I know I know... circumstances I dont wanna get into have limited my computer time, I promise I will get to this as soon as possible, the last chapter has a lot of potential, and I dont wanna ruin it by tryingto rush it.... you just gotta be patient....... how long? Dunno...... when I do know, i will let ya'll know....
The Birth of a legend, Spectreon!!! -FIN-
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Bigpoppabeatdown
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d'oh, i read all 9 chapters in one sitting........... note to self, don't do that.... lol
nice one spec, they should make a ghost eevee and then a grass and a steel one too....... hmmmm, thinks wildly about creating one........ nope, too much work
nice one spec, they should make a ghost eevee and then a grass and a steel one too....... hmmmm, thinks wildly about creating one........ nope, too much work
lol.... the final chapter will likely be up by Thurs, unless you get lucky and it is too long, then I will split it to 2.... Once I have thought up a new plot, Mitch's and Spectrum's adventures will continue, just in another story/thread.... I already have a premise, I just have to find a way to impliment it...
Bigpoppabeatdown
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it's monday spec...... hmmmmm..... lol
I know, I know.... Procrastination and me are best buds... I was actually finishing up here, and fixing to work on the final chapter(s). Dont worry, once finished I am working on a new story involving our hero Mitch...I just think this story is pretty much done, well after the next chapter(s).
and to your siggy bpbd, cant I have both?
and to your siggy bpbd, cant I have both?
Over a month has passed, and ya'll are still (im)patiently waiting, lol... so now without further adu... the next, and the last, chapter.....
Chapter 11
Mitch had no problem finding the Pokemon Fan Club, nor the secret entrance. True to his word, Phil was standing gaurd. "Hurry, down that hall way there, 3 doors down to the left. There is a series of 4 Warp Sqaures that will lead you to Jordan's private room. Be carefull, there are several guards between here and there. The Frost are in the Prison cells, the only accessable door is in Jordans room. He wants to be sure to face you if you are foolish enough to try to foil him again. Now GO!!!!" Phil told him. Mitch ran off, trying to be quiet and not be spotted.
Mitch made it succesfully to the room with the first Warp Sqaure. 'No gaurd in site, good.' He thought to himself. He headed to the Warp Square, and felt the woosh and quesiness in his stomach as he was teleported to the next room.
"What do you think you are doing here" A guard asked, as he noticed Mitch phasing into the second room. "STOP RIGHT THERE INTRUDER. MUK GO!!!" And with that Mitch was staring into the face of the stinkiest Muk he had ever seen or smelt.
Mitch quickly dodged a Sludge attack that the Muk Sent his way, then threw the first Pokeball he grabbed blindly, hoping it would be good enough to defeat this Muk. 'Loudred, good.' Luckily Mitch was still wearing his ear plugs he had recieced from Whitney. Loudred let out a terrifying Hyper Voice attack, ending both the trainer and the Muk reeling in pain, holding their ears. 'Assuming Muks have ears' Mitch thought to himself as he raced to get to the next Warp Sqaure. Again the quesy feeling came over him as he teleported again.
Nobody was in the second room, luckily, and was quickly off to the third Warp Sqaure. "Halt, who goes there" Yet another Team Rocket Member said, already having a Dustox out, and prepared for a battle. Mitch was prepared this time, and had the Pokeball with his Golbat at the ready.
"Bruce, come on out, WHIRLWIND!" Mitch said, confident this would end the battle quickly. Mitch was right. The Whirlwind attack was super powerfull, sending the Dustox back to its Pokeball, and the Rocket grunt crashing into the wall, knocking him unconscience. A peircing alarm was now sounding throughout the complex. His cover was blown, they knew he was here. Jordan would be prepared and waiting in the next room. With another step, Mitch was on the final Warp Square, the quesiness now almost unbearable. 4 Warp Squares in such a short amount of time is enough to make the strongest of stomachs ache and be sick.
Mitch's assumption was correct. Jordan was standing in front of him, looking defiant as ever. "So you are here. It is apparent that someone neglected their post watching for you. No matter, I will deal with that later, for now I will CRUSH you Mitch! The rules are simple. A 2 on 2 Pokemon battle. We will use 4 Pokemon each. If you do not accept, I will destroy this remote, which is the only way of activating the final Warp Square to get to your precious friends." Jordan held up a small remote to show him. "Do you accept?"
