rokman's "mario's pokemon adventure" comic! now featuring: Chapter Four!
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And there's a difference between Road Runner cartoon violence and those on Adult Swim...your point?
Keep it more towards RR, and not AS if you want to link it here...
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Keep it more towards RR, and not AS if you want to link it here...
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Bakufuun
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So, sprite comics have finally come to the Gym. Time for some crit.
First, get some better humor. This stuff is gross.
Next, change the color of the grass to a darker color. MS Paint green is not grass green. It's more like nuclear waste green.
Your speech bubble are ok I guess. Normally I would say have some kind of arrow to show whose talking but since Mario is the only one who talks I guess it's ok.
Not a bad start but it needs improvement if you want it to be great.
First, get some better humor. This stuff is gross.
Next, change the color of the grass to a darker color. MS Paint green is not grass green. It's more like nuclear waste green.
Your speech bubble are ok I guess. Normally I would say have some kind of arrow to show whose talking but since Mario is the only one who talks I guess it's ok.
Not a bad start but it needs improvement if you want it to be great.
"Disclaimer" or not, "mature audiences only" material is NOT appropriate for the 'gym...
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