Just a Hop, Skip and a Jump

[Firegreen511]

Hopip
HP: 40
{G} Basic Pokemon

{C} Hop 10
{G} Double Leaf: Place 1 damage counter on each defending Pokemon.

W:{R}
R: {F} -30
RC:

Skiploom
HP: 50
{G} Stage 1 Pokemon

{C} Skip 20
{G} Double Powder: Each defending Pokemon is now Poisoned, and Asleep.

W:{R}
R:{F}-30
RC:

Jumpluff
HP: 70
{G} Stage 2 Pokemon

{C} Jump 30
{G} Cotton Punches: Flip a coin if heads, place 3 damage counter on each defending Pokemon, if tails each defending Pokemon is now Asleep, Burned and Poisoned.

W:{R}
R:{F}-30
RC:

 

[shiftrymaster68]

You have to start spelling Defending right. I'll fix em...

Hoppip
Basic (G) Pokemon
40hp

(C) Hop(10)

(G) Double Leaf
Put 1 damage counter on both Defending Pokemon.

Weakness(R)
Resistance(W)
Retreat Cost

Skiploom
Stage 1 (G) Pokemon Evolves from Hoppip
60hp

(C) Skip(20)

(G) Double Spore
Both Defending Pokemon are now Poisoned and Asleep.

Weakness(R)
Resistance(F)
Retreat Cost

Jumpluff
Stage 2 (G) Pokemon Evolves from Skiploom
80hp

(C) Jump(30)

(G) Cotton Punches
Flip a coin. If heads, put 3 damage counters on both Defending Pokemon. If tails, both Defending Pokemon are now Poisoned, Burned, and Asleep.

Weakness(R)
Resistance(F)
Retreat Cost

Is it both or each on the second attack's grammer?

 

[Ky00ber the III]

Double Spore is a bit too powerful ain't it? But otherwise, nice cards. :thumb:

 

[Metal Master]

Yeah, but the HP is low, and with no body(like TRR), they would be trampled. Maggy kills them as well.

 

[Noah121]

The correct grammar is:

<Damage and/or effect...> each Defending Pokémon.

(examples)
*Put 2 damage counters on each Defending Pokémon.

*Each Defending Pokémon is now Poisoned.

 

[lunatone_solrock]

Okay, dual resistance isn't acceptable for a Basic and Stage 1. I even doubt it for a normal Stage 2.
Double Powder is broken.
Shiftrymaster68's card is a very good fix.
That's how your cards should be.

 

[Firegreen511]

i gave them the dual resistance, since they have such low HP

 

[Ky00ber the III]

The jumpluff have always had low HP. It's totlly acceptable. Dual resistance for non-dragons/non dual-types are not. But I don't see any dual resistances now.