Pokémon TCG: Sword and Shield—Brilliant Stars

The Pokemon Chronicles

ensignmerlin

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WARNING THIS FAN-FIC IS RATED PG13 FOR EXTREME VIOLENCE AND POSSIBLY DISTURBING IDEALS.

Disclamer: I may not own pokemon but I own this story. If you use it without asking my permission I'm afraid ill just have to sue you.

Intro: I personally believe most pokemon storyline are too light to be taken seriously.
This story is one I am planning to make a game on.

Chapter 1: :unknown-t :unknown-h :unknown-e :unknown-d :unknown-r :unknown-e :unknown-a :unknown-m .

Ash looked up, then down, everything in sight was green. I know this dream he thought to himself. It happened every night no matter what he tried. He looked at his surrounding again. Knowing he would see the familair white walls outside his cell. The familair people in white lab coats running too and fro across the room. Ash braced himself for what he knew would be coming but he knew it would still hurt unless he woke up. Ash stuggled in his bed trying to escape the dream but he knew it was fruitless until the end of the dream. Suddenly a surge of pain ripped through Ash's body. He could see the purple lightning running through his body, his veins nearly popping out. Then the pain stopped and he saw The Face. The Face belonged to Giovonni. Ash woke up suddenly, drenched with sweat, and cursed himself for still being afraid.

Sorry its so short .

Let me know what you think :biggrin:
 
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dragonspy900 said:
No FanFics that is Pg-13

Fine, though its not any worse than whats on many pg things.
Its only rated pg13 because of the violence and possible gore.
Just to let you people know, I know many 10 year olds who watch south park.
 
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ensignmerlin said:
Just to let you people know, I know many 10 year olds who watch south park.
Then their parents are morons.
We are not.
Keep it PG or it will be deleted.
 
PokePop said:
Then their parents are morons.
We are not.
Keep it PG or it will be deleted.

I would just like to say that the 10 year-old im speaking of is my step-brother.
If your calling my parents stupid...

Shiny squrtle said:
good but short

thanks, this is my first fanfic.

anyway for the next chapter.

Chapter 2: :unknown-t :unknown-h :unknown-e :unknown-l :unknown-a :unknown-b

Ash pulled the sheets off him and examined his surroundings. The familiar dusty dirt floor, caving walls, and stagent puddles were welcome compaired to his dreams. I'd better get going Ash thought as he headed out the door cautously [sorry about the spelling] keeping an eye out for the soldiers in black.
*space*
"your late" a rough gravely voice said as Ash entered the room. "sorry Dr.Oak" Ash replied. "just dont make a habit of it!" the doctor snapped back. "now today lets see if you can do a squrlte." Oak said in a disturbing, yet happy, voice. Dr.Oak then went to the back of the lab and started to dig around boxes until he found a small red and white ball. He threw the ball to the ground as it burst revealing a small blue turtle creature. suddenly Ash's skin turned blue as well while a shell grew out of his back. Within seconds Ash was now a squrtle. "very good." Oak said calmly. Next he pulled out a Charmander and Ash became a charmander. "very good" Oak said again. Next he took out both the squrtle and the charmander and watched to see what Ash would become. Ash's skin twisted and melted, growing claws and then sucking them back in, a shell popping in and out of his back, until at last the torrent of his skin came to rest. Ash was purple with a hard bony back, about halfway to being a shell, covered with scales. He had minature claws growing from his 3 fingers and his swilry tale was covered in fire. "veeeeery interesting." Oak said as he put both the Charmander and squrtle back in the balls.


Thats it for now im tired and i might not get another chance till next week.

Till then just wonder what other things i'll throw in :wink:
 
ensignmerlin said:
I would just like to say that the 10 year-old im speaking of is my step-brother.
If your calling my parents stupid...


The point is keep it clean. But it was a pretty good first chapters.
 
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