My first fake card : Jumpluff ex

[Kenshin]

It is my first fake card, Jumpluff ex, lots of errors are on it, but, hope you like it!!

 

[shiftrymaster68]

Alright, looks good for your first fake, but like you said, there are little places that need to be corrected...

Jumpluff ex
Stage 2 (G) Pokemon Eolves from Skiploom
100hp

Poke-Body-Cotton Shield
As long as Jumpluff ex is on your Bench, reduce all damage done to Jumpluff ex by 40(after applying Weakness and Resistance)(excluding Pokemon ex).

(C) Energy Beam(20+)
This attack does 20 plus 10 more damage for each type of Basic Energy in play.

Weakness(R)
Resistance(W)(F)
Retreat Cost

There, all better.

 

[lunatone_solrock]

I love it! The picture is very nice.
But here's my fix:

Jumpluff ex (G) 100HP
Stage 2 Pokemon
Evolves from Skiploom

Poke-Body-Cotton Shield
As long as Jumpluff ex is benched, all damage done to any of your Active Pokémon is reduced by 40 (after applying weakness and resistance)(excluding Pokemon-ex and baby Pokémon).

(C) Energy Beam 20+
This attack does 20 plus 10 more damage for each type of Basic Energy in play.

Weakness (R)
Resistance (W)(F)
Retreat Cost

Okay, the Poke-Body is not texted properly. It should be like the one above.
The fist attack is very low-damage. Like what shiftrymaster said, 20 plus 10 more is fine. The cost is good. A tradition of Jumpluffs to have 1 energy cost. This also applied to retreat cost.
Other than that, that's cool.
Hope to see ya again. :thumb:

 

[Charizardian]

Oh yeah! dat thing is da ! 1 active and 1 benched should be tough to beat!

 

[Kenshin]

thanks for your fixes

I wrote Poke Power cuz it afects the active pokemon, and not Jumpluff ex for it self.

i'm going to do another fake today at night.

 

[Spike]

I think you should make the limit to 1. 3 jumpluff ex on the bench = O_O

 

[Burninating_Torchic]

LunaSol, you did one thing wrong, otherwise your fix was correct.

Poke-Body-Cotton Shield
As long as Jumpluff ex is benched,

Wrong Answer. It should be, as shiftrymaster said(though he got other parts of the card wrong),

As long as Jumpluff ex is on your bench,