GreatLakesCharizard
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My first Attempt at a Fan-Fic. Please read. Have Fun
This Story will be written by GreatLakesCharizard, and Spoinkmaster
First- Explain the Characters and why they are here.
In this story the characters are Piketon. In the beginning, these Pokemon did not know each other; these Pokemon are as follows: Electivire, Magmortar, Glaceon, Gallade, Tangrowth, and Mr. Mime. They were chosen for very good reasons; their backgrounds and other details are listed below.
Eric (Electivire)
Sex-Male
Age-23
Background- Electivire was originally an Electabuzz owned by Lt. Surge. He was pushed through vigorous training regimes. He finally got sick of these training regimes and decided to leave. To get away from this power crazy Gym Leader and his runt of a Raichu, he used a very strong Thunder Punch on Raichu, knocking it out on impact, and a Thunder Wave on Lt. Surge paralyzing him and sending him to the hospital immediately.
Strongest Move- Thunder Punch
Position in Security Squad- Overseer
Max (Magmortar)
Sex- Male
Age- 22
Background- Magmortar was originally a Magmar owned by the Gym Leader: Blaine. He was forced to listen to many lame jokes made by his old owner. After a few years he got tired of the lame jokes and also losing many battles. He decided to leave. He left through force by dragging his Rhydon through the lava so deep he melted, and charring Blaine’s hand to the point that it turned black.
Strongest Move- Fire Blast
Position in Squad- Offensive coach
Gertrude (Glaceon)
Sex- Female
Age-21
Background- Glaceon was once an Eevee that was born into Bill’s family of Eevee’s. She was very small at the age 6,and stayed that size until about 13. When Bill had evolved all of his Eevee’s into the different evolved forms, she was very mad and ran away from Bill. When she ran away, she had many doubts. One of them was why she left. She left plainly because Bill was addicted to World of Warcraft and continuing his research on how to evolve Eevee’s. Another reason was that she was a non-evolved from of Eevee when Bill came back. This particular Eevee stowed away on the S.S. Anne II (Re-make of the sunken ship), and slept on this ship until it arrived in Sinnoh. When arriving in Sinnoh, she wanted to find a place to evolve: as soon as possible. She met as many new Pokemon as she could. She heard of a strange rock in the middle of nowhere. All she knew was the middle of nowhere part; she didn’t know it was going to in the middle of a raging blizzard. When she finally got there, a different Pokemon showed up and wanted to take the rock before her. She quickly defeated this Pokemon and evolved. About a week after evolving, she found out from the local police that her brothers and sisters were looking for her. Luckily, she now looked different and un-noticeable; hiding from her much-hated siblings was very easy.
Strongest Attack- Ice Beam
Position in Squad- Diversion Coordinator
George (Gallade)
Sex- Male
Age- 28
Background- This Pokemon had no owner. This Pokemon was a small from birth and stayed that way for a very long time. He was made fun of very much by the other Ralts, Kirlia, and Gardevoir. He finally got sick of this harassment and trained very hard on multiple items such as tree’s or brick walls. He had hoped to turn into a strong Gardevoir, but instead evolved into a Gallade. On return to his clan, he was brutally harassed by all the kin. He turned on them in rage and dealt much damage to all the kin, if not knocking them out. After this incident, he ran as fast as he could away from his clan for fear of being chased by the greater kin. Many months later he found a small village mostly guarded by the ninja’s and samurai. He defeated many of these ninja’s (or samurai), for food, or money. One of these ninja’s defeated him, took him in as family, and taught him the ways of a ninja and Samurai. Sadly, being a Pokemon, he couldn’t use a katana or samurai sword. Luckily being the type of pokemon he is, he can use the blades on his elbows. These blades have proved helpful in many difficult situations.
Strongest Attack- Extreme Speed
Position in Squad- Squad Leader
Taylor (Tangrowth)
Sex- Uhmm…well… We don’t know, we think it’s female.
Age- Unknown, 20+
Background- There isn’t anything really to know about this Pokemon. He (or she) was once owned by Erika in Celadon City as a Tangela. Upon evolving into a Tangrowth he was disowned by Erika for fear of going crazy because of the number of vines.
Strongest Attack- Vine Whip
Position in Squad- Disruption tactic’s
Michelle (Mr. Mime)
Sex- Female
Age- 19
Background- Mr. Mime was owned by Sabrina and was very faithful to her Gym Leader. Sadly, she left on her own accord. She was very mad after a Pokemon trainer named Ash defeated her using a Haunter, actually giving Sabrina the Haunter. The Haunter took all of Sabrina’s attention very quickly. Because Mr. Mime thought she didn’t love her anymore, she decided to leave. She left and traveled to many places creating barriers and other type of objects in random places. Mr. Mime was finally caught for creating barriers in random places and put to do community service. Her community service project was to make an entirely glass building using only glass, and not barriers. When no one was looking she finished the structure using barriers. This building remains to this day in Goldenrod City as the building that is too dangerous for anyone to go in. This building cannot be gone into because the contractors guess that any ladies wearing high heals would crack the glass creating a chain reaction destroying the entire building. The barriers are much stronger than glass and now remain as the floor, ceiling, and walls of this building (without the contractors knowing).
Strongest Move- Barrier/Safeguard/Light Screen/Reflect
Position in Squad- Defense Coordinator
Prologue
New Arrivals
These six Pokemon had very troubled lives after being separated from their trainers. Some of them had become convicts. Some had worked in bakeries or stores such as Wal Mart. Although these Pokemon were thought to be very good guards or greeters at their jobs, they were fired for random reasons. The convicts got bored of being put in jail, and grew out of the bad natured crimes.
When all of these Pokemon were out of their jobs, or had dropped out of the Pokemon crime network, they all applied for different jobs. Only one of them accepted these six Pokemon. This job is called “Museum Security.” This job only hired Pokemon. Pokemon owned the museum itself. Humans could go to this museum, but no human artifacts could be seen there. Only Pokemon artifacts could be seen.
These Pokemon applied for the job at about the same time. The museum was low on staff at the time and also wanted to hire another squad as quickly as possible. Each squad must have at least six Pokemon to start out. The six Pokemon listed above are the Pokemon in the newest squad. To try out for the positions one would have to go through many training exercises.
Some of the Pokemon that are in these squads are not really into the whole training thing. Those Pokemon such as Eric (the Electivire) seldom trained here, and did not try out for better positions. Some Pokemon such as George (the Gallade) were naturally better at being leaders or other tactical positions. Most of these squads have some of the same Pokemon. Like the Mr. Mime is a natural defense coordinator and make walls for a living, so they are in most of the squads.
Most of these Pokemon met only through the museum security squads. Many of the squads are positioned at one point or area. In this case our heroes and heroines are positioned at a very secret door with wires running in and out. They hear random noises from inside the room all the time, so they ignore it. This is where our story takes place.
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Thanks for reading the prologue, I am trying to get chapter one written as soon as possible. I wrote most of the Prologue, Spoinkmaster helped with some of it. I really do not know if he is willing to help with the rest.
Please say what is good or bad about this Fan-Fic. I look forward to reading what everyone has to say about Super Awesome Security Dudes of Justice.
Thanks,
GreatLakesCharizrd
P.S. You may call it SASDoJ or whatever else you want to call it.
Super Awesome Security Dudes of Justice
This Story will be written by GreatLakesCharizard, and Spoinkmaster
First- Explain the Characters and why they are here.
In this story the characters are Piketon. In the beginning, these Pokemon did not know each other; these Pokemon are as follows: Electivire, Magmortar, Glaceon, Gallade, Tangrowth, and Mr. Mime. They were chosen for very good reasons; their backgrounds and other details are listed below.
Eric (Electivire)
Sex-Male
Age-23
Background- Electivire was originally an Electabuzz owned by Lt. Surge. He was pushed through vigorous training regimes. He finally got sick of these training regimes and decided to leave. To get away from this power crazy Gym Leader and his runt of a Raichu, he used a very strong Thunder Punch on Raichu, knocking it out on impact, and a Thunder Wave on Lt. Surge paralyzing him and sending him to the hospital immediately.
Strongest Move- Thunder Punch
Position in Security Squad- Overseer
Max (Magmortar)
Sex- Male
Age- 22
Background- Magmortar was originally a Magmar owned by the Gym Leader: Blaine. He was forced to listen to many lame jokes made by his old owner. After a few years he got tired of the lame jokes and also losing many battles. He decided to leave. He left through force by dragging his Rhydon through the lava so deep he melted, and charring Blaine’s hand to the point that it turned black.
Strongest Move- Fire Blast
Position in Squad- Offensive coach
Gertrude (Glaceon)
Sex- Female
Age-21
Background- Glaceon was once an Eevee that was born into Bill’s family of Eevee’s. She was very small at the age 6,and stayed that size until about 13. When Bill had evolved all of his Eevee’s into the different evolved forms, she was very mad and ran away from Bill. When she ran away, she had many doubts. One of them was why she left. She left plainly because Bill was addicted to World of Warcraft and continuing his research on how to evolve Eevee’s. Another reason was that she was a non-evolved from of Eevee when Bill came back. This particular Eevee stowed away on the S.S. Anne II (Re-make of the sunken ship), and slept on this ship until it arrived in Sinnoh. When arriving in Sinnoh, she wanted to find a place to evolve: as soon as possible. She met as many new Pokemon as she could. She heard of a strange rock in the middle of nowhere. All she knew was the middle of nowhere part; she didn’t know it was going to in the middle of a raging blizzard. When she finally got there, a different Pokemon showed up and wanted to take the rock before her. She quickly defeated this Pokemon and evolved. About a week after evolving, she found out from the local police that her brothers and sisters were looking for her. Luckily, she now looked different and un-noticeable; hiding from her much-hated siblings was very easy.
Strongest Attack- Ice Beam
Position in Squad- Diversion Coordinator
George (Gallade)
Sex- Male
Age- 28
Background- This Pokemon had no owner. This Pokemon was a small from birth and stayed that way for a very long time. He was made fun of very much by the other Ralts, Kirlia, and Gardevoir. He finally got sick of this harassment and trained very hard on multiple items such as tree’s or brick walls. He had hoped to turn into a strong Gardevoir, but instead evolved into a Gallade. On return to his clan, he was brutally harassed by all the kin. He turned on them in rage and dealt much damage to all the kin, if not knocking them out. After this incident, he ran as fast as he could away from his clan for fear of being chased by the greater kin. Many months later he found a small village mostly guarded by the ninja’s and samurai. He defeated many of these ninja’s (or samurai), for food, or money. One of these ninja’s defeated him, took him in as family, and taught him the ways of a ninja and Samurai. Sadly, being a Pokemon, he couldn’t use a katana or samurai sword. Luckily being the type of pokemon he is, he can use the blades on his elbows. These blades have proved helpful in many difficult situations.
Strongest Attack- Extreme Speed
Position in Squad- Squad Leader
Taylor (Tangrowth)
Sex- Uhmm…well… We don’t know, we think it’s female.
Age- Unknown, 20+
Background- There isn’t anything really to know about this Pokemon. He (or she) was once owned by Erika in Celadon City as a Tangela. Upon evolving into a Tangrowth he was disowned by Erika for fear of going crazy because of the number of vines.
Strongest Attack- Vine Whip
Position in Squad- Disruption tactic’s
Michelle (Mr. Mime)
Sex- Female
Age- 19
Background- Mr. Mime was owned by Sabrina and was very faithful to her Gym Leader. Sadly, she left on her own accord. She was very mad after a Pokemon trainer named Ash defeated her using a Haunter, actually giving Sabrina the Haunter. The Haunter took all of Sabrina’s attention very quickly. Because Mr. Mime thought she didn’t love her anymore, she decided to leave. She left and traveled to many places creating barriers and other type of objects in random places. Mr. Mime was finally caught for creating barriers in random places and put to do community service. Her community service project was to make an entirely glass building using only glass, and not barriers. When no one was looking she finished the structure using barriers. This building remains to this day in Goldenrod City as the building that is too dangerous for anyone to go in. This building cannot be gone into because the contractors guess that any ladies wearing high heals would crack the glass creating a chain reaction destroying the entire building. The barriers are much stronger than glass and now remain as the floor, ceiling, and walls of this building (without the contractors knowing).
Strongest Move- Barrier/Safeguard/Light Screen/Reflect
Position in Squad- Defense Coordinator
Prologue
New Arrivals
These six Pokemon had very troubled lives after being separated from their trainers. Some of them had become convicts. Some had worked in bakeries or stores such as Wal Mart. Although these Pokemon were thought to be very good guards or greeters at their jobs, they were fired for random reasons. The convicts got bored of being put in jail, and grew out of the bad natured crimes.
When all of these Pokemon were out of their jobs, or had dropped out of the Pokemon crime network, they all applied for different jobs. Only one of them accepted these six Pokemon. This job is called “Museum Security.” This job only hired Pokemon. Pokemon owned the museum itself. Humans could go to this museum, but no human artifacts could be seen there. Only Pokemon artifacts could be seen.
These Pokemon applied for the job at about the same time. The museum was low on staff at the time and also wanted to hire another squad as quickly as possible. Each squad must have at least six Pokemon to start out. The six Pokemon listed above are the Pokemon in the newest squad. To try out for the positions one would have to go through many training exercises.
Some of the Pokemon that are in these squads are not really into the whole training thing. Those Pokemon such as Eric (the Electivire) seldom trained here, and did not try out for better positions. Some Pokemon such as George (the Gallade) were naturally better at being leaders or other tactical positions. Most of these squads have some of the same Pokemon. Like the Mr. Mime is a natural defense coordinator and make walls for a living, so they are in most of the squads.
Most of these Pokemon met only through the museum security squads. Many of the squads are positioned at one point or area. In this case our heroes and heroines are positioned at a very secret door with wires running in and out. They hear random noises from inside the room all the time, so they ignore it. This is where our story takes place.
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Thanks for reading the prologue, I am trying to get chapter one written as soon as possible. I wrote most of the Prologue, Spoinkmaster helped with some of it. I really do not know if he is willing to help with the rest.
Please say what is good or bad about this Fan-Fic. I look forward to reading what everyone has to say about Super Awesome Security Dudes of Justice.
Thanks,
GreatLakesCharizrd
P.S. You may call it SASDoJ or whatever else you want to call it.
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