The Tales of Raichu Half of Chapter 3 up

[moza]

INTRO



There is a planet, far away, where there are only pokemon.
On that planet, they act much like humans, they share our emotions,
fight for what they believe, and seek the common good, but
some wish to hurt others, so the PokePolice were formed to put down
these "Criminals". This is the story of Raichu, a rookie cop who never
brakes regulations gets teamed up with a partner who is an emotionally
unstable PokePoliceman.


CHAPTER 1
"Umm, sir, where is my parter?"asked the puzzled Raichu.
"He should be in soon, he is always late, but he is a fine cop, you are lucky to get a partner like him." the Chief replied.
*Knock**Knock*
"Come in, come in Exeggutor, I was just talking to your new partner"the Chief said to Exeggutor, who walked in rather quietly.
"I don't want a partner, I already told you that, especially not some rookie like this kid."Exeggutor said in an angry tone of voice.
"Frankly, you don't have a choice, so get used to it!"replied the Chief.
Exeggutor walked out and slammed the door while swearing under his breath.
"Don't worry about him."said another cop who walked in to give some papers to the Chief, but Raichu was still nervous about his first day on the force. Even though he was top in his class, he still didn't have his "Sea Legs" so to speak. After all, simulations aren't the real thing.

 

[Burninating_Torchic]

Please tell me someone else hacked your account to write this. Please. Because no offense, but I would have expected...better from you.
For one thing, the "chapter" is way to short. You read my fic, you know the length of an average chapter.
Secondly, paragraph spacing. Each time a new person talks, its a new line. Also, it gets kind of confusing if you don't put a "____ said." type of thing after each peice of dialogue. Those are really the only things I have to say about what you've written so far, considering you haven't written much.

 

[moza]

It's late ok, and I can't think stuff off the top of my head, I didn't plan this ahead of time, just off my head 'cause I didn't have much else to do, but I will edit.

Also, if anyone else sees any problems, lmk as soon as possible.

 

[Lakak]

At first he accidently named it "The tails of Raichu"

 

[moza]

CHAPTER 2


"Just because we are partners doesn't mean I have to like you", Exeggutor said to the rookie Raichuas they walked to the Briefings Room,"or that I have to talk to you, or notice you. Keep that in mind."

When they reached the top floor, they walked towards 2 big wooden doors. Exeggutor talked over the intercom, and the doors slowly opened. Chief Arcanine was waiting for them to give them their first asignment.
"I know you two may not like eachother, but you job is to make peace in this world. Never let your relationship interfere with the mission at hand. Never. Now, the Arbok family has been smuggling Energy Root illegally, and we need to bust them before we get into a drug war. I want you two to go there, capture Arbok, and bring him back alive. Exeggutor, I expect you to show Rai the firearms we use and how to use them, those training guns are barely better than dart guns. Here are the briefings." Arcanine pushed a folder toward the duo with his nose. There was no more to be said, so Exeggutor and Raichu left the room and went to basement to get ready for the mission. On the way down, Raichu asked if we would be the only ones going. Exeggutor said no, it was a highly covert mission. Any more pokemon could endanger the mission. "Here we are, kid,",said Exeggutor"come on, don't be shy.'
Raichu followed Exegg towards a yellow door, and Exegg opened it. A Mawile popped out of no where and gestured the duo to follow him. He led them to what seemed to be a weapons cache. Exegg handed Rai an odd shaped ring. "You know what that is?", asked Exegg.
"Not really."Raichu replied.
"What did they teach you at the academy? How to walk? It's a Type Amplifier.You never heard of one?"
Raichu shook his head.
"You slip your hand through it, and let it tighten."
Raichu did as he was told, but when he put it on, it didn't feel like it was there.
"It shoots a short amplified beam of whatever type of pokeon uses it. Now since you put it on, no one else can put it on or else it will explode. It's a handy little mechenism.
"Ummm, how will you put yours on?" Raichu asked.
"For us pokemon that don't have fancy hands, we slip it over where ever we can. I, for example, have 3, 1 for each of my heads."
"You can also fire beams of different types, but they won't be nearly as strong," Exeggutor added.
Mawile signaled them over to another lab.
As the followed, Raichu was full of questions, but afraid to ask many because of how grumpy Exeggutor seemed to be, but he couldn't help asking one.
"How will we capture Arbok? Since he is a poison type, wouldn't he be immune to Sleep Powder?"
"The room Mawile is taking us to is the Chemical Lab. Don't worry, we got strong stuff, he'll go down as long as we can get close enough to inject it".




Please let me know if you see any spelling mistakes or grammer mistakes, I phail at English.

 

[Kempley05]

And I thought you were kidding me when you said you'ld write this!

 

[moza]

CHAPTER 3

"Sooo, where are we going again?" Raichu asked Exeggutor.
"Burned out warehouse on the other side of the city, that should be where Arbok is."
Raichu couldn't help but asking "Whats the game plan?"
"We go in, take out whoever is in our way until we get to Arbok, inject him with the Super Sleep Powder, and return him alive to HQ." Exeggutor replied, seemingly still angry at the Chief for giving him a parter.
He added "Just follow my lead and you will be fine" before they stopped near the warehous.
"Thanks Fearow for the lift" Exegg said as he waved to the flying pokemon,"Now Rai, remember, just follow my lead, don't try to be a hero, and don't shoot me. The warehouse is not far from here, so let's get walking."
Raichu was smart enough to see why they didn't fly right to the warehouse, Arbok probably would've seen Fearow land on his front lawn, so Exegg just wanted to land close instead of up front.

When they arrived, the entire warehouse seemed empty and burned, like there was nothing there.
"Hmm, probably underground," Raichu said,"How will we get down there?"
"We take the elevator inside of course, but it is probably hidden somewhere, it may just be a trap door."
Exeggutor explained.

They did indeed find a trap door, and it let into an underground lab. Rai and Exegg were careful not to make any noise, because the lab was swarming with gaurds, and the slightest sound would tip them to the intruders. They sneakily found a way past the gaurds into a door which led to a long hallway. Raichu spotted a camera and gave it a little shock so they wouldn't be seen. Halfway down the hallway looking for Arboks living quaters, two pokemon, a Crawdaunt and Charmander, jumped out of a door.
"Don't take another step or it'll be the last thing you ever do!" Charmander shouted.
Raichu noticed that there was something odd about these pokemon, they seemed to glimmer in the light, but Raichu was more concerned about his life at that moment.
"Drop your weapons!" Crawdaunt said to the duo.
Exeggutor set his weapon to Psychic and fired an invisible beam of light toward Raichu. Exegg could now speak to Raichu with his mind! "You take the Crawdaunt, and I'll take the Charmander, Ready, GO!"
The team jumped to opposite walls and fired beams of energy at the gaurds. Raichu easily took down Crawduant in a single hit, but Charmander wasn't going down easily, so both Rai and Exegg set their Amplifier to water and sprayed Charmander with a volley of water. Charmander went down, and the two decided to heal themselves before they went on.
"Just set it to Grass, target a wound, and fire. If it targets your DNA, it will heal it" Exeggutor said.
Raichu followed his directions, and it worked. They were off again to find Arbok.

Will add more later, need more time.