my 1st card take a look \/

[dave123]

http://img35.picoodle.com/img/img35/9/7/12/f_pkmncardelem_2f55a60.png

it is my 1st one so i would like feedback and comment on whether it is good or not

 

[pichu bros. rox]

You misspelled burnt (it's burned) and there's no period at the end of the last sentence =/. Besides that nice card.

 

[ensignmerlin]

Use Gill Sans instead of comic sans... It's more accurate.

 

[dude2207]

You misspelled burnt (it's burned) and there's no period at the end of the last sentence =/. Besides that nice card.

and you have to make one side of the coin noting
it`s cheting the way your doing it

 

[pikachu rules]

ill take a lifgtning infernape w/ no discard

 

[Rew]

It ins't cheating that he has paralyze and burn, two options. Look at Amphy ex, either 70 or 40 and paralysis.

 

[Blassari]

Cool Fusion, but the card sucks!

 

[meditite rox]

Why is it a Stage 2?
Try giving it a :metal: resistance and a Dual Type.

 

[Rew]

I guess it could evolve from either Magmortar or Electrivire, you messed up on the picture.