A story about nine Eevees and a Trainer called Eevee! =0 Chapter TEN OMG Posted!!!!!
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Muscovy Level X
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:lol: This is intresting. I ROFLed (ROFL=Rotation Of Flying Lizards, or Roll On Floor Laughing if you want to be boring) at first, bt Eevee is changing. He's gone from a clueless, reedy kid, to someone very devious and cunning. *Shudders*
Keep it coming!
Keep it coming!
Yes, he is changing. At first, he didn't know anything about Pokemon. He still doesn't, but he thinks they're useless now too. Getting thrown in jail was the last straw. Now, if he can get home, he'll go home. He doesn't want anything to do with Eevee and Jolteon. To him, they are just protectors for him.
IDK when next chapter will be up, but I'll try to get it up soon.
IDK when next chapter will be up, but I'll try to get it up soon.
Ah, sorry it took so long. But I was thining if I liked Horsea, Piplup or Eevee the most now... BUT then Eevee won US Nats in Seniors, SO I'm going to continue this story!
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"Eh, whatever. I'm famous. I don't really care." Eevee said, as he walked away from the wanted poster.l
Eevee and Jolteon followed him into the City. Eevee looked at them, and let them follow him. Then, he saw a Gym.
"Hm... maybe... there'll be someone in there that can tell me how to get home! I mean, the people in it are supposed to know all the Pokemon and other Gym people, right?" Eevee thought out loud.
So, Eevee went into the Gym. It had two sailors, an old man, a bunch of switches on the floor, and 3 electric bars things. Eevee walked across the floor, toward the electric bar things, and one of the sailors saw him. He just went right on past, flicking switches as he went. Every switch he flicked, an electric bar went off.
"Hey! You! You need to battle me!" The sailor shouted at him.
But Eevee just turned around, and pushed him away. The old man by the electric bars (well, they were gone now) came over to him.
"Hey! Boy! You need to battle him in Pokemon! And me, too!" The old man said, but Eevee pushed him aside, too, and went in to see the Gym Leader.
He looked old and grumpy, and was just standing on his podium staring at him. He had a frown on his face.
"Hello! Do you know how to get back to Viridian City?" Eevee asked, waving at him.
"Yes. But you pushed over two of the Gym Trainers."
"Yeah, so? I can do it to you, too, if you want."
"No thanks. I'd sooner arrest you, and I think I will."
"Oh, yeah? You wanna go, bud? Huh? Huh?" Eevee taunted.
"Yeah, I do, kid. so come up here and fight like a man."
Eevee went up to the podium, smiling broadly.
"Okay! Let's get this show on the road!" Eevee said, and then proceeded to punch the man in the face.
"Gr... you're in for it, kid!" He said, turning back to face him and trying to punch him back. However, Eevee ducked, and swept out Surge's legs from underneath him. Then, Eevee started kicking him over and over again.
Surge finally got up, and grabbed Eevee by the throat. But Eevee kicked in the shins a few times, and Surge let go.
"Ow!" Surge cried out, as Eevee stole the badges, and left.
Eevee left, pushing the Gym Trainers out of the way. And so, Eevee is wanted for more things now then what the wanted poster says... he also stole Lt. Surge's Badges, punching and kicking Lt. Surge, and pushing three more Trainers out of the way.
Now, Eevee saw a big boat as he walked out of the Gym, called the S.S. Anne. It seemed to be calling out to him "Eevee! Eevee! Ride me home!" So, Eevee walked past the guard, who started to chase after him, but Eevee stopped suddenly, stuck out his leg behind him, and tripped the guard up.
Then Eevee went through the door or the S.S. Anne, and walked up stairs, where the captain presumably was. When he got to the top cabin, the captain was retching into a bucket.
"Please... rub... my... back... please..." The captain groaned.
"No." Eevee said, throwing the captain outside the cabin and and locking the door.
Eevee then started the boat, and started steering it toward where he thought was Pallet Town, and once he was there, he could go home. Finally!
Oh, right, you know how Eevee the human pwns all the Gym Leaders? Well... Eevee the Pokemon pwns everything too... so it seems right. Don't youy agree? Lol. :tongue::wink:
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Chapter 7 - Fight with Lt. Surge!
