Gardyrocks! said:
How can u type 4 so long??
How can you type with such noobness?
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Ok, i made a mistake in the last chapter that i intend to correct...
Scarmory went south of pallet town, to Hotfoot City in the Crench region right? So how did he get to Pewter City and ambush AggRon and Metagross? He's an idiot! He flew to south, and went all the way around the world and saw the 2 heros fighting Tresaforce, so he landed and charged metagross..
Oh... and about sabrina... Here we go!
Chapter 11: The mother of all Metal Pokemon! And just what happened with Sabrina? CAN ANY ONE EVER KNOW!? DOES ANYONE CARE!? (PM me about this, seriously)
In Lilycove City~~
Sabrina: Hey! Where'd they go!
Sabrina looks all over Lilycove City with Alakazam (fa sho), but find nothing.
Sabrina: Alakazam! I looked all over Lilycove City with you, but found nothing!
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Alakazam: Fa Sho
~~In Pewter~~
Siezor: Damn... they're gone! *sees Metagross and AggRon flying towards Pallet Town* Hm... I better follor those two!
[Note: AggRon can fly now, just because]
AggRon: Whee! Flying is so fun.
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Metagross: Yea it is.
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Mini-Met: Hi!
A very small Metagross flies upto the heros, and flies all around them laughing evily.
Metagross: Uh... Hey Mini-Met.
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Mini-Met: Where ya guys goin'?
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Metagross: Pallet Town, to find something out.
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AggRon: Yea. So bug off will ya?
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Metagross: No.. it's alright Ron. Mini-Met, would you like to come with us? Your small but I hear you pack quite a Hyper Beam!
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Mini-Met: ME!? TRAVEL WITH YOU!? WHEE!!!!!!
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Mini-Met flies around gleefully
Metagross: So we goin or not?
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Mini-Met: Lets get to it! c'mon! Pick up the pace guys!
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Metagross: Alright AggRon, you heard our "team mate"... Lets go!
Metagross and Mini-Met fly off quickly, leaving AggRon behind.
AggRon: I DIDN'T AGREE TO THIS! *flying after them*
Siezor: Hm... *makes a cross face* It seems I may be able to use Metagross through that little one... Good thing Mini-Met is on the side of the Metal Menace!
Siezor speeds of in persuit of his prey, but makes sure to keep distance.
~~In Pallet Town~~
Comma: Whee! *runs around in a circle* I'm just so happy! ALL THE TIME! (shameless Invader Zim plug, buy the DVDs) I wonder if i'll die today? nah. *continues running around*
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Ma 'Ill: Haha!
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Comma: AH! Its a mawile. I thought you were native to hoenn only...
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Ma ' Ill: *uses hyper beam to destroy all the buildings and people in pallet town besides comma*
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Comma: Jeez man!
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Ma 'Ill: That's WOMAN.. to you.
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Comma: Sorry... I geuss. *hits Ma 'Ill with a baseball bat*
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Ma 'Ill: X_X
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Comma: And i'm sorry to all you readers for using a smiley to show Ma 'Ill's expression... i'll stop that. Maybe. No, no I won't.
Metagross, Mini-Met, and AggRon fly into Pallet town and crash land in a crater near Comma, making the crater even deeper.
Comma: WOAH! A METAGROSS!
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Metagross: It's your story... You wrote me in here.
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Mini-Met: And me too! I'm the one who led Siezor to you!
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Metagross: Siezor?
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Mini-Met: He's this one Scizor... I think he's in a club called the Metal Menace?
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Comma: Hm... I didn't write that!
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Metagross: THE METAL MENACE?! OH CRAP! *turns around* Sure enough... their is Siezor about to slam me into the ocean...
Siezor flies upto Metagross, and slams him into the ocean.
Mini-Met: Sorry Metagross... But I agree that the world should be Metal Pokemon Only.
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Metagross: *hovering above the ocean* But what about Pokemon that evolve into metal types?
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Siezor: We arn't stupid... Of course we won't kill them.
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AggRon: *grabs comma's baseball bat and cracks it into siezors head*
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Siezor: You are such an idiot! *holds claw upto AggRons mouth and does a hyper beam*
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AggRon: Oh CRAP! *jettisoned (typo i don't care) into the air, and slams down on his back hard* {weakly} Mommy...