"Do I really have a choice?" Petey would be to weak to use against Jordans Pokemon, so he would have to rely on the rest of his team. "Silencer and Bruce, go...."
"I will start with Arcanine and Arbok" Jordan said, as he threw out his Pokeballs. He watched, and laughed, as Mitch's Pokemon dropped 2 levels in attack strength due to his Pokemon's Intimidate abilty. "Already your Pokemon cringe in fear... you will LOSE Micth!"
Mitch was was worried a little, 1 Intemidate is bad enough, but 2? He had his work cut out for him. Arcanine started out with an Extreme Speed attack, knocking Silencer down to the ground. Arbok was already under groud using a Dig attack, obviously aimed at Loudred since Mitch's Golbat was flying high in the air. Bruce used a Sludge Bomb attack on Arcanine, but it quickly dodged it with another Extreme Speed attack. Loudred used Protect to make Arbok's attack fail, and then nailed it with a Flamethrower, sending it realing. Arbok was down for the count.
"Go Salamance" Jordan said, quickly sending out a replacement for his Arbok. Again, both Silencer and Golbat were hit by a 3rd Intemidate. Arcanine struck Silencer with a Fire Blast, scoring a critical hit, sending Loudred to the mat, effectively KOing it, while Salamance and Golbat were ingaged in an aerial battle.
"Spectrum, its your turn.. make me proud." Spectrum let out a defiant cry, and quickly entered the battle, phasing in and out as Arcanine tried frantically to hit it. Golbat had scored a Poison Fang attack, doing little damage thanks to the 3 Intemidates it had taken, but it did manage to leave Salamance poisoned. Salamance teamed up with Arcanine, both firing a Flamethrower, easily finishing Bruce.
"Your my last hope Otto, do your best." Mitch reluctanlty sent his Octillery out. It was out of its elimant, but it had an obvious type advantage over both of Jordan's Pokemon. Jordan realizing this went after it, ignoring Spectrum for the most part. Arcanine came at Otto first, wih another Extreme Speed, but Otto shot out a Thunder Wave, effectively paralyzing Arcanine, causing it to pause in mid attack. Salamance came at it with a Dragon Claw, but Spectrum knocked it off course with a Quick Attack, and Otto easily finished it with an Ice Beam. But the Dragon Claw had hit Spectrum hard. It was hurt badly.
"My final Pokemon shall be Flygon... Sandstorm!!!" Jordan said, and as quickly as it was released from its Pokeball a horrible sandstorm was brewing in this small room. Mitch was ready for this, and quickly reached to get the Go-Goggles he had in his pack for just this instance. But in the moments it took to put them on, Spectrum was attacked with a Crunch by Flygon. It was out for the count. As the Sandstorm raged, Octillery was buffetted by the Sand Storm, causing little damage. But something weird started to happen.
A small object was glowing brightly, coming from on of Otto's tentacles. Soon the glow spread from all of its tentacles to its head. Something was happing, but neither Mitch nor Jordon knew what. Jordan, affraid of what was going on ordered a Dragon Claw attack on Octillery before whatever was about to happen actually did happen. But it was to late.... 8 large tentacles shot out, grabbing Flygon as it swooped in for the attack. The Dragon Claw hit, but it seemed to be very ineffective. The Sandstorm started to die down, and Mitch could now see his Otto, with Flygon in its clutches. But what was it? It was bigger, and had a weird metal look to it. Its nose looked even more cannon like...
"OCTANK!!!!" Otto cried out triumphantly as it fired a devesating Metal Sound attack at the Flygon. With Flygon being forever stuck in this large octopuss's tentacles, there was know escaping. Jordan tried to order another attack, but it was quickly over when Octack fired an Ice Beam, easily knocking out the defenseless Flygon. Mitch ran and hugged his new pokemon and thanked it for its help.
Jordan seized this opportunity, and ran for the Warp Sqaure out. "Otto, stop him...." but it was too late, Jordan had escaped through the Warp Sqaure. Mitch started after him, but was shocked to see Jordan flying backwards back into the room through the very same Warp Sqaure.
