokemon, split into four sections, each section having six blank spots. He went to the back where the empty balls were stored and took four of them. Makai left the room, and then entered the one with Obsidian, Kertix, and Nagato in it. “Here’s the pokeballs Obsidian,” he said as he handed the balls to him.
“Thanks, return you guys.” The pokeballs burst open as the four went into them. Obsidian then got out of his bed and threw his shirt on. A knock then came and two other people walked in. One was pretty burly, almost as big as Chaps if not bigger. He was wearing black shorts torn at the bottom with a rope belt. The other looked very similar to Obsidian and looked as if he was in his twenties. He had tan skin, long, black, curly hair that fell to the left side of his face, and had a black button-down shirt and black pants. The burly one started to talk.
“Hey, Nagato-kun, when’s lunch, I’m starved.”
“Jirou, you and Peine-sama were supposed to get the food, didn’t you get any?”
“Umm…..”
“What did you do for five hours?!?!”
“HEY GUYS, YOU DON’T KNOW HOW MANY HOT GIR—bad time to announce this ain’t it?” The tall one, which was Peine said.
“You two spent five hours hitting on girls?”
“…Yup…only if you could see them Nagato.” “And only if you could see.” Jirou whispered under his breath as he chuckled.
“So we aren’t eating it seems unless we have someone get us food?”
“I’ll do it Nagato.”
“Thanks Kertix, here’s P1000, that should be enough money.”
Nagato gave Kertix the money as the boy left on his Fearow. Jirou and Peine then turned to Obsidian. “So, you’re the one that has been giving Smog a bit of trouble. I’m Peine, the leader of this group called FormEx, nice to meet ‘cha.” Peine said as he held out his hand for it to be shaken.
“Um…I’m Obsidian, nice to meet you, sir.” Obsidian shook Peine’s hand. “So, why am I here, what did you four do?”
“Well, let’s explain our story; it’ll make how we did this clearer to you. Like you, all of us are ex-criminals. Makai and Jirou are both ex-members of a group in Kanto called Team Rocket. Jirou was forced to join, and some say that Makai was created in the labs to be the ultimate battler. The two left about five years ago. Nagato is an ex-Galactic, who has some family in the team, and you may be able to guess who.” Peine said as he pointed at Nagato’s silver hair. “I was a member of Smog, hell I remember when you were born. I left about ten years ago. We knew about the Cloaks and there members, due to them hunting us down when we were wearing our old colors. We targeted Kertix because he was a strong young man that would help us. You on the other hand we were watching for a long, long time. I’ve been watching you since you were born to the point where I’ve done things for you that you don’t even know. You know you Sneasel, Sel.”
“Ya, I hatched her when I was seven. How do you know her?”
“…Now that I think of it, for reasons that are best left unknown, but I’ll leave it at this, my Weavile, Silver, is the father of Sel.”
“You gave me Sel?!”
“Sort of…but that’s not the point. The point is, we’ve been planning for us to take you two away from your respectful groups to help us with a larger attack than the Cloaks could ever think of.”
“Aren’t the Cloaks the strongest resistance team in the region?”
“Hey, Nagato, look at this kid (oh wait, you can’t) saying that the Cloaks are the toughest resistance group in the region,” Peine said trying to hold in a laugh. All the other guys just started to crack up. “Boy, you know this just as well as us, the best way to beat a criminal, is to have the mind of a criminal. To have the mind of a criminal, you had to be an ex-criminal like all of us here. We aren’t afraid to take chances, and we aren’t afraid to do whatever we need to take out criminals. We are also a ton stronger than those fools. Kertix has some potential, but if he’s trained by them, the world is loosing a talented battler.”
7 Hours Later at the dinner table
Kertix, Obsidian, Makai, Peine, Jirou, and Nagato were around the table eating there dinner. Most of the day was spent with Obsidian and Kertix watching TV, Makai gardening, Nagato playing the flute, and Peine teaching Jirou how to read and write. They now all together eating meatballs, pasta, sausage, bread, and salad, with a pitcher of root beer for each person to drink. “So, now that we are all together, let me start off with the plan.” Peine stated putting down his utensils. Everyone stopped what they were doing as Peine started to speak. “Smog has taken over Newrock and Minerock towns. They are shipping away all the Pokemon, and from what I’ve heard, they are putting all the towns’ people as slaves and auctioning them off and the professor is trying to be forced into the system. The mission is real easy. We have to basically save all the people then destroy both towns.”
Everyone except Kertix seemed to be O.K. with the plan. “Why would you do that, so many people and Pokemon will get hurt or worse!!”
“I know you’d be like this, the Cloaks would make you think this way. We’re making sure everyone gets out and about the Pokemon, we use these.” Peine takes out a bomb-like object out of his bag. “They are repel bombs. Pokemon within 50 miles will just get the heck away from the area.”
