Pokémon TCG: Sword and Shield—Brilliant Stars

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I love it! Only one complaint, it wast a little inconsistent on the technological part. They didn't know about poke balls, or navs, or dex, but they did know about batteries, water pipes, electricity. It was just a little mixed up. Again, I love it and it truly is amazing :thumb::clap:
 
Did you really have to raise a topic long dorment? Enjoy the old topics but please do not raise the dead.

OK Got the hang of this now. Carry on....
 
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BJJ763 said:
Did you really have to raise a topic long dorment? Enjoy the old topics but please do not raise the dead.

OK Got the hang of this now. Carry on....
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thanx Brian I appreciate it

Story is shaping up well please make the gaps smaller PLEASE!!!!!

BLiZz
 
BJJ763 said:
Did you really have to raise a topic long dorment? Enjoy the old topics but please do not raise the dead.

OK Got the hang of this now. Carry on....
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with all due respect, this is the thread for the comments on the story. this isn't any small story, if you look at it. it's already 132 single-spaced pages typed in my ODF, and there's still a LOT more to go. 'mom had at the time decided comments should be in a separate thread so as to not break the flow of this and other stories in the section, just because nobody had wanted to comment it in a while doesn't mean that it should be broken and the comments put in the main thread again, breaking the flow of the story. i myself had been using this thread as sort of a directors commentary section, but i moved that to my blog

EDIT: Oh, wait, I might have read your statement wrong. If you had already gotten the purpose of the thread and rescinded your statement then I apoplogize for dragging it out :redface:

Xenoz Blaid said:
I love it! Only one complaint, it wast a little inconsistent on the technological part. They didn't know about poke balls, or navs, or dex, but they did know about batteries, water pipes, electricity. It was just a little mixed up. Again, I love it and it truly is amazing :thumb::clap:
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there's a reason why, there has been some mention of it so far and I'll go into it more thoroughly later :thumb:

BLiZzArD said:
thanx Brian I appreciate it

Story is shaping up well please make the gaps smaller PLEASE!!!!!

BLiZz
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working on it!!! :lol: actually if it hadnt taken so freaking LONG to get my wireless working on my notebook last night I would have had a new part up last night
 
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OOOHHHHH! The mod dug up the old thread.:tongue: Great story BTW, can't wait to see the next chapter.:thumb:
 
as of right now, next post will be the start of Chapter 14. I have Chapters 14-18 completely planned, after that maybe 3 or 4 chapters to finish, im not sure exactly. haven't completely planned out the ending yet.
 
no, unless i made a mistake in typing it and referred to it as Gregory's sword specifically. for all of part 2, he's had two swords: Gregory's Sword (which he has returned now), and the sword he got from the Scyther Samurai at the end of part 1
 
oh i forgot about that sword:redface::rolleyes: thanks

ps i just finished reading whats up there cant wait for more:thumb:
 
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