afstandopleren
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This is my first Pokemon fan fic. I will be needing a lot of help so please bear with me...
NOTE: I really have no idea for a good title. When the story progresses, I would love to hear some ideas.
This story will be about a huge disaster looming over our world and the world of Pokemon.
NOTE: You might want to use CTRL+F to jump to the Chapter that you want to read.
Chapter List:
Prologue
Chapter 1: The Envelope
Chapter 2: Distorted
Chapter 3: In the 'Here and Between'
Chapter 4: Encountering Imperfection
Chapter 5: End of Time
Chapter 6: Seeking the Renegade
Prologue:
"RHOOAARHH!!!!"
A huge creature with a strange colored gem of some sort, awakens from a deep slumber.
Women: "We have got visual from our cam in the Between, sir"
Man: "Great, Grunt #4, get the machine and lock on to it A.S.A.P!"
Grunt #4: "The machine has a lock on it, sir!"
Man: "Fire at will, we must infuriate it if the plan is going to succeed!!.
Grunt #4: "Aye, sir!"
*A huge twirling beam is shot from a strange machine at the creature*
"RHOOAAARRGHH!!!"
Grunt #3: "Impact confirmed"
Man: "Any signs of damage on our target yet!?"
Grunt #3: "No sir!"
Man: "Then fire again at will!! My plan MUST succeed!!"
*Another beam is shot a the creature*
*The creature receives a severe blow to the shoulder while trying to evade the beam*
*-Crack-*
Grunt#3: "Damage on the Lustrous Orb confirmed, sir!"
Man: "And what is Palkia's reaction?"
Grunt#3: "It does not seem to re- OH SH---!!!*
*Palkia unleashes a Spacial Rend attack on the the machine and the camera.*
*A huge explosion follows*
Grunt#1: "Close the portal, NOW!!!!"
Grunt#2: "Trying, but the R.I.F.T. machine seems to be stuck"
Grunt#1: "Then do something about it or all **** will break loose!"
Grunt#2: "OH GOD, I can see Palkia on the other side of the portal!!! CAN ANYONE HELP ME!!??"
"RHOOAARHH!!!!"
*Palkia charges up a Hyper Beam and shoots it at the portal*
*Portal closes only inches away from the approaching Hyper Beam*
Man: "I will harness your power... Palkia... You WILL BE MINE!!!"
End of Prologue
Chapter 1 - The Envelope
-19 Years later-
"RHOOAARHH!!!!"
*Palkia charges up a Hyper Beam and shoots it at the portal*
*Portal closes only inches away from the approaching Hyper Beam*
Man: "I will harness your power... Palkia... You WILL BE MINE!!!"
"NOOOOO-Whoa!"
*Beng!*
In a small town in Johto, a boy wakes up from a nightmare.
"Zaro, are alright up there!?"
Zaro: "Yeah mom, I'm absolution fine! Just had another nightmare making me fall out of my bed....AGAIN!!"
Meowth: "Meowth?"
"Goodmorning Bibi, I hope you have slept better then me. I just had another nightmare..That's all.. *Sigh*"
Zaro stood up and started getting ready for another day.
Being glad he did not have to school, he was also very bothered by the fact that he did not know what to do next with his life.
Once downstairs:
Mom: "Good morning hun, how did you sleep tonight before falling out of your bed again?"
Zaro: "I'll eat first if you don't mind. I'm very hungry."
Mom: "You should be, it's almost lunchtime!"
Zaro grabs a box of Butterfree-O's and empty's it in a bowl.
Zaro: "Hey, where is the Miltank Milk?"
Mom: "Chryser also took Butterfree-O's for breakfast. I guess he thereby took the last drops of milk."
Zaro was very annoyed since breakfast became more of a chore since almost every morning since his mother got a new friend, his favorite breakfast would miss an ingredient . "Just another thing to be annoyed about." he would think then.
After deciding he would just switch to bread, his mom said:
"Look, their is Pelipper with the mail"
"Mail?? On Sunday!?
*Clunk*
"I'll get it!"
"No you don't, you are still in your pajama! If you are going outside, you put your clothes on first!"
"Oh, right..."
Zaro goes upstairs and gets dressed.
Thoughts passing through like "Why did she have to be in love?" and "So...what's going to be boring about today?"
Finally ready for the mail, Zaro steps out of the front door in a hurry but suddenly stops in his tracks on the way to the mailbox.
"Who's there!?"
Zaro turns around but only sees his own house.