"Eh, whatever. I'm famous. I don't really care." Eevee said, as he walked away from the wanted poster.l
Eevee and Jolteon followed him into the City. Eevee looked at them, and let them follow him. Then, he saw a Gym.
"Hm... maybe... there'll be someone in there that can tell me how to get home! I mean, the people in it are supposed to know all the Pokemon and other Gym people, right?" Eevee thought out loud.
So, Eevee went into the Gym. It had two sailors, an old man, a bunch of switches on the floor, and 3 electric bars things. Eevee walked across the floor, toward the electric bar things, and one of the sailors saw him. He just went right on past, flicking switches as he went. Every switch he flicked, an electric bar went off.
"Hey! You! You need to battle me!" The sailor shouted at him.
But Eevee just turned around, and pushed him away. The old man by the electric bars (well, they were gone now) came over to him.
"Hey! Boy! You need to battle him in Pokemon! And me, too!" The old man said, but Eevee pushed him aside, too, and went in to see the Gym Leader.
He looked old and grumpy, and was just standing on his podium staring at him. He had a frown on his face.
"Hello! Do you know how to get back to Viridian City?" Eevee asked, waving at him.
"Yes. But you pushed over two of the Gym Trainers."
"Yeah, so? I can do it to you, too, if you want."
"No thanks. I'd sooner arrest you, and I think I will."
"Oh, yeah? You wanna go, bud? Huh? Huh?" Eevee taunted.
"Yeah, I do, kid. so come up here and fight like a man."
Eevee went up to the podium, smiling broadly.
"Okay! Let's get this show on the road!" Eevee said, and then proceeded to punch the man in the face.
"Gr... you're in for it, kid!" He said, turning back to face him and trying to punch him back. However, Eevee ducked, and swept out Surge's legs from underneath him. Then, Eevee started kicking him over and over again.
Surge finally got up, and grabbed Eevee by the throat. But Eevee kicked in the shins a few times, and Surge let go.
"Ow!" Surge cried out, as Eevee stole the badges, and left.
Eevee left, pushing the Gym Trainers out of the way. And so, Eevee is wanted for more things now then what the wanted poster says... he also stole Lt. Surge's Badges, punching and kicking Lt. Surge, and pushing three more Trainers out of the way.
Now, Eevee saw a big boat as he walked out of the Gym, called the S.S. Anne. It seemed to be calling out to him "Eevee! Eevee! Ride me home!" So, Eevee walked past the guard, who started to chase after him, but Eevee stopped suddenly, stuck out his leg behind him, and tripped the guard up.
Then Eevee went through the door or the S.S. Anne, and walked up stairs, where the captain presumably was. When he got to the top cabin, the captain was retching into a bucket.
"Please... rub... my... back... please..." The captain groaned.
"No." Eevee said, throwing the captain outside the cabin and and locking the door.
Eevee then started the boat, and started steering it toward where he thought was Pallet Town, and once he was there, he could go home. Finally!
Oh, right, you know how Eevee the human pwns all the Gym Leaders? Well... Eevee the Pokemon pwns everything too... so it seems right. Don't youy agree? Lol. :tongue::wink:
LegendaryLugia
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Eevee is so busted! It would be so cool if they made a pokemon game like this: attack gym leaders, break out of jails, dodge trainers, steal the S.S Anne...
lol: very very funny
lol: very very funny
OMG, yeah, you are so right! A Pokemon game made after this... LOL! Unfortunatly, it would have to be rated T or something, due to the violence, and stuff like stealing. And little kids wouldn't be allowed to buy it, so they would lose half their customers or something... but still, it WOULD be fun! =D
LegendaryLugia
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They could call it Pokemon: Rogue Eevee version.
What kind of Captain has seasickness?
Just a little technical glitch.
What kind of Captain has seasickness?
Just a little technical glitch.
SandsrewClaw
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I like Eevee. Or maybe I just like to say Eevee. Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeveeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
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Post the next chapter!
Chapter 8: Eeveeville!
