Z zapydos New Member Jan 24, 2005 #1 how did ya like my first story? i know the chapters were short but other than that. ~zappy Last edited: Jan 24, 2005
Burninating_Torchic New Member Jan 24, 2005 #2 don't like it. The storyline is too naive and fast paced. It's like you're doing a twist on the Ruby/Sapphire storyline, except it takes like 2 mins to go from start to mid way point.
don't like it. The storyline is too naive and fast paced. It's like you're doing a twist on the Ruby/Sapphire storyline, except it takes like 2 mins to go from start to mid way point.
C Charizardian New Member Apr 25, 2005 #3 I thought it was good, but you need to extend your vocabulary and not use the same words over and over
I thought it was good, but you need to extend your vocabulary and not use the same words over and over