Creeped out by the feeling of someone standing right behind him, he grabs the mail.
Just a single letter with a weird glow around it. No address or any word of some kind.
Zaro tries to open it, but he can't.
'What the...??'
He tries to wedge a nail in the sleuth of the envelope but it did not budge. It did not even tear up.
Angry and annoyed, he keeps trying to open the envelope until he hears a familiar voice.
Girl: "Hey Zaro! Missed me!?"
Zaro: "Erh what??"
Zaro looks up, still a bit occupied with the envelope and sees a familiar girl, also age 19 with deep grey eyes and red hair with 2 pony tails accompanied by a Gardevoir.
Zaro: "Excuse me, do I know you??"
Girl: "Come on Zaro! That's not funny and that is no way to treat the new Grand Champion!
Zaro: "New Grand Champion?? Hmmm, sorry does not ring a bell."
Zaro continues to try to open the strange envelope.
Girl, angry while grinding her teeth: "Aaargh, you are not going to tell me that you have forgot the girl next door; Mayle! IT''S ONLY BEEN 7 YEARS!"
Zaro ignores her being very occupied with the envelope.
Mayle: "Give me that!"
*Pulls the envelope from Zaro's hands and tries to tear the envelope apart in anger*
Mayle: "GNNNNNN!!!!! Aaargh, what the HECK!?"
Zaro having snap t back into reality: "Oh yeah, now I remember you! Hi Mayle, Grand Champion huh!?"
Now Mayle is occupied with the envelope, also not being able to grasp why a simple piece of paper is so indestructible.
Zaro: (-_-') "Okaay.............."
Gardy: "Gardevior!"
Mayle's Gardevoir, Gardy, uses Psychic to take the envelope out of harms way. Clearly having enough of this silly situation and feeling the needles anger of her trainer.
Now Mayle snap's back into reality: "Uuuh YEAH! I got all the Ribbons and some Badges all the way obviously. MAN, I have so much to tell and talk about!"
Zaro: "I can only imagine! *Laughs* But have you said 'Hi' to your parents yet..?"
Mayle: "Well, no one is home at the moment. I expected them home but...... "
Zaro: "In that case, do you want to wait for them at my house?"
Mayle: "Do you even have to ask? *Laughs*"
Once inside, Gardy puts the envelope on the coffee table.
Mom: "Oh Hi Mayle, long time no see! You have grown and so has your Ralts obviously."
Mayle: "Hello, yes and thank for still knowing who I am. *Points towards Zaro*"
Zaro: "Hey!"
Mom: "Oh, what!? Zaro, how many times have I got to tell you.........."
Zaro interupts his mom.
Zaro: "Yeah yeah, mom, I know! I KNOW"
A few minutes later, everyone sits in the living room, drinking and chatting.
Mayle tells about her and Gardy's travel and how they won the Grand Festival and Zaro tells about the divorce of his parents.
*A car driving at high speed through the street gets into a slip and slams into a tree*
"What was that!?"
The five run outside only to see a wreck, completely total loss, against a tree in the garden of the neighbors across the street, drawing quite a crowd from the people and Pokemon in the street.
A man manages to step out of the wreckage, white as a sheet of paper and falls down on the ground, wheezing and desperate for air.
Zaro, Bibi and Mayle, Gardy where one of the first to come to the rescue but it was too late. Man passed away with an empty look on his face.
*Tick tick tick tick tick ticktickticktick*
Women: "Everyone get back, the car is going to explode!"
Everyone near the car runs away to a safe distance.
*Pshhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh......BZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZT..........PHWOOOSH!*
Instead of exploding, the car became engulfed in a round hole of some sort, 2 meters in diameter. Like a black hole, it pulled everything in range towards it and sucking it up.
The wreckage got completely torn apart. Any small explosions were also swallowed by the purple, blue and black-ish hole.
However, the gravity the hole produced only had a range of 4 meters. No one was in the vicinity so no one got swallowed.
After everyone standing with their mouths open for 5 minutes, the hole disappeared.
Leaving only a big gap in the ground as if a comet had fallen there. The dead man, the tree and the card were no more.
Everything was gone in that area.
No one standing there could grasp what happened. No theories and no explanations. Only headaches.
After having stood there for a while, mumbling and talking for as what had happened, everyone went back into their houses. Slightly in shock and desperate for a painkiller for their headaches.
End of Chapter 1
I'm continuing tomorrow.
I hope I got peoples interest.