“I still don’t agree with it…but OK…”
“So, you guys get to sleep, tomorrow mornin’ I’ll give you a plan and then we’ll lay our waste.”
What is the plan going to end up being?? Who in Smog is behind this plan? Find out next chapter (I hope).
FormEx
Obsidian woke up the next morning to something poking at his right hip. He looked around to the unfamiliar place he was in, seeing he was on a cot in what looked to be a guest room. Around him, there was Sel, Scar, the Eevee he saw in the forest where Smog was harvesting Pokemon and the Munchlax with the tattered umbrella which the Pokemon was using to poke his hip. All he could remember was the explosion last night; he was extremely surprised that he was even alive. “Where am I?”
“Hey, he’s finally up.” A voice said.
“Took him long enough, the other boy got up a ton faster.” Another voice said to the first one.
“He’s had a harder fight than me; I wasn’t there for that long.” A third person said.
‘Hey, that sounded like Kertix.’ “Kertix, is that you?” Obsidian called out.
“Ya, it’s me, I’m right here,” Kertix stated as he walked in with a teen in a white tunic and forest green pants and a man clad in black. “Obsidian, these people said that they saved us yesterday!”
“Um…thanks. …Who are you.”
The boy in green answered first. “I’m Nagato, and this right here is Makai. There are more that live at the manor, but we are the only ones here right now, Jirou and Peine-sama are out getting more supplies.”
“Nice to meet you two, and supplies for what?”
“Something that we may need you two for, but first, let’s see how your temperature is, you may have a fever from the huge amount of heat the explosion exposed you to yesterday.” Nagato felt around the table for the thermometer, knocking it over. “Crap, Makai, can you get this boy’s temperature.”
“Hehehe, sure thing.” Makai picked up the thermometer and put it in Obsidian’s mouth. After a couple of seconds, he took it out and checked the temperature. “Nagato, it looks fine.”
“That’s good, now, let me get you four new pokeballs, you lost two and two broke.”
“Nagato, the Munchlax and the Eevee aren’t mine, they’re wild Pokemon. The Sneasel and the Bagon are mine.”
“That’s weird; all four have never left your side. Maybe you should catch them.”
“You have a point there, would you two like to join my party.”
Munchlax and Eevee both nodded there heads in agreement.
“OK, I’ll have Makai grab the four pokeballs for you.” ‘Since I can’t see them anyway…’
Makai walked into the other room which was full of pokeballs, most of them were full with Pokemon, split into four sections, each section having six blank spots. He went to the back where the empty balls were stored and took four of them. Makai left the room, and then entered the one with Obsidian, Kertix, and Nagato in it. “Here’s the pokeballs Obsidian,” he said as he handed the balls to him.
“Thanks, return you guys.” The pokeballs burst open as the four went into them. Obsidian then got out of his bed and threw his shirt on. A knock then came and two other people walked in. One was pretty burly, almost as big as Chaps if not bigger. He was wearing black shorts torn at the bottom with a rope belt. The other looked very similar to Obsidian and looked as if he was in his twenties. He had tan skin, long, black, curly hair that fell to the left side of his face, and had a black button-down shirt and black pants. The burly one started to talk.
“Hey, Nagato-kun, when’s lunch, I’m starved.”
“Jirou, you and Peine-sama were supposed to get the food, didn’t you get any?”
“Umm…..”
“What did you do for five hours?!?!”
“HEY GUYS, YOU DON’T KNOW HOW MANY HOT GIR—bad time to announce this ain’t it?” The tall one, which was Peine said.
“You two spent five hours hitting on girls?”
“…Yup…only if you could see them Nagato.” “And only if you could see.” Jirou whispered under his breath as he chuckled.
“So we aren’t eating it seems unless we have someone get us food?”
“I’ll do it Nagato.”
“Thanks Kertix, here’s P1000, that should be enough money.”
Nagato gave Kertix the money as the boy left on his Fearow. Jirou and Peine then turned to Obsidian. “So, you’re the one that has been giving Smog a bit of trouble. I’m Peine, the leader of this group called FormEx, nice to meet ‘cha.” Peine said as he held out his hand for it to be shaken.
“Um…I’m Obsidian, nice to meet you, sir.” Obsidian shook Peine’s hand. “So, why am I here, what did you four do?”
“Well, let’s explain our story; it’ll make how we did this clearer to you. Like you, all of us are ex-criminals. Makai and Jirou are both ex-members of a group in Kanto called Team Rocket. Jirou was forced to join, and some say that Makai was created in the labs to be the ultimate battler. The two left about five years ago. Nagato is an ex-Galactic, who has some family in the team, and you may be able to guess who.” Peine said as he pointed at Nagato’s silver hair. “I was a member of Smog, hell I remember when you were born. I left about ten years ago. We knew about the Cloaks and there members, due to them hunting us down when we were wearing our old colors. We targeted Kertix because he was a strong young man that would help us. You on the other hand we were watching for a long, long time. I’ve been watching you since you were born to the point where I’ve done things for you that you don’t even know. You know you Sneasel, Sel.”