Knock! Knock! Knock! Eevee, steering the S.S. Anne, heard a knocking at the door. He ignored it.
20 seconds later, he heard a voice call out from the door, "Sir, why are we going north?"
North? Eevee thought, We're going south, to Pallet Town!
"Sir? Why are we going north? Please answer me!"
Eevee didn't answer, but instead turned the boat around. Eeveryone on the boat, except Eevee, fell.
"SIR! YOU HAVE TO GIVE US WARNING WHEN YOU ARE GOING TO TURN THE BOAT SO SHARPLY!"
"Oh, please." Eevee groaned, leaving the steering wheel. He went out side, grabbed the girl out side, and threw her overboard, "Ahhhhh... that feels better..." Eevee said to himself.
He closed and locked the door, and went back to the wheel.
But not 5 minutes later, someone else was knocking at the door. Knock! Knock! Knock!
He ignored that one, too.
"Sir! Why are we heading east, towards land?" The man shouted from behind the door. Eevee, looking out the window, noticed this was true. They were right off land, and Eevee couldn't turn it the S.S. Anne in time. They were going to crash.
Ignoring the man, knocking on his door and crying out to him, he looked at the window he had thrown the captain and the girl out of. Then, he picked up Eevee and Jolteon, they had followed him in, and, thankfully, were sitting in a corner, waiting, docile. Then he went over to to the window, with Eevee and Jolteon in hs arms, and jumped out of it.
"WHEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!" Eevee cried, until he hit the water.
He started swimming to land, and the ship, captainless, went on at a great higher speed. Before he had jumped, he had turnedthe ships speed onto full power. So everyone in the ship couldn't find out where their captain was, and who was actually steering their ship.
Evetually, long after the boat had crashed, Eevee reached land. They were north of all normal activities. Eevee asked where he was.
"Where are we?" Eevee asked someone.
"We're in Eeveeville." The man said.
"Eeveeville? Why is everything called EEVEE?" Eevee cried out.
"I don't know. There's the Eeveecenter, over there. That's where everyone gets their news about wht's happening on the Pokemon world, down south. I see... you have an Eevee with you..." And suddenly, he got down on his hands and kness and started bowing.... to Eevee (the Pokemon).
Eevee (the human) picked up Eevee (the Pokemon) and Jolteon, ran away south, where he hoped to get back home to Viridian City.
...But that was not to be. The man who had told him about Eeveeville ran up to him, and said, "Please, oh Eevee bearer, please, come with me to Eeveecenter, where we will greet you warmly and as a god. At least, we will treat your Eevee as a god."
"NO! I don't care about this stupid village, or your stupid town center!" Eevee shouted at the man, pushing him away.
But more Eeveevillagers were blocking his path.
"Get... out... of... my... way!" Eevee shouted at them, but they wouldn't move. He charged forward, and batted them aside, but more grabbed him. Kicking out, Eevee tried to squirm free, but these were grown men, and he was only sixteen.
Eevee and Jolteon fell out of his arms. Eevee cried, a long cry, that was wierd. It souded like "EEEEEEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOONNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"
Then, suddenly, a creature came out of nowhere. It was purple, and had a red gem on it's forhead. It blasted the Eeveevillagers off of him with psychic powers. Eevee kicked free of the last one, and then started running south, at top speed, away from Eeveeville, with Jolteon, Eevee, and the new one following, close behind him.
"Bye, Eeveevillagers! Hope to never see you again! And remember the name of the one who escaped from you - Eevee, the human!" Eevee shouted out to the Eeveevillagers as he ran away from their stupid village that he hoped never to return to.
Knock! Knock! Knock! Eevee, steering the S.S. Anne, heard a knocking at the door. He ignored it.
20 seconds later, he heard a voice call out from the door, "Sir, why are we going north?"
North? Eevee thought, We're going south, to Pallet Town!
"Sir? Why are we going north? Please answer me!"
Eevee didn't answer, but instead turned the boat around. Eeveryone on the boat, except Eevee, fell.
"SIR! YOU HAVE TO GIVE US WARNING WHEN YOU ARE GOING TO TURN THE BOAT SO SHARPLY!"