"How dare you defy me"Jordan screamed, not looking at Mitch, but looking at the new figure that was imerging into the room on the Warp Square. "I'll have your head for this!" he said as Mitch realized who was standing on the Warp Square now.
"Phil" Mitch muttered, not quite believing it. "Does this mean you are coming over to the good side, and quiting Team Rocket for good now?" Mitch said, as the excitement of seeing his friend openly defying his former boss built.
"Dont be so ignorant Mitch. I used you to get to him" Phil said pointing to Jordan. "This sceme to get the Frost has caused Team Rocket nothing but greif, and I was instructed by our Leader to bring you down, by any means. You have gone against his wishes one to many times Jordan. This is you last stand. Your membership in our organization is expired, and know so are you." Phil sent out a Tangela, which used its vines to intangle Jordan's arms and legs, and used Stun Spore to effectively imoblize him. Phil reached over and grabbed the remote from Jordan's limp body. "Here is the remote to get to your friends Mitch. This will be the last time I help you out. I am being rewarded with Jordans position as a Rocket Elite. This base has been cleared of all Rocket Members other than myself. You will have no resistance on the way out. If our paths should cross again, I will not go easy on you. You are now my enemy. I would ask for you to join me as my right hand man, but I already know the answer. Farewell Mitch, my dear friend, my rival. And just so you know, if you try to follow me, I will send my forces after you without hesitation, and your Pokemon are already weak." And with that Phil walked off, and teleported away along with his Tangela, and Jordan.
Mitch hesitated for a minute, and thought of chasing Phil, but realized it was futile. He activated the final Warp Square, and true to Phil's word, the Frost were there. They had seen everything that had transpired in the last room, thanks to a TV moniter. As Mitch unlocked the cages to let them out, he saw the huge smile that was on Emma's face especially, and his face flushed beat red...
Later that evening at the fanciest diner in all of Slateport, the 'Blissful Chance', the Frost celebrated with Mitch over his defeat of Jordan and their rescue. Mitch left the table, and walked onto the balcony over looking the sea. He really didn't feel like celebrating. He and Phil used to be so close, but all that had changed. He was upset at the loss of his friend, and even more upset on his decision to not only stay in Team Rocket, but to become an Elite Member. Emma walked out to the balcony, put her arms around Mitch. He reached out and embraced her as the sun set, sinking into the ocean.
-Fin-
Well, there you have it. It took quite a while, but I got everything I wanted accomplished done.... My last post here will be the stats for Octank, and his evolution. I have a buddy working on getting me a scan of his rendition of my newest creation, if I can get it I will include it as well. I hope ya'll had half as much fun reading this as I did writing it. Thanx for tuning in, and keeping me semi on track with this. Don't worry, Mitch's adventures will continue, with a new storyline and setting. This is no where near THE END! Keep an eye out for my/Mitch's newest adventure coming soon (hopefully sooner then this final chapter came.)
Chapter 11
Mitch had no problem finding the Pokemon Fan Club, nor the secret entrance. True to his word, Phil was standing gaurd. "Hurry, down that hall way there, 3 doors down to the left. There is a series of 4 Warp Sqaures that will lead you to Jordan's private room. Be carefull, there are several guards between here and there. The Frost are in the Prison cells, the only accessable door is in Jordans room. He wants to be sure to face you if you are foolish enough to try to foil him again. Now GO!!!!" Phil told him. Mitch ran off, trying to be quiet and not be spotted.
Mitch made it succesfully to the room with the first Warp Sqaure. 'No gaurd in site, good.' He thought to himself. He headed to the Warp Square, and felt the woosh and quesiness in his stomach as he was teleported to the next room.
"What do you think you are doing here" A guard asked, as he noticed Mitch phasing into the second room. "STOP RIGHT THERE INTRUDER. MUK GO!!!" And with that Mitch was staring into the face of the stinkiest Muk he had ever seen or smelt.
Mitch quickly dodged a Sludge attack that the Muk Sent his way, then threw the first Pokeball he grabbed blindly, hoping it would be good enough to defeat this Muk. 'Loudred, good.' Luckily Mitch was still wearing his ear plugs he had recieced from Whitney. Loudred let out a terrifying Hyper Voice attack, ending both the trainer and the Muk reeling in pain, holding their ears. 'Assuming Muks have ears' Mitch thought to himself as he raced to get to the next Warp Sqaure. Again the quesy feeling came over him as he teleported again.
