comments for-The adventures of red blue and green- comments.

[Charizardian]

How do U like my first fic here? I think it is a little childish, but it has great detail.

 

[Charizardian]

C'mon I need comments it is my first fic I need to see how I'm doing!

 

[zapydos]

i thaught it was verry good! i think the part whenthe bird keeper and Red faught the shiny pidgy was like the Super Smash Bros. Melee's event match; Bounty Hunters.

 

[Charizardian]

Yeah, it is sorta like that.

 

[Charizardian]

So does no one see this or does this just stink and no one can put it nicely.