“Ya, I hatched her when I was seven. How do you know her?”
“…Now that I think of it, for reasons that are best left unknown, but I’ll leave it at this, my Weavile, Silver, is the father of Sel.”
“You gave me Sel?!”
“Sort of…but that’s not the point. The point is, we’ve been planning for us to take you two away from your respectful groups to help us with a larger attack than the Cloaks could ever think of.”
“Aren’t the Cloaks the strongest resistance team in the region?”
“Hey, Nagato, look at this kid (oh wait, you can’t) saying that the Cloaks are the toughest resistance group in the region,” Peine said trying to hold in a laugh. All the other guys just started to crack up. “Boy, you know this just as well as us, the best way to beat a criminal, is to have the mind of a criminal. To have the mind of a criminal, you had to be an ex-criminal like all of us here. We aren’t afraid to take chances, and we aren’t afraid to do whatever we need to take out criminals. We are also a ton stronger than those fools. Kertix has some potential, but if he’s trained by them, the world is loosing a talented battler.”
7 Hours Later at the dinner table
Kertix, Obsidian, Makai, Peine, Jirou, and Nagato were around the table eating there dinner. Most of the day was spent with Obsidian and Kertix watching TV, Makai gardening, Nagato playing the flute, and Peine teaching Jirou how to read and write. They now all together eating meatballs, pasta, sausage, bread, and salad, with a pitcher of root beer for each person to drink. “So, now that we are all together, let me start off with the plan.” Peine stated putting down his utensils. Everyone stopped what they were doing as Peine started to speak. “Smog has taken over Newrock and Minerock towns. They are shipping away all the Pokemon, and from what I’ve heard, they are putting all the towns’ people as slaves and auctioning them off and the professor is trying to be forced into the system. The mission is real easy. We have to basically save all the people then destroy both towns.”
Everyone except Kertix seemed to be O.K. with the plan. “Why would you do that, so many people and Pokemon will get hurt or worse!!”
“I know you’d be like this, the Cloaks would make you think this way. We’re making sure everyone gets out and about the Pokemon, we use these.” Peine takes out a bomb-like object out of his bag. “They are repel bombs. Pokemon within 50 miles will just get the heck away from the area.”
“I still don’t agree with it…but OK…”
“So, you guys get to sleep, tomorrow mornin’ I’ll give you a plan and then we’ll lay our waste.”
What is the plan going to end up being?? Who in Smog is behind this plan? Find out next chapter (I hope).
David's Confused Pokedad
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Umm... Is there some "Naruto" references in the names? I'll say yes.
Suspensful plan there with Obsidian and Kertix together. Let's see.
On the side, got a PM Question for you. -David
Suspensful plan there with Obsidian and Kertix together. Let's see.
On the side, got a PM Question for you. -David
ashinto
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Peine and Nagato both have some Naruto influence in the name, but that's just it. Beside those names, all the characters are from an RP that I take part of (check my contact page if you want a link). The Cloaks is also to some extent part of this RP (they are actually Peine, Nagato, and Jirou in the RP. Makai to some extent is evil in the RP, but in the story, he's the good guy for once.) And can anyone guess what handicap Nagato has??
David's Confused Pokedad
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A severely weakened body? (I'm basing it on my Shonen Jump experiences, so, yes, I'll look
entirely moronic and I accept it to the fullest extent.)........
No, not really.
Good luck with Ch. 6, and thanks for the descriptions of the origins.
I like it now. -David
entirely moronic and I accept it to the fullest extent.)........
No, not really.Good luck with Ch. 6, and thanks for the descriptions of the origins.
I like it now. -David
ashinto
Active Member
Why thank you. I thinks the best writing comes from some of the best inspiration, mine being my friends that I RP with. Your story is amazing too!!I love reading this! Your writing is very engaging and detailed.
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Chapter 6 is up now, so you can continue to party!!
Chapter 6
Under Pressure
“So, everyone’s got the plan?” Peine asked. He was wearing a black button down shirt, unbuttoned, a white t-shirt under it, black pants, sneakers. He had five pokeballs on his belt, a little belt for explosives and healing items, and a black mask.
“Ya, I know I got it at least,” Nagato said. Along with the clothes he had on this morning, he had a forest green cloak on, four pokeballs on his belt, a headband that was the same color as his cloak, and a pouch that held a chain in it.
“My plan is the same it is every time, destroy crap…” Jirou said unsatisfied, as if he wanted to do something more with the plan. He had three pokeballs on his belt and had two on each end of a pair of nunchaku.
