flymer #2 in flavea

[me-is-human]

flymer lvl.20 sychic::fire:/flying

flymer looks like charmander&starly cobined​

:fire::fire::colorlessburning peck 20
the defending pokemon is now burned
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:fire::fire::fire:flame thrower 50
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:fire:sychic:sleeping flame 30
the defending pokemon is now asleep
__________________________________________________ ____________
weakness: water,psychic,lightning
resistance:
retreat cost: colorless​

copy wrighted

 

[Lakak]

Ok, put Sleeping Flame on the top of attacks, due to its lowest amount of energy. Then take out psychic out of the type, and leave it fire. Its weaknesses should only be Water and Lightning (if even that...)

 

[SD PokeMom]

me-is-human: you don't have the right to 'ban' anyone from 'your' threads. if you post to the board, anyone who wishes to and who follows the board rules is allowed to post in reply.

if all you want are posts about how awesome your cards are, if you can't take constructive criticism of your card's wording/grammar/structure, perhaps you should re-think posting them here.

i am editing the 'ban' out of your OP. do NOT edit it back in; if you do so i will lock or delete your thread. if you have a problem with something another member has posted, REPORT the post via the report (triangle w/exclamation point) button under their name.

as i said before in your other threads: constructive criticism ONLY. continued bashing of members will result in infraction points and/or temporary bans for ALL parties involved.

'mom

 

[charmander rox]

Okay, analyzing the card from the top:
1. Flymer needs to be capitalyzed.
2. Where is the HP?
3. Flying is technically not a type. Where does [P] come from?
4. Burning Peck and Flamethrower take too much Energy for an evolving basic.
5. Sleeping Flame... doesn't seem to fit Starlyand Charmandedr. Besides, basics don't have three attacks.
6. Where does a [P] Weakness come in? How much damage is added with it?
7. Copyrighted???

Hope that helps.

 

[me-is-human]

edited verson1.0
FLYMERlvl.20 :fire:/flying hp60
flymer looks like charmander&starly combined



:fire::colorlessburning peck 20
the defending is now burned
____________________________________________________________
:fire::fire:sleeping flame 30
the defending pokemon is now asleep
____________________________________________________________
weakness::water::lightning+10
resistance::fighting:-20
retreat cost::colorless:colorless

my friend helped edit this pokemon

 

[Absoltrainer]

I'm not even going to bother with this one. See my responses on your 2 other threads in here for about the same thing that I would say here.