Pokémon TCG: Sword and Shield—Brilliant Stars

Pokemon: Elemental Legacies

moza, sorry about using your full name, but there is going to be a second jeff later in the story, and I needed some way to tell you apart. Then I remembered that your full name was different...soo...
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Chapter 7: The Second Badge

"Oh! So you're in Hanaero Town!" Professor Pine exclaimed, smiling. The group had called him on the videophone in the Pokemon Center. "I guess that means you defeated Spencer in Treemor Town?"
"Yeah, I did." Bobby answered.
"Good job!" Professor Pine commended him. "So, have you been catching any more Pokemon?"
"Yeah!" Tatianna replied. "Dan, Bobby, and Matt have each caught two, and me, Elissa, and Michael have each caught one."
"Excellent, excellent." Professor Pine said in response. "Have any of your Pokemon evolved?"
"Hittao did!" Matt replied. "It turned into a ghost type!"
"Ah yes, I see that here in the Pokedex data you sent me." He paused for a moment, looking at another computer screen in his office. "Oh, and I see Dan's Magvae evolved into a Magoon, as well!"
"It did?" Bobby asked. "When?"
"When I was capturing that Windock," Dan answered, "Behind the rock at the Iwyark Cave enterance."
"So that's what you were hiding." Michael commented. "Seems like a stupid thing to hide. What reason would you have to hide that?"
"Well, I wanted to reveal it in a battle," Dan admitted, "But Professor Pine brought it up before I had a chance."
"Hah, hah! Sorry!" Professor Pine apologized, chuckling slightly. "Here, you guys probably don't know what it looks like, so I'll send you a picture." The screen flashed, and the video feed from the office dissapeared, revealing a picture of a Pokemon on a blue background. The Pokemon appeared to be a white, slightly oval sphere with a small brownish tail sticking out its back. It appeared to be made of some sort of silky, woven substance. The Pokemon, like Magvae, had no face.
"What a weird looking Pokemon." Elissa said.
"Alright well, I must be going now." Professor Pine said as his face reappeared on the screen.
"Bye Dad!" Tatianna responded.
"Wait." Michael interrupted. "We have one more question we need to ask you."
"What's that?" Professor Pine inquired.
"We were ambushed by two Team Rocket members." Michael replied. "They reacted strangely when they saw that we were carrying our Pokeballs on these staves. Why?"
"Uh...I'm sorry, I have important matters that I have to tend to immediately. Sorry!" Professor Pine said, reaching out and pressing a button on his computer. The screen went black, showing that Professor Pine had cut the connection.
"He's hiding something." Michael said, despite the fact that it was obvious.
"Well, I think we should get some sleep now." Matt suggested. "It's pretty late."
"Yeah." Dan agreed. "I talked to one of the nurses, they said that there are beds upstairs here in the Pokemon Center that trainers can use for free."
"Alright." Bobby said. The group walked toward the escalator, when Elissa noticed that Michael wasn't with them.
"Are you coming?" Elissa asked.
"Nah, I have to do some research." Michael replied. "I'll be up later, or something."
"Goodnight then!" Tatianna shouted to him as the rest of the group went upstairs.

"Where's Michael?" Elissa asked. The group had congregated around the Pokemon Gym's entrance, and had been waiting for Michael, whom noone had seen since last night.
"Sorry I'm late!" Michael yelled, running toward the group. He paused to catch his breath, then continued. "Just doing a little research."
"Did you get any sleep at all?" Dan asked, seeing the look of exhaustion on Michael's face.
"Yeah, a few hours." Michael replied. "Anyways, this Gym is mine." He walked into the Gym, the group staying outdoors and talking.
"Aww...I wanted to show off Spiritao in this Gym." Matt said with a frown.
"What's gotten into him?" Bobby wondered aloud. "Volunteering for something doesn't seem like him."
"Maybe he like, just wants to train his Pokemon some more." Tatianna suggested.
"Whatever. I guess we should go watch." Bobby decided, and the group went inside.