Makai just stood there with a cold face. He was wearing a trench coat that concealed his pokeballs, but he was seen before with four. A golden claw was on his left hand, his long, black hair and ice cold skin making him to appear as a vampire.
Kertix, wearing his Cloaks uniform sat there quiet too, seeming to try to figure out what Peine wanted him to do.
“Don’t worry Kertix, I’ll help you out, we need each other for this plan, don’t cha know?” Obsidian said to Kertix. He was wearing a simple silver shirt with black pants. On his belt, there was his staff, compressed down to the size of a relay baton, four pokeballs, a pouch of medicine, a case filled with his exploding tags and poison tipped needles, and a silver mask.
“Now that we have all this down, I’ll start the aerial raid. Kertix, take Obsidian up with you. Makai and Nagato sneak into the slave cells and release them all. Jirou, you…well…I think you got your part down.” Peine then sent out his Honchkrow and Kertix sent out his Fearow. “See you guys when the missions over, and good luck to you all.” Peine, Kertix, and Obsidian flew off as Jirou, Makai, and Nagato ran to there assumed positions.
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Slave Auction, Newrock town
A Smog grunt stood at a podium up on a stage. Next to him were chained up humans wearing just rags. “OK, you’re next,” the grunt said as he pointed to a young girl at the age of about thirteen.
“NO, NOT MY BABY!!” A woman who seemed to be the girl’s mother screamed, trying to shield her daughter.
“Shut up slave,” the Smog grunt said as he whipped the woman and took away the crying girl, begging to stay with her mom.
Up ahead, Peine, Kertix, and Obsidian flew over the town. The screams could even be heard in the air. Peine had already dropped the repel bombs so Pokemon wouldn’t be an issue. He put on his mask and motioned Obsidian to do the same. Peine gave the mask to Obsidian so he could hide his face while facing Smog, but Peine gave no reason why he had to wear his. “I’ll signal everyone else, you two now do what you’re supposed to do.”
Kertix started to slowly descend, though the screams just started to get louder.
Obsidian started to get flashbacks of how he met Ella. She was originally a slave, offered to be a servant to any man willing to pay. Obsidian wanted to save the girl so he bought her out and freed her. Though she was free, she quickly joined Smog, being smitten with the boy and soon the two falling in love. Obsidian turned to Kertix with a worried, though determined look on his face. “Kertix, I can’t take this anymore, I’m starting this without you.”
“Obsidian, don’t have this happen again, we’ll be down soon enough”
“To late bud, see you when you land.” Obsidian jumped off and dove onto the stage, taking out his staff and extending it to its full length. He landed with a thump on the stage, the grunt just looking back only to see Obsidian’s staff knock him out cold in one swipe. The crowd of buyers, mainly other Smog grunts and rich businessmen ran, those with Pokemon sent them out, though a lot of them seemed unsure on who just did this act. Obsidian laid out his pokeballs and released his Pokemon. “Sel, Scar use whatever you guys like, take everyone out, no one will escape.” Without question, his Pokemon went out and started to just knock any human or Pokemon that came in there way with any attack that they wanted to use. “Eeve, Totoro, stay close to me, I don’t know what’s going to attack us.”
A grunt tried sneaking up behind Obsidian, his Raticate about to strike.
“Eeve, detect, Totoro, fire punch.”
“Raticate, hyper fang!!” The Raticate attacked with Eeve knocking the Pokemon off balance, Totoro hitting dead on with ice punch.
“Eeve, headbutt.” Eeve continued with her attacks and knocked out the grunt’s only Pokemon. The grunt tried to run away, though Obsidian’s staff gave him a dead leg, the grunt falling. “Where’s your leader?”
“Wouldn’t you like to know?”
“Tell me before I kill you!”
“Never…” The grunt then revealed a bomb attached to the back of his uniform. “You’ll never get anything out of me.
‘Dammit, if I kill the guy, everyone gets blown up, if I don’t the same thing happens.’
The grunt gave out a sickening laugh until a purple aura comes over him, seeming to keep him in place. “Obsidian, you’re welcome for saving your butt.” Nagato said. Him and Jirou were right by him, a Porygon2 by Jirou.
“Gon, disable the bomb.” Jirou’s Gon went inside the bomb, and as quick as it went in, it came out, the bomb turned off.
“Now, Oni, you can come out now,” Nagato said as his Haunter came out the grunt. “Now, where’s your boss?”
“Um…outskirt of the city, underground base. The entrance is a cave.”
“Good boy, now run along before I let my friends Jirou and Obsidian completely maul you.”
The grunt ran off in a hurry, trying to get as far away as possible.
“So, who’s going to take on this boss?”
“I will Nagato,” a voice said that came from above.
“You good with that Kertix?”
“Yup, I’m going to be fine, I already know where the cave is, you guys just take everyone out, OK?”
“Got it, don’t die on us,” Nagato said jokingly. “Obsidian, Jirou, let’s go help finish up that mess over there. Makai and Peine are getting the slaves out of the towns right now for the rest of the battle.” The three teens went together towards the main battlefield along with there respective Pokemon as Kertix flew towards the base.
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Kertix landed infront of the cave, returning his Fearow and walking into the base. “Dark in here, Chinchou, light it up.” Kertix sent out his Chinchou which acted as a guard along with being a little lamp. “Now, let’s find this boss.”
A girl who seemed to be about the age of 19 sat at a throne infront of many computer screens showing various points of the base. She had long blue hair and wore a black uniform with a blue cloak around it, the team Smog “S” was emblazed on the back.
“Mistress Neoko, someone has entered the base, do you want us to do anything about it. We already are having troubles in the towns due to a group of rebelling teens. We are guessing that one of them is the Smooth Demon while another is the Silver Phantom. I have no clue on how those two have met each other, but when the two most feared traitors are together, we know there’s trouble. The kid in the base is also thought to be a member of the Cloaks, so there must be some of them nearby too.”
“Don’t worry, seal the base and I’ll take on this kid, he shouldn’t be that tough anyway seeing his cloak color is yellow. His electric types will suffer to my beautiful Pokemon. Now, if you could excuse me, I’ll do something that you buffoons can’t do.” Neoko went through a passage way that lead right to Kertix and stood right infront of him. “Hey there cutie!”
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David's Confused Pokedad
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There's the girl Smog Admin we were looking at. I like that name.
Overall, a good description. I can just see the crazed look on the suicide bomber grunt's face.
-David (Keep it up!)
Overall, a good description. I can just see the crazed look on the suicide bomber grunt's face.
-David (Keep it up!)
David's Confused Pokedad
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Lucario EX? She's the only mod I've seen in awhile give comments here.
Keep up the good chapters, though.
P.S. 22 for mine is up. (Took about an hour.) -David
Keep up the good chapters, though.
P.S. 22 for mine is up. (Took about an hour.) -David
ashinto
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Chapter 7, Part 1
Kertix Alone!! VS Neoko
Smog base, Newrock/Minerock Towns
Kertix looked in a daze at the girl who just called to him. ‘Oh my God…she’s beautiful…I wonder what she’s doing here?’ “Umm…hi…” Kertix said as he blushed.
“Hey there!! What brings you down here?”
“Umm…I…um...got lost. Ya, I got lost and I’m trying to find a way back to my house from the outskirts of the forest. I thought there may be someone in here that could help me.”
“I can help you, follow me dear,” Neoko said as she took Kertix’s hand. ‘This is working perfectly, this boy’s so infatuated that he’ll basically tell me anything that I want him to!!’ Neoko lead Kertix to a room and closed the door. “This computer shows me all the houses in the area, could you please tell me which one is yours?”
‘Crap…lemme just lie about this one small thing…’ Kertix looked through the houses on the screens and pretended to be looking for the one that was his. Behind him, a vine crept up and wrapped around his leg, pulling the boy down. “Crap!! What was that?!”
“Foolish child, you think that I’ll fall for your lies. You just fell for a trap and you aren’t escaping, Ivysaur, use stunspore on the boy.” The Ivysaur that the vine belonged to came out of the shadows as its bulb got ready to burst yellow pollen that would paralyze the boy.
“Raichu, iron tail,” Kertix said as he tossed up his Raichu’s pokeball. The mouse Pokemon’s tail hardened to a dense metal midair and struck the Ivysaur in the head. “Chinchou, spark on Ivysaur now!!”
Neoko grabbed a pokeball within her cloak with eye blinking speed and sent out a Kirlia. “Kirlia, use confusion on Chinchou!!” As Chinchou was going in for the final blow on Ivysaur, Kirlia’s confusion held back the electric Pokemon while damaging it.
“Crap, Raichu, thunderbolt on the Kirlia, Chinchou, use psybeam on Ivysaur.”
“Ivysaur, send up your vine and use it as a lightning rod, distort his psybeam with your confusion Kirlia!!” Ivysaur sent his vine up and absorbed the lightning attack, feeling little pain as Kirlia got in the way with another one of her psychic-based attacks. “You’re being so predictable, why don’t you actually battle me with your all, you are a Cloak, aren’t you?”
‘She’s right, I can’t even take her out and she isn’t even trying either. Why can’t I use my full strength? What’s wrong with me?’
‘He’s confused, but I should’ve taken him out by now, this should’ve been over with, why can’t I attack him at my full?’
‘Maybe I found my…no, not at all, never with a person from Smog?’
‘Maybe he’s…no, why would I go for a Cloak?’
“Chinchou, signal beam, on the Kirlia!!”
