Pokémon TCG: Sword and Shield—Brilliant Stars

haydens 2nd place br report

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left4gengar

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heyyhyyyyyyyy every one so i was at the torney and i decide to play reshiphlosion we have 5 rounds tp 4 so heres my report

rnd 1 me vs colter decker w/ megazord
so i go first and he gets dead draw and i get fast setup so i won
1/0
rnd 2 me vs kyle green span w/megazord
read rnd 1
2/0 round 3 me vs jack pitcher w/ reshiphlosion
i get set up faster so i win
3/0
rnd 4 me vs quinn cox with zps
i dont like this game because i got donked
3/1
rnd 5 me vs connor progin w/ zps :(((((( i dont want to get donked
so i start cleffa reshi but he mulls 3 times and i get another reshi off that so i dont get donked :)))) so pretty easy he gets dead draw so i win
3/1
i whent first in swiss because i got paired up vs a 4/o so yay
top four vs colter w/ megazord
game 1 read rnd 1
game 2 he get set up fast
game 3 read game 1
top 2 vs koichi ninshida w/ reshiphlosion
game 1 i fail to get set up game 2 i get set up and kill the first reshi ram
game 3 read game 1
so i get second yayayayaayyayya so yay
hope u like it
 
Honestly I hated your report. You made many grammatical errors. I'm not sure if that was intentional or not btu my advice is to fix it. Also add detail into the report not just "See rnd1"

Even though this is pokegym you dont have to talk like a N3wB CuZ Ten us B Can-Fuzzled... Hope you liked my critique.
 
apparently grammar and punctuation isn't as important :p

just let the kid be a kid, good job, hayden. win next week ;P or go undefeated with katie nbd
 
Hayden!!! Great job!!! I'm proud of you for writing this; we need to get Ian to do the same thing! Come to Seattle and visit!!!!
 
ProfessorJacob7 said:
^He's also 11 and not very technologically savvy.
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Funny, he's not technologically savvy, yet he knows a lot of short hand (rnd, u, w/, 4/0, mulls) and emoticons, which I'm sure they don't teach in school, but he didn't write one complete sentence, which I know they do. If you want to defend him, be honest at least. FN's critique was right on, just a bit too honest and had no tact.

My problem with this is that we watch the dumbing down of our nation and no one cares. I remember wanting to write well when I was his age. Kids nowadays don't care. So, they make a conscience decision to not give a crap, then get pushed to go to college by society. They take government loans they can never pay back for an education they don't finish, then people get on the internet and defend them. Personally, I think that is part of the problem. If these kids aren't held responsible by adults, they won't do it themselves. When kids come to league, I won't do their math for them, I make them learn. I don't read their cards for them, I make them do it. When they don't understand it, I don't give them the answer, I make them try to comprehend it. No one is asking him to use perfect grammar, but it should at least be on par with his education level. I'm not sure how you associate that with technological proficiency.

gallade said:
if you don't got haters your doing it wrong.
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^ This is kinda my point.

Congrats on the performance Hayden. Take the criticism for what its worth, the report is lackluster.
 
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