Pokémon TCG: Sword and Shield—Brilliant Stars

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In Chapter 30 it tells about the Team Ozone member stealing the bluprints for the one machine, which, later in the story, they modify and use to kill the mother Lugia. At my home I have chapter 42 writen, but I couldn't get onto a computer with use of a floppy disk at the library. Aslo, I'm going to be moving into my new house on February 1st and the internet should be hooked up by the 10th. Hopfully, if everything goes to plan, I can post new chapters as soon as I type them out.

Here's a little scopp for what to expect in future chapters:

Chris and Monica have a home of there own.

Here's something I plan to do, but it's too far into the story for me to have typed out yet:

Chris has a huge suprise planned for Monica during the Silver Confrence. This will effect the rest of the story and the lives of both the charictors.
 
I added a lot of chapters to my story. Chapter 35 is very sad, so if you're not very good with death I sugest you don't read it.
 
Looking forward to the big battle! Oh and btw I see you have a habbit os saying seen instead of saw. So yeah but otherwise it's realy good! Good tricks in the battles they are getting better and better! :wink: :thumb:
 
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I'm glad you like it. About the seen instead of saw, I have a southern accent, and it tends to leak into my writing. Wich ain't too much of a problem.
 
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