‘Kirlia can’t distort it and the beam will also hurt Ivysaur too so I can’t block it, looks like I’m going to have to take this one.’
The beam hit Kirlia hard and the Pokemon was hit to the wall. “Now that they can’t stop it, Raichu, iron tail!!” Raichu went right for an iron tail against Ivysaur though the vine of the Pokemon stopped it.
“Sleep powder Ivysaur!!” The Ivysaur emitted a bluish-white powder, putting Raichu to sleep.
“Dangit, Raichu return Chinchou, signal beam again!!”
“Ivysaur use sludge bomb!” The two attacks collided and negated each other, causing a mini explosion.
“Lemme give you something that you can’t counter, ice beam Chinchou!!” Kertix’s Chinchou launched an ice beam at Ivysaur, hoping to end this skirmish with the attack.
“Silly boy, you are so cute when you mess up. Sunny day Ivysaur, melt the ice.” The room started to get real bright and sunny, the heat making the ice beam melt into water that fell on the floor.
“Use the water to start a surf attack Chinchou!!”
“Blast threw it with a solarbeam.” Chinchou started up surf but was then blasted to the wall with a huge solarbeam, knocking it out. ‘Two Pokemon down already, and I was ahead at a point too. Well, I think that this battle should go to the skies.’
“Fearow, let’s go, use aerial ace!” The no-miss attack hit Ivysaur for good damage as the plant Pokemon seemed to faint real soon.
“Ivysaur, while it’s near you, sleep powder.”
“Whirlwind, blow away the powder and Ivysaur.” The powder blown back at Ivysaur put the Pokemon to sleep as it was sent to its pokeball, sending out her Delcatty.
Kertix jumped on his Fearow and flew up a bit. ‘She can’t hurt me unless she switches to a flying type, which means that I’m in a perfect advantage.’
Neoko took out two pokeballs, one seeming to be empty and held that one towards her Delcatty. “Return Delcatty.”
“Use pursuit then follow up with a fury attack!!” Delcatty was hit hard with the pursuit attack, and being quickly pecked with fury attack, the cat Pokemon was quickly defeated.
“You’ll pay now, Altaria, use your dragon dance attack!!” Neoko said as she sent out her Altaria which used it’s dragon dance to quickly boost its stats. Neoko then got on her Altaria like Kertix did with his Fearow. “Dragon rush Altaria, take that Fearow out of the skies.” With blinding speed, Neoko and Altaria rushed towards Fearow and Kertix.
‘I got seconds, this better work.’ Kertix fell off of his Fearow and while in mid air, returned the Beak Pokemon before they were hit. As Kertix landed, he sent out his Luxio. “Luxio, use thunder fang.”
Luxio jumped up as the Spark Pokemon tried to bite Altaria with thunder.
“You’re too slow there Kertix, Altaria, solarbeam!!”
‘Dangit, I forgot that sunny day was used.’
Luxio not being able to maneuver while in air was struck by the solarbeam and knocked back to the ground. Luxio was able to stand up though and seemed to be willing to fight some more.
‘I won’t be able to fight her unless Luxio levitate up….duh why didn’t I just use this move in the first place??’ “Magnet rise Luxio.” Luxio started to float midair with full control of its movements.
“Smart move, but still not smart enough, Altaria, charge up.” Altaria started to glow a bright red color, as if it was gaining energy from around it.
“Now’s are chance, Luxio, Ice fang!!” Luxio ran towards Altaria and her owner as Altaria still glowing, didn’t seem like it was able to move. Luxio struck the Altaria with a super effective blow, though it seemed to be able to sustain the hit just enough to make it’s attack.
“Sky attack Altaria!! Silence that Luxio!!” Altaria released all of her energy at Luxio, flying right at it with a brutle tackle. Luxio was knocked to the ground, fainted.
“Luxio, return, Fearow, get back out here, use heat wave!!”
Fearow was sent back out and used heat wave, the attack’s power amplified by sunny day. It hit Altaria and knocked out the Pokemon.
“It seems that I win now, doesn’t it??” Kertix asked, petting Fearow on the head.
“No it doesn’t, guards!!”
The second part of this should be up soonish...idk when though. Also, I'm having a little contest for my readers (if I have any...), which will be a Create A Character contest, though I think I need permission for that (tell me if I'm wrong).
Kertix Alone!! VS Neoko
Smog base, Newrock/Minerock Towns
Kertix looked in a daze at the girl who just called to him. ‘Oh my God…she’s beautiful…I wonder what she’s doing here?’ “Umm…hi…” Kertix said as he blushed.
“Hey there!! What brings you down here?”
“Umm…I…um...got lost. Ya, I got lost and I’m trying to find a way back to my house from the outskirts of the forest. I thought there may be someone in here that could help me.”
