darkrai_90
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Wow.Too funny.8/10.Poor Uxie,Azelf & Mespirit.
The Legend of Thunder: Updated 6/8 Now truly complete!
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Pikamaster
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With all the AMU decks running around I decided I needed to kill them.
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Pikamaster
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Well, um, actually.... It's a possibility.
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charmander rox
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That was the second-most random paragraph ever...
Gotta go get some asprin...
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Okay...
That was the second-most random paragraph ever...
Gotta go get some asprin...
Lucario EX
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^It's "aspirin", not "asprin". 
Pikamaster, unless all the random deaths serve some purpose in the story, try to avoid this sort of thing, 'kay? You're really overdoing it.
Pikamaster, unless all the random deaths serve some purpose in the story, try to avoid this sort of thing, 'kay? You're really overdoing it.
Pikamaster
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They will. Eventually it'll make sense why I killed them all, but for now, enjoy ready the horrible fates I have for them.
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darkrai_90
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When will the next chapter be out ??
Pikamaster
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I have no idea. Whenever I have an idea and have time to write it is when. I'm thinking a max of 3 weeks, but it could be longer or shorter.
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Pikamaster
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Ok. Before you read this, there are a few things that you should know or else this will be confusing. POV means point of view, NOT professor Oak's visit. Secondly, this chapter is Lightning's POV for chapter 5. So I didn't progress farther, but I felt I should post this before chapter 10 is written instead of after it. Here it is, enjoy.
Lightning ran off into the woods crying. “How could he be so mean” she thought to herself. “I just wanted to see if he was alright and yelled at me.” Running to the lake, she jumped in and started to swim. After a few minutes she cooled down and her thoughts became more rational.
“I guess he was just upset about losing to Spark” She thought aloud “After all, he was leader from the time he evolved and beat his own father. I’m going to go apologize to him” Starting to run back to the clearing, Lightning kicked up the soft sand on the lake shore and sent it flying in all directions, including into a couple of Rocket’s eyes.
“There one is!” they shouted and used some sort of hand held device to shoot a dart into Lightning’s neck before she could get away. Consciousness quickly slipped away as one of the two rockets donned rubber gloves and swiftly placed her in a net and started walking towards a black van.
When Lightning woke up, she found she was in a cage in a moving van next to a baby Charmander and a baby Meditite. Looking around, she saw other Pikachus there, all in separate cages. Her heart skipped a beat when she saw that Spark and Thunder weren’t in the cages, but when the van stopped her spirits sank again. Wondering why the Rockets were yelling, Lightning tried, and failed, to break open her cage. Just as she was about to try again, the van started to move again. But this time, Spark quietly opened the doors and started pushing cages out one by one. Lightning questioned him about Thunder, but he ignored her until the only cages left were the Pikachu’s and the cages that held the baby Charmander and the baby Meditite.
“Where’s Thunder?” she asked. But again, the Raichu ignored her and started to push her cage out towards the open doors. “Spark! Even though you’re now the leader I demand you tell me where Thunder is!”
Spark opened his mouth to say something, but then the van went over a bump and Spark was tossed out onto the rocky ground. “He didn’t tell me because Thunder is probably captured or worse.” she thought. And with that horrible notion, Lightning curled up and tried to sleep.
When the van stopped moving again, Lightning rose from her fitful sleep and waited for the Rockets to come. She didn’t have to wait long. The van doors opened and the Rockets came into the van. The look of shock and horror on their faces was a look that Lightning would always love when they saw all but three Pokémon gone.
“We’re dead” the Grunts simultaneously groaned. Their anguish suddenly turning to fury, they grabbed the two cages holding the baby Pokémon and as more Rockets walked by, one with an Eevee in a cage, and as everybody watched, the two Grunts holding the Charmander and Meditite threw them off a cliff.
“We wanted to see if they could fly.” they explained. And as they walked back to the van to get Lightning, the Pikachu could only shiver in terror at what she saw, and the thoughts of what might happen to her.
There ya go. I will throw in a few more chapters like this when I get farther. It will make sense later, but until I write chapter 10 you'll just have to be confused. R&R please.
Chapter 5, Lightning's POV
Lightning ran off into the woods crying. “How could he be so mean” she thought to herself. “I just wanted to see if he was alright and yelled at me.” Running to the lake, she jumped in and started to swim. After a few minutes she cooled down and her thoughts became more rational.
“I guess he was just upset about losing to Spark” She thought aloud “After all, he was leader from the time he evolved and beat his own father. I’m going to go apologize to him” Starting to run back to the clearing, Lightning kicked up the soft sand on the lake shore and sent it flying in all directions, including into a couple of Rocket’s eyes.
“There one is!” they shouted and used some sort of hand held device to shoot a dart into Lightning’s neck before she could get away. Consciousness quickly slipped away as one of the two rockets donned rubber gloves and swiftly placed her in a net and started walking towards a black van.
When Lightning woke up, she found she was in a cage in a moving van next to a baby Charmander and a baby Meditite. Looking around, she saw other Pikachus there, all in separate cages. Her heart skipped a beat when she saw that Spark and Thunder weren’t in the cages, but when the van stopped her spirits sank again. Wondering why the Rockets were yelling, Lightning tried, and failed, to break open her cage. Just as she was about to try again, the van started to move again. But this time, Spark quietly opened the doors and started pushing cages out one by one. Lightning questioned him about Thunder, but he ignored her until the only cages left were the Pikachu’s and the cages that held the baby Charmander and the baby Meditite.
“Where’s Thunder?” she asked. But again, the Raichu ignored her and started to push her cage out towards the open doors. “Spark! Even though you’re now the leader I demand you tell me where Thunder is!”
Spark opened his mouth to say something, but then the van went over a bump and Spark was tossed out onto the rocky ground. “He didn’t tell me because Thunder is probably captured or worse.” she thought. And with that horrible notion, Lightning curled up and tried to sleep.
When the van stopped moving again, Lightning rose from her fitful sleep and waited for the Rockets to come. She didn’t have to wait long. The van doors opened and the Rockets came into the van. The look of shock and horror on their faces was a look that Lightning would always love when they saw all but three Pokémon gone.
“We’re dead” the Grunts simultaneously groaned. Their anguish suddenly turning to fury, they grabbed the two cages holding the baby Pokémon and as more Rockets walked by, one with an Eevee in a cage, and as everybody watched, the two Grunts holding the Charmander and Meditite threw them off a cliff.
“We wanted to see if they could fly.” they explained. And as they walked back to the van to get Lightning, the Pikachu could only shiver in terror at what she saw, and the thoughts of what might happen to her.
There ya go. I will throw in a few more chapters like this when I get farther. It will make sense later, but until I write chapter 10 you'll just have to be confused. R&R please.
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darkrai_90
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Interesting chapter. 8/10.
meditite rox
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Wow, I get to die again...
Pikamaster
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^I told you that you would be back. Chapter 10 will be written A.S.A.P, but I need some time to write it.
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meditite rox
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I was sort of hoping that would mean that I survived but...
Pikamaster
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Don't ya love loop holes?:tongue: I *Might* bring you back for the 2nd time, but that's a small possibility.
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charmander rox
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Ouch!
Falling off a cliff is painful. Especially if you have to do it twice!
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Ouch!
Falling off a cliff is painful. Especially if you have to do it twice!
Pikamaster
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Should I do it a third time? Anyways, I'm not sure when I'm going to have time to write the next chapter, so don't hold your breath for it to be posted soon.
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lol thats funny this is really good as far as ive read
Pikamaster
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Thanks. I'm writing chapter 10, but don't know how long it'll take. Hopefully it'll be up within the week.
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