By the time the group entered the aviary-esque Gym, Michael had already beaten the first Gym Trainer, and was starting his battle with the second.
"I hope you're more of a challenge than that last loser." Michael taunted.
"Just you watch!" The Gym Trainer, a birdkeeper, exclaimed. "Go, Coparrot!" The birdkeeper threw a Pokeball into the air, revealing a mostly green parrot with some teal and blue wings on its feathers. It's belly was a yellow green, and its white face hosted a rather large beak.
"Rawk! Go Coparrot! Go Coparrot!" The Pokemon squawked, mimicking what its owner had said.
"Please. Is that the best you can do?" Michael asked mockingly. "Go, Obsidim!" He released the rock type Pokemon from its Pokeball, ready to battle.
"Is it just me, or does that thing look stronger than when he caught it?" Bobby asked the rest of the group.
"Well, we were kinda far away when he caught it." Matt replied. "Maybe it always looked like that."
"Obsidim, Rock Throw!" Michael commanded. The small Pokemon spun around, flinging a pebble from its arm at the Coparrot. The pebble grew bigger in the air, hitting the flying type with incredible force, knocking it out in one shot.
"No! Coparrot!" The trainer exclaimed, returning the Pokemon to its Pokeball. "Fine...avenge him, my second Coparrot!" He released another Coparrot, which was almost instantly bombarded by another Rock Throw. It wasn't quite knocked out, but it was close.
"Rock might be Super Effective against Flying, but it shouldn't do that much damage!" Bobby exclaimed. "He has been training!"
"Coparrot, Mimic!" The Gym Trainer ordered. The parrot Pokemon flapped its wings, causing rocks to appear from nowhere, flying at the Obsidim and hitting it, barely doing any damage.
"No use." Michael said. "Obsidim, finish it off." The Obsidim threw another rock at the parrot, knocking it out.
"Hmph." The birdkeeper said, returning the Pokemon to its Pokeball. "Very well. You may proceed to the third Gym Trainer."

"I'd ask you to put up a fight, but if you're anything like the last two, that's impossible." Michael taunted, sending out his Obsidim.
"I'll shut you up." The trainer said, sending out a Coparrot.
"Rawk! Shut you up! Rawk!" The Coparrot mimicked.
"Obsidim, shut this bird up." Michael ordered. "Rock Throw!" Obsidim once again launched a giant rock at its opponent, hitting the Coparrot. The wounds on the bird were obvious, but it looked like it could still put up a good fight.
"Coparrot may be my only Pokemon, but it's super strong!" The bird keeper explained. "Coparrot, Mimic!" Just as the previous trainer's had done, the Coparrot flapped its wings, causing a rock to fly at Obsidim out of nowhere.
"Just keep using Rock Throw!" Michael ordered. Obsidim and the Coparrot continued exchanging blows, but eventually, the Coparrot was defeated.
"Very well." The trainer said, returning his bird Pokemon. "The Gym Leader is waiting for you."