“I can help you, follow me dear,” Neoko said as she took Kertix’s hand. ‘This is working perfectly, this boy’s so infatuated that he’ll basically tell me anything that I want him to!!’ Neoko lead Kertix to a room and closed the door. “This computer shows me all the houses in the area, could you please tell me which one is yours?”
‘Crap…lemme just lie about this one small thing…’ Kertix looked through the houses on the screens and pretended to be looking for the one that was his. Behind him, a vine crept up and wrapped around his leg, pulling the boy down. “Crap!! What was that?!”
“Foolish child, you think that I’ll fall for your lies. You just fell for a trap and you aren’t escaping, Ivysaur, use stunspore on the boy.” The Ivysaur that the vine belonged to came out of the shadows as its bulb got ready to burst yellow pollen that would paralyze the boy.
“Raichu, iron tail,” Kertix said as he tossed up his Raichu’s pokeball. The mouse Pokemon’s tail hardened to a dense metal midair and struck the Ivysaur in the head. “Chinchou, spark on Ivysaur now!!”
Neoko grabbed a pokeball within her cloak with eye blinking speed and sent out a Kirlia. “Kirlia, use confusion on Chinchou!!” As Chinchou was going in for the final blow on Ivysaur, Kirlia’s confusion held back the electric Pokemon while damaging it.
“Crap, Raichu, thunderbolt on the Kirlia, Chinchou, use psybeam on Ivysaur.”
“Ivysaur, send up your vine and use it as a lightning rod, distort his psybeam with your confusion Kirlia!!” Ivysaur sent his vine up and absorbed the lightning attack, feeling little pain as Kirlia got in the way with another one of her psychic-based attacks. “You’re being so predictable, why don’t you actually battle me with your all, you are a Cloak, aren’t you?”
‘She’s right, I can’t even take her out and she isn’t even trying either. Why can’t I use my full strength? What’s wrong with me?’
‘He’s confused, but I should’ve taken him out by now, this should’ve been over with, why can’t I attack him at my full?’
‘Maybe I found my…no, not at all, never with a person from Smog?’
‘Maybe he’s…no, why would I go for a Cloak?’
“Chinchou, signal beam, on the Kirlia!!”
‘Kirlia can’t distort it and the beam will also hurt Ivysaur too so I can’t block it, looks like I’m going to have to take this one.’
The beam hit Kirlia hard and the Pokemon was hit to the wall. “Now that they can’t stop it, Raichu, iron tail!!” Raichu went right for an iron tail against Ivysaur though the vine of the Pokemon stopped it.
“Sleep powder Ivysaur!!” The Ivysaur emitted a bluish-white powder, putting Raichu to sleep.
“Dangit, Raichu return Chinchou, signal beam again!!”
“Ivysaur use sludge bomb!” The two attacks collided and negated each other, causing a mini explosion.
“Lemme give you something that you can’t counter, ice beam Chinchou!!” Kertix’s Chinchou launched an ice beam at Ivysaur, hoping to end this skirmish with the attack.
“Silly boy, you are so cute when you mess up. Sunny day Ivysaur, melt the ice.” The room started to get real bright and sunny, the heat making the ice beam melt into water that fell on the floor.
“Use the water to start a surf attack Chinchou!!”
“Blast threw it with a solarbeam.” Chinchou started up surf but was then blasted to the wall with a huge solarbeam, knocking it out. ‘Two Pokemon down already, and I was ahead at a point too. Well, I think that this battle should go to the skies.’
“Fearow, let’s go, use aerial ace!” The no-miss attack hit Ivysaur for good damage as the plant Pokemon seemed to faint real soon.
“Ivysaur, while it’s near you, sleep powder.”
“Whirlwind, blow away the powder and Ivysaur.” The powder blown back at Ivysaur put the Pokemon to sleep as it was sent to its pokeball, sending out her Delcatty.
Kertix jumped on his Fearow and flew up a bit. ‘She can’t hurt me unless she switches to a flying type, which means that I’m in a perfect advantage.’
Neoko took out two pokeballs, one seeming to be empty and held that one towards her Delcatty. “Return Delcatty.”
“Use pursuit then follow up with a fury attack!!” Delcatty was hit hard with the pursuit attack, and being quickly pecked with fury attack, the cat Pokemon was quickly defeated.
“You’ll pay now, Altaria, use your dragon dance attack!!” Neoko said as she sent out her Altaria which used it’s dragon dance to quickly boost its stats. Neoko then got on her Altaria like Kertix did with his Fearow. “Dragon rush Altaria, take that Fearow out of the skies.” With blinding speed, Neoko and Altaria rushed towards Fearow and Kertix.
‘I got seconds, this better work.’ Kertix fell off of his Fearow and while in mid air, returned the Beak Pokemon before they were hit. As Kertix landed, he sent out his Luxio. “Luxio, use thunder fang.”