Nobody was in the second room, luckily, and was quickly off to the third Warp Sqaure. "Halt, who goes there" Yet another Team Rocket Member said, already having a Dustox out, and prepared for a battle. Mitch was prepared this time, and had the Pokeball with his Golbat at the ready.
"Bruce, come on out, WHIRLWIND!" Mitch said, confident this would end the battle quickly. Mitch was right. The Whirlwind attack was super powerfull, sending the Dustox back to its Pokeball, and the Rocket grunt crashing into the wall, knocking him unconscience. A peircing alarm was now sounding throughout the complex. His cover was blown, they knew he was here. Jordan would be prepared and waiting in the next room. With another step, Mitch was on the final Warp Square, the quesiness now almost unbearable. 4 Warp Squares in such a short amount of time is enough to make the strongest of stomachs ache and be sick.
Mitch's assumption was correct. Jordan was standing in front of him, looking defiant as ever. "So you are here. It is apparent that someone neglected their post watching for you. No matter, I will deal with that later, for now I will CRUSH you Mitch! The rules are simple. A 2 on 2 Pokemon battle. We will use 4 Pokemon each. If you do not accept, I will destroy this remote, which is the only way of activating the final Warp Square to get to your precious friends." Jordan held up a small remote to show him. "Do you accept?"
"Do I really have a choice?" Petey would be to weak to use against Jordans Pokemon, so he would have to rely on the rest of his team. "Silencer and Bruce, go...."
"I will start with Arcanine and Arbok" Jordan said, as he threw out his Pokeballs. He watched, and laughed, as Mitch's Pokemon dropped 2 levels in attack strength due to his Pokemon's Intimidate abilty. "Already your Pokemon cringe in fear... you will LOSE Micth!"
Mitch was was worried a little, 1 Intemidate is bad enough, but 2? He had his work cut out for him. Arcanine started out with an Extreme Speed attack, knocking Silencer down to the ground. Arbok was already under groud using a Dig attack, obviously aimed at Loudred since Mitch's Golbat was flying high in the air. Bruce used a Sludge Bomb attack on Arcanine, but it quickly dodged it with another Extreme Speed attack. Loudred used Protect to make Arbok's attack fail, and then nailed it with a Flamethrower, sending it realing. Arbok was down for the count.
"Go Salamance" Jordan said, quickly sending out a replacement for his Arbok. Again, both Silencer and Golbat were hit by a 3rd Intemidate. Arcanine struck Silencer with a Fire Blast, scoring a critical hit, sending Loudred to the mat, effectively KOing it, while Salamance and Golbat were ingaged in an aerial battle.
"Spectrum, its your turn.. make me proud." Spectrum let out a defiant cry, and quickly entered the battle, phasing in and out as Arcanine tried frantically to hit it. Golbat had scored a Poison Fang attack, doing little damage thanks to the 3 Intemidates it had taken, but it did manage to leave Salamance poisoned. Salamance teamed up with Arcanine, both firing a Flamethrower, easily finishing Bruce.
"Your my last hope Otto, do your best." Mitch reluctanlty sent his Octillery out. It was out of its elimant, but it had an obvious type advantage over both of Jordan's Pokemon. Jordan realizing this went after it, ignoring Spectrum for the most part. Arcanine came at Otto first, wih another Extreme Speed, but Otto shot out a Thunder Wave, effectively paralyzing Arcanine, causing it to pause in mid attack. Salamance came at it with a Dragon Claw, but Spectrum knocked it off course with a Quick Attack, and Otto easily finished it with an Ice Beam. But the Dragon Claw had hit Spectrum hard. It was hurt badly.
"My final Pokemon shall be Flygon... Sandstorm!!!" Jordan said, and as quickly as it was released from its Pokeball a horrible sandstorm was brewing in this small room. Mitch was ready for this, and quickly reached to get the Go-Goggles he had in his pack for just this instance. But in the moments it took to put them on, Spectrum was attacked with a Crunch by Flygon. It was out for the count. As the Sandstorm raged, Octillery was buffetted by the Sand Storm, causing little damage. But something weird started to happen.