"Oh, please." Eevee groaned, leaving the steering wheel. He went out side, grabbed the girl out side, and threw her overboard, "Ahhhhh... that feels better..." Eevee said to himself.
He closed and locked the door, and went back to the wheel.
But not 5 minutes later, someone else was knocking at the door. Knock! Knock! Knock!
He ignored that one, too.
"Sir! Why are we heading east, towards land?" The man shouted from behind the door. Eevee, looking out the window, noticed this was true. They were right off land, and Eevee couldn't turn it the S.S. Anne in time. They were going to crash.
Ignoring the man, knocking on his door and crying out to him, he looked at the window he had thrown the captain and the girl out of. Then, he picked up Eevee and Jolteon, they had followed him in, and, thankfully, were sitting in a corner, waiting, docile. Then he went over to to the window, with Eevee and Jolteon in hs arms, and jumped out of it.
"WHEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!" Eevee cried, until he hit the water.
He started swimming to land, and the ship, captainless, went on at a great higher speed. Before he had jumped, he had turnedthe ships speed onto full power. So everyone in the ship couldn't find out where their captain was, and who was actually steering their ship.
Evetually, long after the boat had crashed, Eevee reached land. They were north of all normal activities. Eevee asked where he was.
"Where are we?" Eevee asked someone.
"We're in Eeveeville." The man said.
"Eeveeville? Why is everything called EEVEE?" Eevee cried out.
"I don't know. There's the Eeveecenter, over there. That's where everyone gets their news about wht's happening on the Pokemon world, down south. I see... you have an Eevee with you..." And suddenly, he got down on his hands and kness and started bowing.... to Eevee (the Pokemon).
Eevee (the human) picked up Eevee (the Pokemon) and Jolteon, ran away south, where he hoped to get back home to Viridian City.
...But that was not to be. The man who had told him about Eeveeville ran up to him, and said, "Please, oh Eevee bearer, please, come with me to Eeveecenter, where we will greet you warmly and as a god. At least, we will treat your Eevee as a god."
"NO! I don't care about this stupid village, or your stupid town center!" Eevee shouted at the man, pushing him away.
But more Eeveevillagers were blocking his path.
"Get... out... of... my... way!" Eevee shouted at them, but they wouldn't move. He charged forward, and batted them aside, but more grabbed him. Kicking out, Eevee tried to squirm free, but these were grown men, and he was only sixteen.
Eevee and Jolteon fell out of his arms. Eevee cried, a long cry, that was wierd. It souded like "EEEEEEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOONNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"
Then, suddenly, a creature came out of nowhere. It was purple, and had a red gem on it's forhead. It blasted the Eeveevillagers off of him with psychic powers. Eevee kicked free of the last one, and then started running south, at top speed, away from Eeveeville, with Jolteon, Eevee, and the new one following, close behind him.
"Bye, Eeveevillagers! Hope to never see you again! And remember the name of the one who escaped from you - Eevee, the human!" Eevee shouted out to the Eeveevillagers as he ran away from their stupid village that he hoped never to return to.
charmander rox
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Wait, so Eevee didn't want to stay in Eeveeville, where it would be treated as a god? The S. S. Anne crashed, what a shame. Eevee is so mean. He deserves to be burned at the stake in Eeveeville.
Eeveeville doesn't really have a point in the plot, does it?
Eeveeville doesn't really have a point in the plot, does it?
charmander rox
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So, why again did Eevee deny itself the life of a god?
Well, even though Eevee (the human) treated it like trash, it still thought that Eevee (the human) loved it, and when it saw that the Eeveevillagers were capturing Eevee, it didn't like them, so it called up Espeon.
OH, right, and BTW... Espeon is the original Espeon, posted in the prologue. At the end, the prologue will come together with the actual story.
OH, right, and BTW... Espeon is the original Espeon, posted in the prologue. At the end, the prologue will come together with the actual story.
LegendaryLugia
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Looking good!
What happens to all the people on the S.S Anne? If they die, Eevee will be a murderer!
What happens to all the people on the S.S Anne? If they die, Eevee will be a murderer!