Luxio jumped up as the Spark Pokemon tried to bite Altaria with thunder.
“You’re too slow there Kertix, Altaria, solarbeam!!”
‘Dangit, I forgot that sunny day was used.’
Luxio not being able to maneuver while in air was struck by the solarbeam and knocked back to the ground. Luxio was able to stand up though and seemed to be willing to fight some more.
‘I won’t be able to fight her unless Luxio levitate up….duh why didn’t I just use this move in the first place??’ “Magnet rise Luxio.” Luxio started to float midair with full control of its movements.
“Smart move, but still not smart enough, Altaria, charge up.” Altaria started to glow a bright red color, as if it was gaining energy from around it.
“Now’s are chance, Luxio, Ice fang!!” Luxio ran towards Altaria and her owner as Altaria still glowing, didn’t seem like it was able to move. Luxio struck the Altaria with a super effective blow, though it seemed to be able to sustain the hit just enough to make it’s attack.
“Sky attack Altaria!! Silence that Luxio!!” Altaria released all of her energy at Luxio, flying right at it with a brutle tackle. Luxio was knocked to the ground, fainted.
“Luxio, return, Fearow, get back out here, use heat wave!!”
Fearow was sent back out and used heat wave, the attack’s power amplified by sunny day. It hit Altaria and knocked out the Pokemon.
“It seems that I win now, doesn’t it??” Kertix asked, petting Fearow on the head.
“No it doesn’t, guards!!”
The second part of this should be up soonish...idk when though. Also, I'm having a little contest for my readers (if I have any...), which will be a Create A Character contest, though I think I need permission for that (tell me if I'm wrong).
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Neoko then got on her Altaria like Kertix did with his Fearow. “Dragon rush Altaria, take that Fearow out of the skies.” With blinding speed, Neoko and Altaria rushed towards Fearow and Kertix.
‘I got seconds, this better work.’ Kertix fell off of his Fearow and while in mid air, returned the Beak Pokemon before they were hit. As Kertix landed, he sent out his Luxio. “Luxio, use thunder fang.” /////////////////////
Sounds like my Chapter 18, where Dragaea (Tecton) was returned in mid-flight, Derrick falls off, sends out
Wyvicious (Skag), but hops on it. Then the grunt on the Aerodactyl crashed. :lol:
I like this one. Nice battle feeling that I haven't seen from you in awhile. Awesome.
P.S. What's the contest?
-David
‘I got seconds, this better work.’ Kertix fell off of his Fearow and while in mid air, returned the Beak Pokemon before they were hit. As Kertix landed, he sent out his Luxio. “Luxio, use thunder fang.” /////////////////////
Sounds like my Chapter 18, where Dragaea (Tecton) was returned in mid-flight, Derrick falls off, sends out
Wyvicious (Skag), but hops on it. Then the grunt on the Aerodactyl crashed. :lol:
I like this one. Nice battle feeling that I haven't seen from you in awhile. Awesome.
P.S. What's the contest?
-David
ashinto
Active Member
I sent you the PM for the contest and thankyou. The battling before was bad cuz my RP was dead and that's where I practiced battling. It just started up again (kinda...) so I've been writing more battle scenes. Also, this is the only battle that is an actual battle. Keeping it like the Pokemon Manga Special, as you can see Pokemon know more than 4 moves (I already said that this would happen) and that if a Pokemon becomes unable to battle (KO'd, frozen, put asleep, badly poisoned/burnt) than that Pokemon can't battle anymore.
ashinto
Active Member
Now here's the contest I was talking about in Chp. 7, Pt. 1 (approved by LEX). Anyone from the 'gym is allowed to send me a character design, following this skeleton.
Character name:
Character Age:
Character Gender:
Character's Hometown:
Character's Team: (absolutely no legendaries whatsoever. any entrees with legendaries will be trashed immediately.)
Character's Appearance: (a picture is just fine)
Character's Personality:
Character's Description:
Other notes:
The character that I choose will be shown in Pokemon Naranja: TtEoaRA (dang I should've chosen a shorter name...)
The judges will be me and DCP who is also doing the same exact contest for his story.
-1 entry per-person, no spamming entrees, will stop taking entrees on 07/17/10, winner announced on the 18th-
Character name:
Character Age:
Character Gender:
Character's Hometown:
Character's Team: (absolutely no legendaries whatsoever. any entrees with legendaries will be trashed immediately.)
Character's Appearance: (a picture is just fine)
Character's Personality:
Character's Description:
Other notes:
The character that I choose will be shown in Pokemon Naranja: TtEoaRA (dang I should've chosen a shorter name...)
The judges will be me and DCP who is also doing the same exact contest for his story.
-1 entry per-person, no spamming entrees, will stop taking entrees on 07/17/10, winner announced on the 18th-