"Congratulations on making it to me." The Gym Leader, an oddly familiar looking boy about Michael's age said, clapping his hands. "Please heal your Pokemon on the machine in the corner.
"Hey...I recognize you." Michael said as he placed his Pokeballs on the machine. "You were in a picture in Spencer's house in Treemor...you're his brother, aren't you?"
"Indeed I am." The Leader replied as Michael walked back over, Pokemon healed and ready to fight. "My name is Jefferson, leader of the Hanaero Town Gym."
"Let's start this." Michael said, not interested in chatting. "Go, Obsidim!"
"Let's go, Coparrot!" Jefferson responded.
"Darn, I was hoping you'd have something different for a change." Michael said in mock-dissapointment. "Oh well. Obsidim, Rock Throw!" The small black Pokemon threw a rock at the bird, damaging it less than it had the previous ones, but still quite a bit.
"Coparrot, follow his moves closely!" Jefferson ordered. The Coparrot responded to this command by using a mimic attack, hurling a rock at the Obsidim and apparently doing just as much damage as had been done to it.
"But my move was a super effective hit! Your mimic shouldn't have been that strong!" Michael said, a slightly dismayed look on his face. "It doesn't matter, my Obsidim's still stronger! Keep attacking!" Obsidim continued to throw rocks at the bird, and the Coparrot continued to throw rocks back. Soon, both Pokemon were very worn out, and neither looked like it could take much more.
"Coparrot, let's finish this! Quick Attack!" Jefferson exclaimed. Instead of waiting to mimic Obsidim's moves as it had before, this time the Coparrot swooped in first, hitting Obsidim with its wing.
"Nice try." Michael said, smirking. "But you forget that normal type moves like Quick Attack aren't very effective against Obsidim." Obsidim retaliated by slamming its rocky hand into the nearby Coparrot, knocking it to the ground and knocking it out.
"You fought well, Coparrot...return!" Jefferson exclaimed. "Let's see how you like this! Go, Windock!" The familiar tornado Pokemon appeared from its Pokeball, rocks swirling and ready to fight.
"Finally, something other than an annoying little bird. Well, if one of these was able to beat up Dan, I would hope that it puts up a good fight." Michael commented. "Then again, Dan is a bit of a weakling."
"Hey! I heard that!" Dan yelled from across the Gym.
"Don't care." Michal replied. "Obsidim, Rock Throw!" The Obsidim launched a rock at the Windock, but much to Michael's surprise, the rock just got sucked into the tornado and began swirling around with the others.
"Hah...how do you like that?" Jefferson asked. "That's Windock's special ability! It absorbs rock type attacks!"
"That's not good." Michael said as the Windock sent a blast of wind hurling towards the extremely weakened Obsidim, easily knocking it out.
"Hoho!" Jefferson laughed. "Looks like your Obsidim wasn't very strong after being thrashed by my 'annoying little bird'!"
"Yes, well..." Michael replied, "I've got a bird of my own, and I'm sure you'll find it quite annoying...when it knocks out your Windock." He grabbed the Pokeball from the top of his staff, throwing it out into the ring. "Go, Nightture!"
"Nightture?" Bobby asked. "What's a...?" He was interrupted by the crooked squawk of a vulture. There, standing in front of Michael, was a somewhat large vulture that resembled Vuldusk. The main difference was that it now had three glowing feathers on top of its head instead of one.
"What is that thing?!" Dan asked from the other side of the Gym.
"Looks like I'm better at keeping evolutions secret than you." Michael shouted back to Dan. He looked back to see the expression on Dan's face, and noticed that Dan and Tatianna were holding hands. Though this was a harmless act, a mixed look of surprise, annoyance, and anger grew on Michael's face, as if it brought back some bad memory long forgotten.
"Argh...Nightture, let's finish this quickly!" He exclaimed, directing his rage toward the battle. The vulture Pokemon swooped forward and flapped its wings, hitting the Windock with a blast of dark energy.
"Windock, Rock Throw!" Jefferson exclaimed. The Windock spun around, flinging a rock out and striking the bird.
"Nightture, Pursuit!" Michael ordered. Once again the Nightture swooped forward, attacking the Windock with darkness.
"Just keep using Rock Throw! It's super effective!" Jefferson commanded. The Windock threw another rock, once again hitting the bird.
"It doesn't matter if it's super effective." Michael said. "My Nightture's way stronger than your pathetic Windock." True to Michael's word, the Nightture was hardly injured at all. It once again flew forward and struck the Windock, and its attacks were beginning to take a toll on the tornado Pokemon.
"Fine, let's try something else!" Jefferson decided. "Windock, rollout!" The Windock spun forward at a speed much faster than it normally would, rolling over the Nightture.
"That attack will get stronger each time! Let's finish him off before then!" Michael exclaimed. Nightture once again attacked the Windock with darkness. The Windock responded by rolling over the Nightture again, but with more power this time. Nightture attacked the Windock again, and was greeted by another spinning attack.
"Now! Windock! You can finish it off!" Jefferson exclaimed. The Windock charged forward, but its accuracy had decreased from spinning so much. It ran in the wrong direction, missing Nightture completely, and allowing the dark Pokemon an attack from behind.
"Nightture, finish it!" Michael shouted. Nightture zoomed forward at an faster speed, spinning in the air and launching a blast of darkness at the weakened Windock, finishing it off with a critical hit.
"Very good." Jefferson said, returning Windock and applauding Michael. He walked over to Michael, handing him a peice of metal shaped like an airplane. "You've earned the Aero Badge." He said.
"Whatever." Michael replied.
"And here, two more things." Jefferson said, reaching into his pocket and pulling out two discs. "Here is the Hidden Machine, Flash. You may think an Eyequus' light can light up any cave, but you're wrong. Some caves' darkness can only be penetrated by the light of Flash. And here is the Technical Machine, Aerial Ace. It will always strike the opponent." He handed Michael the two discs, and Michael began to walk to the other side of the gym.
"Uh...bye!" Bobby yelled, as Michael left the Gym without a word and the group began to follow him.

"Well then." Bobby said as the group gathered outside. "Our next destination is Poisawa Town. To get there we have to go through Doshibog Swamp."
"Eww, a swamp." Tatianna said in disgust. "Swamps are all like, dirty and icky and stuff."
"Don't worry, I'll make sure you don't get dirty." Dan told Tatianna.
"Gag me." Michael said in response to this, walking away from the group and towards the swamp.
"Hey, wait up!" Matt shouted as the group followed him and began the next leg of their journey.
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Anyways, you can expect 3-4 days between chapters now - my artist had an extremely busy week and only got one peice of art to me, so he's dragging behind a bit, and I'd like to try and get him caught up.
 
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Sorry for the delay, but Snakes on a Plane and school both take priority over writing. XD...anyways, this chapter would've been longer, but I had to leave it as a cliffhanger ;x
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Chapter 8: Battle in Poisawa! Team Rocket Strikes Again!

"Ewww...this place is icky!" Tatianna complained as the group walked along the narrow path in the center of the Doshibog Swamp. The revolting waters of the swamp bubbled up around them, and the air quality was less than satisfactory.
"What did you expect?" Michael asked rhetorically. "It's a swamp, not a spa."
"Eww, and we're going to have to walk back this way after we visit Poisawa Town." Elissa complained.
"Why's that?" Bobby asked.
"Poisawa Town has no roads leading out of it to the North, East, or West." Dan replied, "Just Swamp."
"Well, I guess its not that bad." Bobby said, trying to see the bright side of things. "It could be worse." Almost on cue, it began to rain, drenching the group in water almost as dirty as the swamps around their feet.
"Had to bring up a cliche, didn't you." Michael said in a flat tone.
"Ooh, what's that thing there?" Tatianna asked, pointing to a small pink creature not too far down the road. She ran over to it, pulling out her Pokedex.
"Poishare. The Poison Rabbit Pokemon." The Pokedex informed. "Poishare appear to be covered in fluffy fur, but it is actually toxic spores. Most domesticated Poishares have this toxic coat removed, revealing their less fluffy white coat of hair."
"It's so cute!" Tatianna squealed. "I'm going to like, catch it! Go, Calffin!" The dolphin Pokemon appeared, hopping up and down on its flipper. Noticing the water of the swamp, Calffin hopped in, despite its murkiness.
"Poiss!" The fluffy pink rabbit hissed. It had a rather round pink body with a white cottonball tail, four small feet, and a little round head. Its white head appeared to be bald and not covered in spores like the rest of its body. Its beady red eyes glared at Tatianna, as it had lost track of the Pokemon the was supposedly attacking it.
"Calffin, go for like, its head!" Tatianna called out. "It's like, not poisonous!" Calffin leaped out of the swamp, ramming its own head into the Poishare's. It leaped back into the water, leaving the Poishare hardly harmed at all.
"It's head is like, too small...there's no way to get in a good hit without like, touching those spores." Tatianna thought aloud. "Unless...Calffin, Water Gun!" The dolphin Pokemon leaped out of the murky water again, this time spraying the rabbit with a blast of water. The rabbit's fur became soaked, and it shook around wildly, trying to shake off the water. As it did this, spores began scattering everywhere, until Poishare's white coat was revealed.
"It's like, not poisonous any more, Calffin!" Tatianna yelled. "Let's finish it off!" Calffin began hopping from one side of the swamp to the other, striking the Poishare every time as it went. The Poishare eventually fell to the ground, defeated. Tatianna threw a Pokeball at the weakened Pokemon, capturing it with ease.
"Calff!" Calffin cheered, clapping its flippers and hopping up and down on its fin. Suddenly, it began to glow and grow larger, its appearance changing.
"Calffin?" Tatianna wondered, looking at her Pokedex.
"Congratulations." The Pokedex recited. "Your Calffin has evolved into Dolphice." The glow died down, revealing a larger dolphinlike Pokemon. Its nose had become more bottle shaped and its fins had grown larger as well. Sharp designs of a brighter blue shade now adorned the Pokemon, and an even brighter blue scarlike shape adorned its right eye.
"Wow!" Tatianna exclaimed, running up and hugging her newly evolved Dolphice.
"Congratulations, Tati!" Dan shouted, walking over to her and hugging her.
"Oh, even got a nickname for her now, eh?" Michael asked under his breath so noone could hear him.
"Hey, look!" Elissa exclaimed, pointing out in the distance. "It looks like the town isn't very far away!"
"Let's go!" Bobby declared, running forward toward the town.

The group neared the town, the buildings in sight. Suddenly, Michael fell to the ground, choking.
"Michael? What's wrong?" Tatianna asked as the group turned and saw him. The air around him had become rather dense and lavender shaded, and even appeared to have taken form. Michael reached for the top Pokeball on his staff, releasing his Nightture.
"Nighttureeeee!" The Pokemon cawed. It bat its wings around Michael, blowing the dense air away.
"What I don't get is, wouldn't air that you could see be kinda heavy and fall to the ground?" Matt wondered.
"It's not air." Michael replied, pulling out his Pokedex. Sure enough, the Pokedex responded to the small cloud of poisonous air.
"Hazoud. The Smog Pokemon." The Pokedex explained. "Hazoud are known to choke victims to death by surrounding their head and making them breath in its poisonous gas." The light purple cloud turned around and revealed two glowing yellow evil eyes and a small snickering mouth.
"Hazzz..." The Pokemon snickered as it hovered in the air.
"Let's catch it, Nightture." Michael decided.
"Are you sure you're well enough?" Elissa asked.
"I'm fine." Michael replied, catching his breath. "Nightture, attack!" The vulture Pokemon flew toward the cloud of gas, preparing for attack. It stopped abruptly in front of the other Pokemon and flapped its wings furiously, hitting the Hazoud over and over with a whirlwind of air. The Hazoud retaliated by blowing poisonous smoke at the Nightture, but the flying type was too fast. It dodged the smoke, striking Hazoud once again with a blast of wind. Eventually, it was obvious that the fight was over. Michael threw a Pokeball at the defeated Pokemon, capturing it.
"Alright then." Michael said, returning Nightture to its Pokeball as well. "Shall we go?" He continued on to the town as if nothing had happened.

"Well, this place isn't much." Bobby said as the group entered Poisawa Town. There weren't many buildings, and the few that there were were rather poor quality. It definitely was not as flashy as Hanaero Town.
"There they are!" Came a familiar voice from somewhere off to the right. The group turned to see Omar and Aaron, along with two other men in Rocket uniforms, on the roof of one of the buildings.
"You guys again?" Bobby asked. "What, did the boss give you permission to steal our Pokemon now?"
"Huh? Permission? Pokemon?" Omar asked, turning to the others.
"I think they got the wrong impression from what we said last time." Aaron guessed. "We didn't need the boss' permission!" He yelled to the group. "We just needed his gloves!" Sure enough, all four members were wearing odd gloves of different colors. Omar wore purple, Aaron wore green, and the two others wore red and blue.
"Who are these guys, the ninja turtles?" Matt asked mockingly.
"No!" Omar replied. "We are the Team Rocket Elemental--"
"Yeah, yeah. We get it." Bobby interrupted.
"How dare you interrupt us!" Aaron exclaimed. "Kyle, this one is yours!"
"Got it." The rocket member in the red gloves responded. He jumped down from the roof, landing carefully and walking closer to the group.
"Well, unlike the two bozos from the cave, this one actually looks serious." Bobby said, judging by the angry expression on Kyle's face. "I'll take care of him. The rest of you, go get the police!"
"Right!" Elissa, Matt, Tatianna, and Dan said simultaneously. They all split up and ran in opposite directions.
"Cover them." The rocket in the blue gloves instructed. The three jumped from the building, Omar following Elissa, Aaron following Dan, and the blue gloved man following Tatianna.
"Now it's just one on one." Bobby said, cracking his knuckles and sending out Cubburn. "Let's do this."
"You'll be sorry." Kyle said, grabbing a Pokeball from his belt and throwing it towards Cubburn. The Pokeball opened to reveal a Pokemon actually familiar to Bobby; a Vulpix.
"Looks like Team Rocket doesn't pay attention to the rule about not showing other region's Pokemon to Olemenun..." Bobby thought aloud. "Then again, the people here probably don't even know that Vulpix is from another region."
"Why don't you stop talking to yourself and fight?" Kyle asked. "Vulpix, Quick Attack!" The Vulpix ran forward extremely fast, striking the Cubburn with an almost unseen tackle.
"Cubburn, fight back with a Quick Attack of your own!" Bobby ordered. The Cubburn responded by running forward just as fast, tackling the Vulpix back. The two Pokemon continued to exchange blows, neither one giving up. The Vulpix appeared to have more stamina, and although they were both on the brink of unconsciousness, the Vulpix seemed like it had the upper hand.
"Now let's finish it off!" Kyle exclaimed. "Quick Attack!" The Vulpix dashed forward, giving Bobby little time to think.
"Come on...there must be some way..." Bobby thought aloud.

"I can't believe that creep is like, still following me!" Tatianna exclaimed as she continued to run through the city. She came to a fork in the road and turned right, bumping into Elissa. The two fell to the ground, giving the blue-gloved man time to catch up to them.
"I've got you now." He said, chuckling slightly. Omar, who had been following Elissa, also walked up behind them. They were surrounded by buildings, their only two paths of excape blocked by Omar and the other man.
"I choose you, Espeon!" Omar shouted, releasing the Psychic Pokemon from its Pokeball on his belt.
"Let's go, Gyarados!" The blue-gloved man added, sending out his own Pokemon.
"Dolphice, go!" Tatianna exclaimed, sending out her water Pokemon.
"Dreamuse, I choose you!" Elissa shouted, sending out her own Psychic Pokemon. The Pokemon chimed in its melodic voice as it released from the Pokeball, as always.
"Agh! What a disgusting noise!" The man in blue gloves responded. "Omar, we've gotta shut that thing up! It's too cutesy and girly!"
"I agree, Twitchy!" Omar replied. "Espeon, Tackle!" He commanded. The purple Pokemon ran forward, striking Dreamuse with a full body tackle and causing the small Pokemon to recoil back.
"Gyarados, Dragon Rage!" Twitchy commanded. The large Pokemon opened its mouth, letting forth a blast of fire that struck both Dreamuse, causing it to be dangerously close to being knocked out.
"Dolphice, Water Gun!" Tatianna ordered. The Pokemon sent a blast of water shooting towards Espeon, damaging it slightly, but the Pokemon easily shook it off.
"Dreamuse, Confusion!" Elissa exclaimed. The Pokemon began glowing brighter than normal, sending a wave of Psychic energy out, striking Gyarados.
"Face it!" Omar shouted. "You're no match for us!"
"They're right..." Elissa realized.

Dan ran through the town, looking for a building he could escape into. Unfortunately, the Pokemon Center, Gym, and Mart were all on the other side of town, and the only buildings he was passing were residential ones.
"Gotcha." Aaron said, dropping down in front of Dan from a building above.
"Bring it on then!" Dan exclaimed, grabbing Mosseize's Pokeball from his staff and releasing the grass Pokemon.
"I choose you, Pinsir!" Aaron shouted, sending out his own Pokemon. The larger Pinsir shut clapped its pincers open and closed repetitively. "Vice Grip!" The brown Pokemon ran forward, continuing to open and close its pincers.
"Mosseize, jump out of the way and use Absorb!" The Pinsir continued charging forward until it was about to hit Mosseize. The smaller Pokemon jumped out of the way just in time, landing on Pinsir's back and sucking out some of its energy. In an attempt to get the Pokemon off its back, Pinsir jumped up and did a flip, crushing the Mosseize beneath it.
"Mosseize!" Dan exclaimed in concern. "Forget regulation...Windock, save him!" Dan released his flying Pokemon from its own Pokeball, ordering it to use Gust on the Pinsir. The Windock began spinning faster than normal, causing a blast of wind to shoot forward and blow the Pinsir back, allowing Mosseize to get out from under its mass.
"So you want to make it a two on two battle?" Aaron asked rhetorically. "Fine! I choose you, Skarmory!" He released his second Pokemon, which flew forward and struck Windock with a Steel Wing attack. The tornado Pokemon shot backwards, the attack being too strong.
"Mosseize, Stun Spore!" Dan commanded. The grass Pokemon jumped up, spitting out small spores. The spores surrounded Skarmory, attaching to its body. The Skarmory tried to move in to attack Windock again, but was shocked slightly by the spores and could not move. "This is your change, Windock! Rock Throw!" The rock type Pokemon sent a rock flying out at Skarmory, hitting the defenseless Pokemon upside the head.
"Forgetting about someone?" Aaron asked. Mosseize looked around to see Pinsir charging again. By the time it realized it was in harm's way, it had already been grabbed by the bug Pokemon's pincers. The Pinsir squeezed its horns tight together, the spikes driving into Mosseize's body and harming it significantly. It opened them back up, causing the grass type to drop to the ground, and walked back a few steps, ready for the next move.
"This isn't good..." Dan muttered, trying to plan his next move.

