Chansey LV.46 100HP [C]
BASIC
[A Chansey is walking through town. The curvature of the street makes it look as if Chansey is walking on a fairly large, but not as large as the Earth, sphere. Chansey is on a road, surrounded by a Pokémon Center and a Gym.]
[C] Easter Eggs
Flip a coin for each Pokémon in play. Remove 3 damage counters from each of your Pokémon that got heads. Put 1 damage counter on each of your opponent's Pokémon that got tails.
[C][C] Doubleslap 30x
Flip 2 coins. This attack does 30 damage times the number of heads.
[C][C][C] Double Edge 100
Chansey does 50 damage to itself.
CHANSEY enjoy healing the sick with the nutritious egg they carry in their pouch.
W - [F]+20
R -
RC - [C][C][C]
Picture - 10. Love it!
Top Stats - 8. The level seems a bit high, since PT Chansey is 20 levels lower. It is considerably better than PT Chansey, though. Maybe Level 38 or 40?
Attacks - 40. Everything fine.
Poké - Powers/Bodies - 0 (must have a Poké Power/Body). You must have forgotten this.
Bottom Stats - 7. Retreat Cost seems high.
Flavor Text - 10
Grammar - 5. "Put 1 damage counter on each of your opponent's Pokémon that got tails."
So if I have a Charmander (which has a tail), it takes a damage counter, but if I have a Snorlax it doesn't take a damage counter since it doesn't have a tail?
Appearance - 0. Everything fine.
TOTAL - 80/100
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Chansey LV.47 HP100 [C]
BASIC
Picture: The Chansey is sitting in the woods, with a Weedle on her lap, eating the egg in her hands.
[Poké-POWER] Give Egg
Once during your turn (before you attack), if Chansey is your Active Pokémon, you may remove 2 damage counters from 1 of your Benched Pokémon. This power can't be used if Chansey is affected by a Special Condition.
[.] Flip Over 20
If Happiny is not under Chansey, Chansey does 20 damage to itself.
[C][C][C] Egg Bombard 60
Flip a coin. If heads, remove 3 damage counters from Chansey. If tails, remove all Special Conditions from Chansey.
Chansey is a very kind POKéMON who likes giving sick or injured POKéMON her egg.
W:[F]+20
R:
RC:[C][C][C]
Picture - 10. Good.
Top Stats - 9. Level seems a bit high
Attacks - 35. Flip Over seems pretty pointless, I doubt I would ever use it.
Poké - Powers/Bodies - 10 (must have a Poké Power/Body). Good.
Bottom Stats - 8. Retreat Cost is high.
Flavor Text - 10
Grammar - 7. Is there a way for you to capitalize the accented é? Chansey in the flavor text should be capitalized.
Appearance - -1. I prefer [ ] to [.].
Total: 88/100.
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Chansey Lv.50 HP100 (Colorless; Basic)
Picture: Chansey is in a forest, sharing its egg with forest Pokémon like Caterpie and Rattata.
Poké-POWER: Share Egg: Once during your turn (before your attack), you may discard an Energy card from Chansey. If you do, remove up to 5 damage counters from one of your Pokémon (excluding any Chansey). Chansey can't use this Power if it is affected by a Special Condition.
*: Softboiled: Remove 3 damage counters from each of your Pokémon.
CCC: Strange Egg (100-): Discard all Energy attached to Chansey. Then, flip a coin until you get heads. This attack does 100 damage minus 20 damage for each tails.
Chansey is highly compassionate. It will share its egg with sick or injured Pokémon to make them feel better.
Weakness: {F}+20 Resistance: None Retreat Cost: 3
Picture - 10. Good.
Top Stats - 7. Level is high.
Attacks - 35. Softboiled is too good.
Poké - Powers/Bodies - 10 (must have a Poké Power/Body)
Bottom Stats - 8. Retreat Cost is high.
Flavor Text - 10. Fine.
Grammar - 5. Chansey in the flavor text should be capitalized. The bottom stats are very hard to understand
Appearance - - 15. VERY hard to read. [C][C][C] should replace CCC. [ ] is better than *. Atatcks should not be in parentheses. {F} should be [F]. None in resistance should be [ ]. Put lines between your attacks and stats. Look at the previous posts for correct formatting.
Total: 70/100.
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Chansey Lv 51 -100HP- [C]
Basic Pokémon
Picture: An alternate-color (green, not pink) Chansey stands in a grassy meadow under blue, cloudless skies. Its arms are spread wide in a protective stance as a Happiny, two Budew, a Pichu, and a Growlithe hide behind it. Chansey is facing off against an angry Houndoom.
[Poké-Body] Selfless Compassion
At any time in between turns, move 1 damage counter from 1 of your other Pokémon to Chansey.
[C][C] Softboiled
Remove 5 damage counters from Chansey.
[C][C][C] Egg Storm 20x
Choose a number up to the number of Pokémon in play and flip that many coins. For each head, this attack does 20 damage. For each tails, this attack does 20 damage to Chansey.
W- [F]+20
R-
RC- [C][C][C]
Flavor Text: Chansey selflessly helps others in need, healing them and defending them with its eggs.
Picture - 10. Awesome idea.
Top Stats - 8. Level seems high.
Attacks - 35. Egg Storm is a suicide move. Try 30 damage per head and 20 to Chansey per tail.
Poké - Powers/Bodies - 10 (must have a Poké Power/Body). Good
Bottom Stats - 8. Retreat Cost is high.
Flavor Text - 10.
Grammar - 9. Chansey in flavor text should be capitalized.
Appearance - -1. Pet Peeve: Don't use "selflessly" as a word twice. Maybe in the flavor text change it to "happily".
Total: 89/100.
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Ohhh, a mini-contest. :thumb:
Chansey Lv.38 (C) 100HP
Basic Pokemon
Poke-power: Healing Wish
You may remove up to 4 damage counters from to each of your Pokemon when Chansey is knocked out. If Happiny is anywhere under Chansey then remove all damage counters from each of your Pokemon instead.
Poke-body: Maximum Happiness
Any Pokemon evolved from this Pokemon can use Healing Wish and Super Eggsplosion. This poke-body can't be prevented.
(C)(C)(C) Super Eggsplosion 100
Put 5 damage counters on Chansey and put 2 damage counters on each benched Pokemon.
Weakness: (F)+30
Resistance: None
Retreat Cost: (C)(C)
Legend has it that this charitable creature brings happiness to anyone who captures it.
Picture - 10. If you designed that, nice job! If not, make sure you have permission to post it.
Top Stats - 10
Attacks - 35. Chansey would never attack your own benched Pokemon.
Poké - Powers/Bodies - 5 (must have a Poké Power/Body). Healing Wish is crazily good.
Bottom Stats - 10
Flavor Text - 10
Grammar - 5. "Any Pokemon evolved from this Pokemon". That doesn't make sense. Try "all Evolutions of Chansey". "from to each of your Pokemon". That doesn't make sense. The "B" and "P" in Poke - power and Poke - body should be capitalized.
Appearance - -5. Separate your attacks and stats. (C) should be [C].
Total: 80/100.
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Chansey Lv. 43 200HP [C]
Basic Pokémon
PokéBody: Weak-Spot.
Double all damage done to Chansey (after applying weakness and resistance).
[C] Light Healing
Flip 3 coins. remove 1 damage counter from 1 of your Pokémon in play for each heads.
________________________
Weakness:[F]x2
Resistance:
Retreat Cost:[C]
Picture - 0. No picture.
Top Stats - 9. HP is a little high, try 180.
Attacks - 30. Pointless attack.
Poké - Powers/Bodies - 10 (must have a Poké Power/Body). Cool idea.
Bottom Stats - 6. Retreat cost is low. If it has a weakness x2 to fighting, Machamp will destroy it.
Flavor Text - 0. Where is it?
Grammar - 6. "remove" should have a capital R. PokéBody should be Poké - Body or Poké - BODY.
Appearance - 0. Everything fine.
TOTAL: 61/100.