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Pokemon: Ruins - Fan Fic Cancelled

Y'know, at first I kept thinking this would be a really good fic if not for the Team M nonsense, now, I think it would be terrible otherwise.
I don't get it, but somehow reading this makes me feel like I'm missing out on something important.
You really did a good job showing the social side of Pokemon TCG. Also, I commend you on being able to poke fun at yourself. Good job, but the actual story is lacking. Might want to work on that.

Its meant to be an amusing story for Team M and friends, basically. Its not meant to be best seller quality, just something funny to read.
 
Two figures stood on the balcony of an unrecognizable building and looked out at the wasteland in front of them, at the charred buildings and fallen skyscrapers. There were only two inhabitants remaining in the deserted alleyways and roads that had but an hour ago been the prosperous Castaway Town…the town that used to house the headquarters for Team M East. A lone Starly flew through the blackened city, dodging the still falling debris and heading towards one of the figures. The bird made a 90 degree upwards turn about a foot away from the building and headed to the 18th floor. Once there, it landed on the already outstretched arm of one of the figures. The figure was wearing a Team E Elite uniform minus the helmet.
“Report,” The uniform figure commanded.
“Star Star Ly Starly Ly Star!” The bird chirped.
The uniformed figure turned to the man behind him
“Yami….what did it say?”
Yami’s eyes were glowing light blue. Within a few seconds, they faded back to normal.
“All of the Pokémon are returned, and the populace has been captured. The resistance group has been destroyed and its leader captured.”
The uniformed man made no response to acknowledged he was listening. He lowered his arm and the Starly flew away. The man reached for a cell phone and put it to his ear.
“This is Moza, the test was a success, time to shift our plan to the next gear.”


POKEMON RUINS COMING BACK?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!??!?!?!?!?!?!?!??!

Stay Tuned
 
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bad news guys....my computer went kaputz.....I'm reworking what i can, but also recnetly started college. No promises...but I will do what I can.
 
This is a post to announce that the Fan Fic: Pokemon: Ruins, is as of now cancelled.

There are several reasons for this, and this is not a quick decisions, but I’ll try to explain the best I can. The series originally started as a joke because the entire cast of characters were of members of Team M. I took current Pokemon drama and turned it into plot material. As the story progressed I got more and more into the story and began adopting the characters of other members into the story. However everyone in the story I knew either online or in real life. Team M disbanded around worlds last year, but the members mostly stayed friends. I tried to continue the story, but the drive really wasn’t there any more. My Eagle Scout, Senior Year, college, and other stuff made this equally hard. As time went on MANY of my friends and characters in this story quit the game. That also was a factor in my stopping the story. The real reason I was writing them was for the amusement of my friends. With most of the characters gone from the Pokemon community, and Team M really non-existent anymore, there wasn’t much reason to keep writing the stories.

So it is with this post that I must announce that there will be no more chapters of Pokemon Ruin. To be honest, I am amazed it got this far. The stories involved no planning whatsoever and I really did not have a plot set. I basically would start writing and roll with the ball. I can honestly say I have no idea what would have happened next, or what idea to I might have had. Most of the story, probably 3/4th revovled on events that happend in real life with the team members, and then used along with the plot. ALL of the gags were real gags, and the only thing that was really made up was the whole save the world plot. Even the team E/M/Rocket/R thing was based off of the team rivalries going on at the time.

Before all hope is lost however, I have CONSIDERED possibly re-taking the general story/plot, re-making it up with some drafting and planning, and maybe coming back with a new fan-fic in the future. That’s not a promise or guarantee, but it’s a possibility if in the near future I have the time, I may begin to write a new fan-fic.


Thanks for reading.

~Absoltrainer
 
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