Keep checking back every now and then due to update's I'll be making.
NOTE: I really have no idea for a good title. When the story progresses, I would love to hear some ideas.
This story will be about a huge disaster looming over our world and the world of Pokemon.
NOTE: You might want to use CTRL+F to jump to the Chapter that you want to read.
Chapter List:
Prologue
Chapter 1: The Envelope
Chapter 2: Distorted
Chapter 3: In the 'Here and Between'
Chapter 4: Encountering Imperfection
Chapter 5: End of Time
Chapter 6: Seeking the Renegade
Prologue:
"RHOOAARHH!!!!"
A huge creature with a strange colored gem of some sort, awakens from a deep slumber.
Women: "We have got visual from our cam in the Between, sir"
Man: "Great, Grunt #4, get the machine and lock on to it A.S.A.P!"
Grunt #4: "The machine has a lock on it, sir!"
Man: "Fire at will, we must infuriate it if the plan is going to succeed!!.
Grunt #4: "Aye, sir!"
*A huge twirling beam is shot from a strange machine at the creature*
"RHOOAAARRGHH!!!"
Grunt #3: "Impact confirmed"
Man: "Any signs of damage on our target yet!?"
Grunt #3: "No sir!"
Man: "Then fire again at will!! My plan MUST succeed!!"
*Another beam is shot a the creature*
*The creature receives a severe blow to the shoulder while trying to evade the beam*
*-Crack-*
Grunt#3: "Damage on the Lustrous Orb confirmed, sir!"
Man: "And what is Palkia's reaction?"
Grunt#3: "It does not seem to re- OH SH---!!!*
*Palkia unleashes a Spacial Rend attack on the the machine and the camera.*
*A huge explosion follows*
Grunt#1: "Close the portal, NOW!!!!"
Grunt#2: "Trying, but the R.I.F.T. machine seems to be stuck"
Grunt#1: "Then do something about it or all **** will break loose!"
Grunt#2: "OH GOD, I can see Palkia on the other side of the portal!!! CAN ANYONE HELP ME!!??"
"RHOOAARHH!!!!"
*Palkia charges up a Hyper Beam and shoots it at the portal*
*Portal closes only inches away from the approaching Hyper Beam*
Man: "I will harness your power... Palkia... You WILL BE MINE!!!"
End of Prologue
Chapter 1 - The Envelope
-19 Years later-
"RHOOAARHH!!!!"
*Palkia charges up a Hyper Beam and shoots it at the portal*
*Portal closes only inches away from the approaching Hyper Beam*
Man: "I will harness your power... Palkia... You WILL BE MINE!!!"
"NOOOOO-Whoa!"
*Beng!*
In a small town in Johto, a boy wakes up from a nightmare.
"Zaro, are alright up there!?"
Zaro: "Yeah mom, I'm absolution fine! Just had another nightmare making me fall out of my bed....AGAIN!!"
Meowth: "Meowth?"
"Goodmorning Bibi, I hope you have slept better then me. I just had another nightmare..That's all.. *Sigh*"
Zaro stood up and started getting ready for another day.
Being glad he did not have to school, he was also very bothered by the fact that he did not know what to do next with his life.
Once downstairs:
Mom: "Good morning hun, how did you sleep tonight before falling out of your bed again?"
Zaro: "I'll eat first if you don't mind. I'm very hungry."
Mom: "You should be, it's almost lunchtime!"
Zaro grabs a box of Butterfree-O's and empty's it in a bowl.
Zaro: "Hey, where is the Miltank Milk?"
Mom: "Chryser also took Butterfree-O's for breakfast. I guess he thereby took the last drops of milk."
Zaro was very annoyed since breakfast became more of a chore since almost every morning since his mother got a new friend, his favorite breakfast would miss an ingredient . "Just another thing to be annoyed about." he would think then.
After deciding he would just switch to bread, his mom said:
"Look, their is Pelipper with the mail"
"Mail?? On Sunday!?
*Clunk*
"I'll get it!"
"No you don't, you are still in your pajama! If you are going outside, you put your clothes on first!"
"Oh, right..."
Zaro goes upstairs and gets dressed.
Thoughts passing through like "Why did she have to be in love?" and "So...what's going to be boring about today?"
Finally ready for the mail, Zaro steps out of the front door in a hurry but suddenly stops in his tracks on the way to the mailbox.
"Who's there!?"
Zaro turns around but only sees his own house.
Creeped out by the feeling of someone standing right behind him, he grabs the mail.
