Recent content by CheeseEX

eh i like wining more but if i lsoe o well i ahd fun and thats the point of being there

............................no just no

the person above me took 24th in worlds of 2011

did you rush this one? theres more mistakes then normal other then that good job:thumb:

chap 13 mistake(s) Heather then pulled out her P-DA again and started to study the region map in detail. She zoom in on the Poke Spot and studied the topography. "zoom" should be "zoomed" With that Heather and Andrea recalled their Pokémon and the trio continued the trek up the passage.”...

no porblem remember quality of quantity:thumb:

Blast it Ein, why the heck do pay these idiots? ^lol what? toehr then that those 2 are fine nice chapters

prolouge spelling mistakes The womand mustered her courage. watched the Pokemon gather 'roudn why she played chap 1 She had dark blue eyes and black hair. Not surprising as she wasn't Jewel's biological daughter chap 3 preview Being that this one had yet toinvolve, he guessed that...

agreed nice chapter.....deoxys got sick went insane turned into nothingness ethan died....... incase someone else hasnt figured out what this means i wont say it but,......what about the other one? anyway quest is it really nessacary to qoute the post?XD just comment on it and copy paste a...

hey no rush man i understand how righting a fan fiction is from my (several and sadly failed) atempts...... so good luck:thumb:

oooooooooooooooooooo cliff hanger im so suprised:rolleyes: anyway “Xatu, hand on,” said Katsuro as he quickly held his breath and dove under water ^ is that souposed to be hang? anyway great stroy 5/5:thumb:

make that 5(6?) now find this interesting so far keep it up

"OK, so out of this whole conversation, I understand nothing so far," Lucario muttered while shaking his head in annoyance, "Let's take things from the beginning, shall we?" best part of that last one btw im back and that was ALOT of reading to chatch up on >_> other then that...

^me has a avatar that doesnt match his user name

^this good chapter the flashback was a good thought 5/5:thumb: