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Here it is, the premier.
Well, actually, not really, it's been on another site for another 5 months, but deal with it.
Genesis Revisited
As Ash and the gang were leaving, the young Eon siblings eere heading home.
Unfortunately, one little Latios never made it to the secret grove.
At that moment, a woman found a baby boy and took him in as her own.
She raised him to be perfect, and he was.
Perfecd in every way.
But as his 13th birthday approached, he began to stop growing.
He was tall, but he never grew over 5'6".
The whole island of Altomare, his hometown (all the kids), despised Lan for all of their worth.
Meanwhile, a young lady named Bianca and her grandfather, Lorenzo, learned that one Eon sibling was missing.
The only way they knew of this is when the others' minds grew enough to remember well.
Eventually, Bianca was kidnapped by Team Rocket, who was thought to be Latias in disguise.
As Lan grew to Latias, and his new friend Billy Bo Bob johnson (bobby for short), Lan soon found out that he was not human, and he had special powers.
Some ascpects of Lan that helped him on the way was the fact that he was a master artist and singer.
During the whole fued, Bobby tries to hide his own secret as long as he can.
After some serious research, Lan realized one thing.
Lan was the fourth Latios.
And, I left off with Lan, the Eons, Bianca, and bobby on the Altomare museum roof.
This is rated higher than my last, around PG-10.
Remember that this is just how an extremist would rate it.
You may read it if you are underage.
First day on the job
Lan lay on the sandy hills of the West Beach.
He is still recooperating after a serious trama that has just destroyed his entire life.
Lan found truth.
And when you find truth, you seek love, so Lan decided that he had the break the news to his 'mom'.
Lan headed over to the center of the island.
Flying like a jet, Lan saw overhead a rainbow.
'Why would there be a rainbow when there isn't a cloud in the sky?'
Then he saw two strange pokemon fly towards the sun, leaving a colorful trail of dust.
Lan hadn't paid attention to where he was going, and crashed into the grove wall, and lost his cloaking.
He quickly shifted to human, and ran inside his house.
Lan saearched the house for his mother.
he couldn't find her anywhere.
He found Joan (his mother's name) in her room sitting on the desk.
Before entering, Lan heard some of what whe was murmuring.
"Now, now, dear, I won't let you go.
no, never, you'll alwayse be here, with me.
Don't worry... no one's after you.
Hush, don't cry, I've got you
I'll keep you forever and ever and ever..."
Lan peered in.
She was rocking back and forth in her chair cradling the air.
She had gone completely insane!
Lan stepped in, and Joan stared at Lan for a long time.
"What are you doing here?
Can't you see that me and Lan are having a good time?
I need to bond with him.
You go away.
What do you want with me?!?"
Joan has lost her mind ever since her only chance at motherhood had mutated and ran off.
'I'm not what you think I am.'
"Who said that?!?" Joan screamed.
"I know you're somewhere!" She was staring right at Lan.
'Mother, keep quiet.'
"You!" She pointed her finger at Lan.
"look what you've don to Lan.
He won't talk to me anymore.
My sweet baby can't talk because of you."
'Mom, listen for a sec.'
"So, it's you talking to me.
Telepathism?
I always knew yu were a psycho!"
'Looks like I'm not the only one.'
"You shut up!
I'm still you're mother and you will respect me like it."
'Mom, I'm 15 now.
you know that.'
"You don't look any older that 13!
Don't you lie to me, mister."
'Mom I have something to tell you.'
"Make it quick; it's almost Lan's breakfast time."
Lan peered at the clock on the desk.
It was 5 in the afternoon.
'Mom, I'm not human.'
"Tell me something I don't know.
You were there when the doctor told me that you weren't."
'No, I mean, I know what I am.
Just let me show you.'
"Fine.
What is it?
Are you on medication or something?"
'no, mom.
I'm-'
"Well?"
'You're might laugh.
But, I'm a Pokemon.'
"Oh my God, you are the stupiddest son I have ever had."
'you want to see?'
"Give me all you got, baby!"
Lan formed into his true shape.
"Oh, God, boy, the Devil is inside you!"
Joan slapped the crap out of Lan.
"Get out of this boy, rake me, please..."
Joan began crying.
Lan raised one eyebrow.
'One minute, she hates me, and the hext she's crying to get the demon out of me?'
Lan was careful not to let Joan hear that.
'No, mother, I am not possessed.
I am Latios.
Well, a Latios, per se...'
"You stay away from me and little Lan- I don't want you pulling any mumbo jumbo on us!"
'Trust me mother, if I thought that way, you'd be dead.'
Joan started at Lan.
She began to smother him with kisses.
Lan shoved her off.
'Get off me, broad.'
"Spare me, please!
Take Lan instead!"
Lan thought to himself.
'I wanted someone to love, but no matter how sane, no love like this would do it.'
Lan walked out the door in human form.
Waiting for him, almost on que, Bob burst in his face.
"I'll love ya!"
'No thank you.'
"Wait a minute- you are telekenetic?"
lan nodded his head.
"Haha, I knew it!
Now, listen closely, I have a -"
A strange noise disrupted Bob's very waited-for conversation.
'Gez, I'll never be able to let Lan know at this rate.' thought Bob.
'I need to wait for the right moment.'
Bob looked back, and Lan was gone.
"Wait!... oh, God!"
I had a feeling most of you won't do with Genesis Revisited, which is what the other site had to deal with.
I am proud that these chapters are increasingly longer, and more packed.
Well, actually, not really, it's been on another site for another 5 months, but deal with it.
Genesis Revisited
As Ash and the gang were leaving, the young Eon siblings eere heading home.
Unfortunately, one little Latios never made it to the secret grove.
At that moment, a woman found a baby boy and took him in as her own.
She raised him to be perfect, and he was.
Perfecd in every way.
But as his 13th birthday approached, he began to stop growing.
He was tall, but he never grew over 5'6".
The whole island of Altomare, his hometown (all the kids), despised Lan for all of their worth.
Meanwhile, a young lady named Bianca and her grandfather, Lorenzo, learned that one Eon sibling was missing.
The only way they knew of this is when the others' minds grew enough to remember well.
Eventually, Bianca was kidnapped by Team Rocket, who was thought to be Latias in disguise.
As Lan grew to Latias, and his new friend Billy Bo Bob johnson (bobby for short), Lan soon found out that he was not human, and he had special powers.
Some ascpects of Lan that helped him on the way was the fact that he was a master artist and singer.
During the whole fued, Bobby tries to hide his own secret as long as he can.
After some serious research, Lan realized one thing.
Lan was the fourth Latios.
And, I left off with Lan, the Eons, Bianca, and bobby on the Altomare museum roof.
This is rated higher than my last, around PG-10.
Remember that this is just how an extremist would rate it.
You may read it if you are underage.
First day on the job
Lan lay on the sandy hills of the West Beach.
He is still recooperating after a serious trama that has just destroyed his entire life.
Lan found truth.
And when you find truth, you seek love, so Lan decided that he had the break the news to his 'mom'.
Lan headed over to the center of the island.
Flying like a jet, Lan saw overhead a rainbow.
'Why would there be a rainbow when there isn't a cloud in the sky?'
Then he saw two strange pokemon fly towards the sun, leaving a colorful trail of dust.
Lan hadn't paid attention to where he was going, and crashed into the grove wall, and lost his cloaking.
He quickly shifted to human, and ran inside his house.
Lan saearched the house for his mother.
he couldn't find her anywhere.
He found Joan (his mother's name) in her room sitting on the desk.
Before entering, Lan heard some of what whe was murmuring.
"Now, now, dear, I won't let you go.
no, never, you'll alwayse be here, with me.
Don't worry... no one's after you.
Hush, don't cry, I've got you
I'll keep you forever and ever and ever..."
Lan peered in.
She was rocking back and forth in her chair cradling the air.
She had gone completely insane!
Lan stepped in, and Joan stared at Lan for a long time.
"What are you doing here?
Can't you see that me and Lan are having a good time?
I need to bond with him.
You go away.
What do you want with me?!?"
Joan has lost her mind ever since her only chance at motherhood had mutated and ran off.
'I'm not what you think I am.'
"Who said that?!?" Joan screamed.
"I know you're somewhere!" She was staring right at Lan.
'Mother, keep quiet.'
"You!" She pointed her finger at Lan.
"look what you've don to Lan.
He won't talk to me anymore.
My sweet baby can't talk because of you."
'Mom, listen for a sec.'
"So, it's you talking to me.
Telepathism?
I always knew yu were a psycho!"
'Looks like I'm not the only one.'
"You shut up!
I'm still you're mother and you will respect me like it."
'Mom, I'm 15 now.
you know that.'
"You don't look any older that 13!
Don't you lie to me, mister."
'Mom I have something to tell you.'
"Make it quick; it's almost Lan's breakfast time."
Lan peered at the clock on the desk.
It was 5 in the afternoon.
'Mom, I'm not human.'
"Tell me something I don't know.
You were there when the doctor told me that you weren't."
'No, I mean, I know what I am.
Just let me show you.'
"Fine.
What is it?
Are you on medication or something?"
'no, mom.
I'm-'
"Well?"
'You're might laugh.
But, I'm a Pokemon.'
"Oh my God, you are the stupiddest son I have ever had."
'you want to see?'
"Give me all you got, baby!"
Lan formed into his true shape.
"Oh, God, boy, the Devil is inside you!"
Joan slapped the crap out of Lan.
"Get out of this boy, rake me, please..."
Joan began crying.
Lan raised one eyebrow.
'One minute, she hates me, and the hext she's crying to get the demon out of me?'
Lan was careful not to let Joan hear that.
'No, mother, I am not possessed.
I am Latios.
Well, a Latios, per se...'
"You stay away from me and little Lan- I don't want you pulling any mumbo jumbo on us!"
'Trust me mother, if I thought that way, you'd be dead.'
Joan started at Lan.
She began to smother him with kisses.
Lan shoved her off.
'Get off me, broad.'
"Spare me, please!
Take Lan instead!"
Lan thought to himself.
'I wanted someone to love, but no matter how sane, no love like this would do it.'
Lan walked out the door in human form.
Waiting for him, almost on que, Bob burst in his face.
"I'll love ya!"
'No thank you.'
"Wait a minute- you are telekenetic?"
lan nodded his head.
"Haha, I knew it!
Now, listen closely, I have a -"
A strange noise disrupted Bob's very waited-for conversation.
'Gez, I'll never be able to let Lan know at this rate.' thought Bob.
'I need to wait for the right moment.'
Bob looked back, and Lan was gone.
"Wait!... oh, God!"
I had a feeling most of you won't do with Genesis Revisited, which is what the other site had to deal with.
I am proud that these chapters are increasingly longer, and more packed.