Just a single letter with a weird glow around it. No address or any word of some kind.
Zaro tries to open it, but he can't.
'What the...??'
He tries to wedge a nail in the sleuth of the envelope but it did not budge. It did not even tear up.
Angry and annoyed, he keeps trying to open the envelope until he hears a familiar voice.
Girl: "Hey Zaro! Missed me!?"
Zaro: "Erh what??"
Zaro looks up, still a bit occupied with the envelope and sees a familiar girl, also age 19 with deep grey eyes and red hair with 2 pony tails accompanied by a Gardevoir.
Zaro: "Excuse me, do I know you??"
Girl: "Come on Zaro! That's not funny and that is no way to treat the new Grand Champion!
Zaro: "New Grand Champion?? Hmmm, sorry does not ring a bell."
Zaro continues to try to open the strange envelope.
Girl, angry while grinding her teeth: "Aaargh, you are not going to tell me that you have forgot the girl next door; Mayle! IT''S ONLY BEEN 7 YEARS!"
Zaro ignores her being very occupied with the envelope.
Mayle: "Give me that!"
*Pulls the envelope from Zaro's hands and tries to tear the envelope apart in anger*
Mayle: "GNNNNNN!!!!! Aaargh, what the HECK!?"
Zaro having snap t back into reality: "Oh yeah, now I remember you! Hi Mayle, Grand Champion huh!?"
Now Mayle is occupied with the envelope, also not being able to grasp why a simple piece of paper is so indestructible.
Zaro: (-_-') "Okaay.............."
Gardy: "Gardevior!"
Mayle's Gardevoir, Gardy, uses Psychic to take the envelope out of harms way. Clearly having enough of this silly situation and feeling the needles anger of her trainer.
Now Mayle snap's back into reality: "Uuuh YEAH! I got all the Ribbons and some Badges all the way obviously. MAN, I have so much to tell and talk about!"
Zaro: "I can only imagine! *Laughs* But have you said 'Hi' to your parents yet..?"
Mayle: "Well, no one is home at the moment. I expected them home but...... "
Zaro: "In that case, do you want to wait for them at my house?"
Mayle: "Do you even have to ask? *Laughs*"
Once inside, Gardy puts the envelope on the coffee table.
Mom: "Oh Hi Mayle, long time no see! You have grown and so has your Ralts obviously."
Mayle: "Hello, yes and thank for still knowing who I am. *Points towards Zaro*"
Zaro: "Hey!"
Mom: "Oh, what!? Zaro, how many times have I got to tell you.........."
Zaro interupts his mom.
Zaro: "Yeah yeah, mom, I know! I KNOW"
A few minutes later, everyone sits in the living room, drinking and chatting.
Mayle tells about her and Gardy's travel and how they won the Grand Festival and Zaro tells about the divorce of his parents.
*A car driving at high speed through the street gets into a slip and slams into a tree*
"What was that!?"
The five run outside only to see a wreck, completely total loss, against a tree in the garden of the neighbors across the street, drawing quite a crowd from the people and Pokemon in the street.
A man manages to step out of the wreckage, white as a sheet of paper and falls down on the ground, wheezing and desperate for air.
Zaro, Bibi and Mayle, Gardy where one of the first to come to the rescue but it was too late. Man passed away with an empty look on his face.
*Tick tick tick tick tick ticktickticktick*
Women: "Everyone get back, the car is going to explode!"
Everyone near the car runs away to a safe distance.
*Pshhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh......BZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZT..........PHWOOOSH!*
Instead of exploding, the car became engulfed in a round hole of some sort, 2 meters in diameter. Like a black hole, it pulled everything in range towards it and sucking it up.
The wreckage got completely torn apart. Any small explosions were also swallowed by the purple, blue and black-ish hole.
However, the gravity the hole produced only had a range of 4 meters. No one was in the vicinity so no one got swallowed.
After everyone standing with their mouths open for 5 minutes, the hole disappeared.
Leaving only a big gap in the ground as if a comet had fallen there. The dead man, the tree and the card were no more.
Everything was gone in that area.
No one standing there could grasp what happened. No theories and no explanations. Only headaches.
After having stood there for a while, mumbling and talking for as what had happened, everyone went back into their houses. Slightly in shock and desperate for a painkiller for their headaches.
End of Chapter 1
I'm continuing tomorrow.
I hope I got peoples interest.
Keep checking back every now and then due to update's I'll be making.
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