Pokémon TCG: Sword and Shield—Brilliant Stars

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I now have all of Chapter 5 up. I'm afraid it will be a while for my to put chapter 6 up because I havn't had much time to write it down on paper. I only have 3 pages wrote and chapter 6 was 10 pages long, but I don't plan for the chapter to be that long.
 
Most of Chapter 6 is now up. I'm trying to cut back on the lenght of the Chatpers so I can have a whole chapter up all at once sometimes.
 
Oh yeah nice and a little more about Monica and Chris.Pretty cool but why not a little more competition for Monica and Chris?Not just like Flamethrower and knock out.Maybe something like they get acptured and have to fight there way through 100 Ozone members!Or something like that.Also LOTS of spelling errors other then that awesome MewMAster!
 
I started my own web site a few days ago and I've been using most of my free time making it nice so I havn't had time for my fan fic, but I did put my fan fic onto my site, I think it looks better there than here.
 
I'm in the middle of moving right now and stuff so it'll be a while befor I can get some more chapters up. I have chapter 12 writen, I just don't have the time to type them on the computer.
 
I was able to copy a few chapters I wrote out on the Notepad on my computer at home and save them to a floppy disk. I can only access the internet at the library so far, but this way when I visit I can copy and paste the new chapters.
 
I have 30 chapters writen down on a flopy disk, I might have the time to post all of them next time I'm at the library.
 
I added chapters 13-26, but I left at the part where the winner of the last battle is chosen to keep everyone is suspance, I'll finish all that I have to post after Christmas.
 
Wow who won?I am thinking from the other chapters that Monica won but I think Chris deserves to win.He has put alot of training into Charmander and started WAYWAYWAY long before Monica ever started training.And Charmander and Chris have a bond unlike Monica and her Charizard.Although I was dissapointed when Chris said his strongest pokemon was Dragonite.So it's true a Dragonite in general is much stronger then a Charizard I still think Charizard would be on a much higher level.I think these battles are getting a bit old though...Taking one or 2 hits and then knocked out.Also howbout some tricks ya know like Ash always does and creates a miracle and wins.Like once he used Bayleef's vines to jump it would be cool to see Chris or Monica and other people use new tricks.
 
Good idea, sense I like the normal battles best when I get in one I tend to forget about what others would like. During the battle with Demon (the leader in the Orange League) I'll try to remember to add a few tricks. I have a bad memory so it'll be hard to remember, well I think. I don't remember if I have a bad memory.
 
I put up the rest of Chapter 26. You can now know who won. Also I'm typing a copy of my favorite book: Freak the Mighty, so I won't have time for my fan fic for the rest of the month, sorry.
 
Well I just read chapters 27-30 and they were pretty good.Though I have to say the battles were boring.And the one trick with Flamethrower against Sandstorm is and old trick.Also chapter 0 I think the title was Team Ozone returns but I didn't read anything about Ozone.A few mistakes here and there but overall pretty good.Infact chapter 30 has inspired me to right my own fiction.An actual good one unlike my others.
 
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