"None of them are following me." Matt thought. "I suppose there are less of them than us, but...how did they decide who to follow?"
"Weren't you paying attention to their attire?" Came Michael's voice from around a corner. He walked out, leaning against the building. "Their gloves each matched the color of their target's staff."
"Hey...you're right!" Matt realized. "So maybe their target wasn't our Pokemon..."
"But our staves." Michael finished. "There's something to them that we don't know. We'll have to ask Professor Pine about it."
"But in the mean time," Matt added, "Let's go help the others!"
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By the time you finish reading this, the create a card thread will almost definitely have the next set of cards posted. You'll love them, I'm sure.
 
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[QUOTE="Cubburn,use a Quick Attack of your own,Dan commanded.[/QUOTE]


That's about the only mistake,but very good storytelling.
 
Lakak said:
That's about the only mistake,but very good storytelling.

What's the mistake? I didn't even say that. I said

"Cubburn, fight back with a Quick Attack of your own!"

I see no mistake there.

EDIT: Bleh, Dan pointed it out over AIM. I guess I'm a little tired from school. X_X
 
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Cliff hanger ending to this chapter, Classic.
plot countinues to be awesome.
and when isn't there going to be a chapter without a evolution
 
maybe eventually you could have one of them throw a pokeball at a weakened pokemon and the pokemon will break free since every time so far they have just been battle then guarenteed caught.
 
metalbird said:
maybe eventually you could have one of them throw a pokeball at a weakened pokemon and the pokemon will break free since every time so far they have just been battle then guarenteed caught.

Ever happen in the anime?
No.
Every gonna happen here?
No.
 
I find this ironic...
Kyle loses to Fire Pokemen at t32 Nats and t32 worlds, and Bobby has a fire pokeyman.
Ellisa loses to a part Psychic pokeman at t8 worlds, and I have psychic pokeman.
Twitchy isn't twitching...
Pinser is ugly, Aaron is not.
And all the members that are Team R in this FanFic are acutally on Team R.
 
Dude you totally need to let me co-write the character descriptions and dialogue for the rocket people. For twitchy throw in some omg pwnage nub, aaron doesnt talk all proper-like, and omar should compliment everyones fine looks.

Team R: We're prettier than you.
 
Ancient Pokemon Trainer said:
What about the mankey????

Did he actually try to capture Mankey? If he did, I don't think the ball ever actually hit Mankey...he just kinda deflected it, or something.

IamMexican said:
I find this ironic...
Kyle loses to Fire Pokemen at t32 Nats and t32 worlds, and Bobby has a fire pokeyman.
Ellisa loses to a part Psychic pokeman at t8 worlds, and I have psychic pokeman.
Twitchy isn't twitching...
Pinser is ugly, Aaron is not.
And all the members that are Team R in this FanFic are acutally on Team R.

Rofl, nice.
Twitchy isn't twitching? Hmm...good point. I have an idea! He will develop the twitch later in the story!
So there. =P

And so what if Pinsir is ugly? Espeon is...no, wait, you both have pretty hair...hmm...VULPIX HAS TAILS AN KYLE DOESN'T! HAH!
So yeah, Pokemon don't have to be just like their trainers. =P
And Team R is dead to me.
 
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