Birth of a legend, GROUNCHAR.

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  1. xatu828

    xatu828 New Member

    CHAPTER 1.

    IN A PLACE CALLED OKANNAD CITY IN THE UTAMAH REIGON, A YOUNG BOY NAMED KRAKO WAS ABOUT TO CHOOSE A STARTER POKE'MON FOR HIS JOURNEY.
    "WELL KRAKO, I WILL SHOW YOU THE POKE'MON THAT YOU HAVE A CHOICE OF. BLAZEKEIN,TREECO, OR PIKACHU."PROFESSER BRAVO SAID.''I WANT BLAZEKEIN."KRAKO SAID. ASH WALKS IN. "OH HI ASH HERE IS THE POKE'MON I SAVED FOR YOU". PROFESSER BRAVO SAID. "THANKS.'' ASH SAID. ''HEY ASH, WANT TO TRAVEL WITH ME?'' KRAKO SAID AS THEY LEFT THE LAB. ''SHURE." ASH SAID. AS THE DUO ENTERED A MEADOW AN ABSOL APPEARED. "PIKACHU USE THUNDER!" ASH YELLED AS PIKACHU JUMPED FORWARD. "PI-KA-CHUUUUUUUUUUU!" PIKACH CRYED. ABSOL WAS KOED WITH ONE ATTAK. POKE'BALL GO! THE POKE'BALL TILTED FROM ONE SIDE TO THE OTHER OVER AND OVER AND SUDDENLY IT STOPPED MOVING. "YEAH, I CAUGHT ABSOL!" ASH SAID. "ABSOL DOESEN'T HAVE ANY POKE'DEX DATA." ASH SAID."HEY, WANNA TRADE?" KRAKO SAID TO ASH. AFTER A LONG WALK THEY REACHED SALCANDOR CITY. OKAY THEN KRAKO, "I SEE A POKEMON CENTER." ASH SAID. THEY ENERED THE CENTER AND FOUND A TRADING STATION. "OKAY, LETS TRADE." THEY PLACED THEIR BALLS IN THE BALL SLOTS. ASH RECEIVED THE SWAMPERT KRAKO CAPTURED EARLIER, WHILE KRAKO RECEIVED ABSOL. JUST THEN, SOME GIRL APPROACHES ASH. "SO, YOUR ASH HUH?" SHE SAID. "WHO ARE YOU?" ASH SAID. "PREPARE FOR TROUBLE," "MAKE IT DOUBLE." JESSE AND JAMES SAID. "GO, TORKOAL!" RESTAN SAID. "MY NAME IS RESTAN."RESTAN SAID. "USE FLAMETHROWER!" RESTAN COMMANDED. "LOOKS LIKE TEAM ROKETS BLASTING OFF AGAIN." TEAM ROKET SAID.
     
    Last edited: Dec 8, 2003
  2. Cooltrainer Aaron

    Cooltrainer Aaron New Member

    I think the moderators will want to have a talk with you. Were supposed to have larger chapters than this.
     
  3. xatu828

    xatu828 New Member

    it was not able to be finished.
     
  4. SD PokeMom

    SD PokeMom Mod Supervisor Staff Member

    If the chapter isn't finished, then why post it? There isn't enough of the story for anyone to comment on or give suggestions about; a chapter needs to be more than five sentences long.

    Also, please do not post in all caps, as it is 1) the message board equivalent of shouting and 2) very difficult to read.

    Please be sure you've read the 'Gym rules (stickied at the top of each forum) AND the Fan Fiction rules, at the top of the forum...and also look at some of the other fics, to get an idea of what people are looking for in a good fan fic. Thank you for your understanding and cooperation.

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