Pokémon TCG: Sword and Shield—Brilliant Stars

Pokemon Mystery Dungeon Sara's Rescue Team

pikachugirl1990

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Chapter 1 the start of my rescue team
Once upon a time, I woke up as a Pikachu in a far away land where I was being greeted by a Pokemon. And this Pokemon is Piplup and he said hey I haven't seen you here before! What's your name? My name is Sara. Piplup became my friend and we were talking about forming a Rescue Team. I said sure Piplup! We should start right now!!!!! We went into town where a group of Pokemon signing up to be rescue teams. I said to the team leader: may I form a rescue team? The team leader is Charizard and he smiled and said, sure you can. The team name should be Team PokePals. So that night, Piplup showed me a new house and he said it's for you Sara and that is our team base. The next morning, I woke up and a Wingull brought me some mail. Piplup, I think someone is asking us to do a rescue of their lost friend named Mudkip and the client is Charmander. So I thought it over and I said Piplup, we had to go save Mudkip in the Great Canyon area. Piplup and I went to the liltte shop that is oiwned by Wartortle. Wartortle handed out some things incudling apples and Pecha Scarfes.

Chapter 2 The first Rescue
Piplup and I wandered in the Great Canyon untill we got to floor 12 but on the way we have been ambushed by a group of Starly! Piplup was hurt in the battle but I didn't give up and I used thundershock on the group of Starly!!!!! I had an oran berry in my bag and I handed it to Piplup and he was fully healed. We befriend a Pachirisu and he became a new member of Team PokePals. We fainily made it to Floor 12 and we rescued Mudkip. Charmander thanked me and Piplup and Charmander became a new member of Team PokePals.

Chapter 3
The Meeting with Mewtwo and Zapdos
The next day was snowing and Piplup had to stay in my cottage by the warm fire. Charmander told Piplup, Mewtwo wants us to meet him on top of Mt. Thunder and he wants us to talk to him about Sara's transformation into Pikachu. Zapdos will also be there to find out the truth about Sara's past. The snow was falling very hard and we had to bundle up. Our friend, Torchic will escort us to Mt. Thunder. Piplup caught a cold so he can't come with me to see Mewtwo. Torchic, Charmander, and I went to Mt. Tunder and we were in a battle with a group of Pidgey.
 
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Its ok so far... My one problem with the story is that it is a copy of a story from a video game. It is probably a nice story to play through as one of the characters, but to read it could get boring in the future. Try to find a way to include a little more oumph into it. Don't just say what happened; say how it happened.
 
Whoa, whoa, whoa, WHOA! Slow down a bit, will ya? It's all in one paragraph! Space it out a little more, add some details... so, your Chapter 1 should look a little like this:

Chapter 1 - The Start of My Rescue Team

Once upon a time, I woke up on a beach. I looked around me, looking to see where I was, fore I went to sleep in my bed. Then, suddenly, one of those Pokemon, it's was Piplup, walked on to the beach! And, the funny thing was was that I was around the same height as it!

"Hey! Pikachu! Are you all right?" Piplup asked as it drew closer.

"Pikachu? PIKACHU?!?!? Where am I? Why did you call me a Pikachu? I'm a HUMAN! Not a Pokemon!" I cried out in confusion.

"Human? No... you look like a normal Pikachu to me!"

I looked in the water, to see...

A Pikachu's face, staring up at me!

"What the- I'm a Pikachu! That is WIERD!"

"Yes, okay, now, I was thinking..."

"Get away from me, you freak!"

"Huh? YOU'RE the one who's claiming to be human!"

"Well, I am! And I don't want to have anything to do with you Pokemon!"

"C'mon... I'll try to help you get back!"

"How?"

"By asking people!"

"Fine..."

"Okay, why don't we start a Rescue Team? It will allow us to meet many different people... surely one of them will know how to get you human again!"

"Rescue Team? What's that?"

"Well, we form a Team and rescue other Pokemon."

"Okay..."

"Hey, by the way, what's your name?" Piplup asked.

"Sara." I told Piplup.

"Okay. Now, let's go to the town square and ask Charizard if we can make one!"

So, we left the beach, and went to the town sqare.

"Hey! Charizard!" Piplup shouted, while knocking on a door. A Charizard answered.

"Yes?" It said.

"Could we make a Rescue Team called Team PokePals?" Piplup asked.

"Sure."

"Okay!"

And so, our Resuce Team PokePals started!

"Well, Sara, I think we should go to sleep now. We'll have to save someone tomorrow!" Piplup told me.

I nodded.

The next morning, I woke up, and a Wingull flew in to our Team Base. It dropped a letter. The letter read...

Client: Charmander
Problem: Mudkip went missing! Please save Mudkip!
Area: Grand Canyon
Reward: $100

"We have to save Mudkip, Sara!" Piplup said as soon as he was done reading the letter.

"Oh, if we must."

So, we went to the shop owned by Wartortle, and bought a few items, including Oran Berries, Pecha Scarves, and Apples.

Now, we were all set to go on our first Rescue Mission!


The reason why I made Sara not want to be a Pokemon, go on a Rescue Mission, etc. was because, if you woke up one day and you were a Pikachu in an unfamiliar place and you didn't know what happened and someone asked you to risk you "lives" (well, you can't die in Pokemon, but oh well), would you say "YES! I'd LOVE to go! It'll be the adventure of a life time," now would you?
 
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