A small object was glowing brightly, coming from on of Otto's tentacles. Soon the glow spread from all of its tentacles to its head. Something was happing, but neither Mitch nor Jordon knew what. Jordan, affraid of what was going on ordered a Dragon Claw attack on Octillery before whatever was about to happen actually did happen. But it was to late.... 8 large tentacles shot out, grabbing Flygon as it swooped in for the attack. The Dragon Claw hit, but it seemed to be very ineffective. The Sandstorm started to die down, and Mitch could now see his Otto, with Flygon in its clutches. But what was it? It was bigger, and had a weird metal look to it. Its nose looked even more cannon like...
"OCTANK!!!!" Otto cried out triumphantly as it fired a devesating Metal Sound attack at the Flygon. With Flygon being forever stuck in this large octopuss's tentacles, there was know escaping. Jordan tried to order another attack, but it was quickly over when Octack fired an Ice Beam, easily knocking out the defenseless Flygon. Mitch ran and hugged his new pokemon and thanked it for its help.
Jordan seized this opportunity, and ran for the Warp Sqaure out. "Otto, stop him...." but it was too late, Jordan had escaped through the Warp Sqaure. Mitch started after him, but was shocked to see Jordan flying backwards back into the room through the very same Warp Sqaure.
"How dare you defy me"Jordan screamed, not looking at Mitch, but looking at the new figure that was imerging into the room on the Warp Square. "I'll have your head for this!" he said as Mitch realized who was standing on the Warp Square now.
"Phil" Mitch muttered, not quite believing it. "Does this mean you are coming over to the good side, and quiting Team Rocket for good now?" Mitch said, as the excitement of seeing his friend openly defying his former boss built.
"Dont be so ignorant Mitch. I used you to get to him" Phil said pointing to Jordan. "This sceme to get the Frost has caused Team Rocket nothing but greif, and I was instructed by our Leader to bring you down, by any means. You have gone against his wishes one to many times Jordan. This is you last stand. Your membership in our organization is expired, and know so are you." Phil sent out a Tangela, which used its vines to intangle Jordan's arms and legs, and used Stun Spore to effectively imoblize him. Phil reached over and grabbed the remote from Jordan's limp body. "Here is the remote to get to your friends Mitch. This will be the last time I help you out. I am being rewarded with Jordans position as a Rocket Elite. This base has been cleared of all Rocket Members other than myself. You will have no resistance on the way out. If our paths should cross again, I will not go easy on you. You are now my enemy. I would ask for you to join me as my right hand man, but I already know the answer. Farewell Mitch, my dear friend, my rival. And just so you know, if you try to follow me, I will send my forces after you without hesitation, and your Pokemon are already weak." And with that Phil walked off, and teleported away along with his Tangela, and Jordan.
Mitch hesitated for a minute, and thought of chasing Phil, but realized it was futile. He activated the final Warp Square, and true to Phil's word, the Frost were there. They had seen everything that had transpired in the last room, thanks to a TV moniter. As Mitch unlocked the cages to let them out, he saw the huge smile that was on Emma's face especially, and his face flushed beat red...
Later that evening at the fanciest diner in all of Slateport, the 'Blissful Chance', the Frost celebrated with Mitch over his defeat of Jordan and their rescue. Mitch left the table, and walked onto the balcony over looking the sea. He really didn't feel like celebrating. He and Phil used to be so close, but all that had changed. He was upset at the loss of his friend, and even more upset on his decision to not only stay in Team Rocket, but to become an Elite Member. Emma walked out to the balcony, put her arms around Mitch. He reached out and embraced her as the sun set, sinking into the ocean.
-Fin-
Well, there you have it. It took quite a while, but I got everything I wanted accomplished done.... My last post here will be the stats for Octank, and his evolution. I have a buddy working on getting me a scan of his rendition of my newest creation, if I can get it I will include it as well. I hope ya'll had half as much fun reading this as I did writing it. Thanx for tuning in, and keeping me semi on track with this. Don't worry, Mitch's adventures will continue, with a new storyline and setting. This is no where near THE END! Keep an eye out for my/Mitch's newest adventure coming soon (hopefully sooner then this final chapter came.)
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AbsolutelyNobody
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Awesome, as usual. Thanks for the great story! Lookin' foreward to your next venture.
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