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Metagross: You f(a jet plane passes by and cuts Metagross off, but he continues speaking, and only Comma, Siezor, and Mini-Met can hear him) and then you use it as a fake calling card!
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Siezor: Such profanity! *Sends a hyper beam in metagross's direction, but he quickly uses Earth Quake and KOs the evil siezor*
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Metagross: This shall never be used for evil again...
Siezors head falls off, to reveal wires and oil... It was a robot.
Metagross: *picks the robot up psychicly* Now to dispose of this wreckage...
Metagross uses Siesmic Toss (do you think I care that he can't use it? Don't PM me about this) to throw Siezors remains into the sea.
Comma: *sits down hard and thinks* I remember writing all this in a notebook... but I remember Mini-Met being good...
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Mini-Met: Of course I'm good! How could there be an evil metagross?
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Metagross: He has a point ya know...
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Comma: Yes... hm, mabye if we find this notebook, we can find out whats going to happen, and stop it before its done?
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AggRon: Wouldnt that be changing the future?
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Comma: Yes, and no. It would be, because we know what'll happen before its going to happen. And no, because we havnt traveled back in time yet.
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AggRon: But... If we know what will happen... doesn't that mean that if we change it it'll have a drastic effect on the future?
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Comma: I don't think so, because if i hadnt wrote the book in the first place, we wouldnt be here, so we wouldnt be able to find out whats going to happen, so we couldnt change it.
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AggRon: But if you hadnt written it then the present would be different.
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Comma: Or if i wrote something different, Like the Metal Menace not comming into existance ever, then all of Kanto wouldnt be destroyed... and all these lives wouldnt be lost.
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AggRon: That makes no sense, because you had no idea that your book would come to life and be so evily true.
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Comma: It makes perfect sense because my innocense of not knowing the future allowed me to write the book. If I had known that this would all happen, then i wouldnt have written it at all.
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Metagross: So what your saying, is if we find the notebook and read it... and find out how to stop the Metal Menace... then our brains will explode from knowing the future?
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Comma: Exactly!
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AggRon: *gets up from the hole in the ground that he made, and brushes dust off* But don't you remeber what happens?
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Comma: No... i dont even remember comming to pallet town!
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AggRon: Where did you live before you came here?
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Comma: St. John, of the Portland section of the OREGONED region... it's pretty far from here. And Pokemon are rarely seen.
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AggRon: if we go there do you think the book will be there?
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Metagross: What are you saying? We goto St. John and go find that book?
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AggRon: No... Mini Met can fly there with Comma, Comma you have a metagross right?
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Comma: Yes... 6 of them.
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Metagross: SO they can get the book and we can stall the Metal Menace.
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Comma: MeteorMash! GO! *throws a pokeball and an oversized metagross *about as big as a snorlax comes out of the pokeball* Lets fly home!
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Mini-Met: Be carefull Metagross... the Metal Menace think i'm on their side, but I can't aid you any longer. I must go with Comma to keep him safe.
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Metagross: Go young one... It was nice spending time with you.
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Comma: MeteorMash, Mini-Met, lets go!
The 2 metagross and Comma fly off toward St. John, as AggRon and Metagross start to recuperate from the battle.
~~In Johto
Tone-Manga: MAGNET PULSE!
The oversized Magneton pulls all the Magnemite and Magneton from all over the world, from all the wilds of the world, and all the trainers of the world, and fuses them to him, creating an even bigger Magneton than before. Harnessing the power of all the Magnet Pokemon in the world... Tone-Manga becomes an even bigger force to be recconed with!
~~In Hoenn's Ancient Tomb
Registeel: *wakes up* Hm??? *stretches* OH MAN that was once long sleep.
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Researcher: HOLYCRAPITSAWAKEANDITCANSPEAKENGLISHOMIGODOMIGOD OH MY GOD!
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Registeel: Not so loud, I just woke up.
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Researcher: Sorry... Can I get a photo with you?
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Registeel: Make it quick, i have some brothers to awaken and retake the worlding to do... My day planner is full.
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Researcher: Oh boy! The column will go crazy for this! *sets up a camera and gets in front of registeel*
The camera goes off as blood hits the lens... Registeel glares and slashes the wall of the tomb with his bloody claws.
Registeel: I AM A FORCE TO BE OW! Damn echo!
~~Somewhere in south pallet sea...
Lights flash from Siezors mangled body.
A voice calls out: Auto repair system activated. Initiating reboot program. Siezor X-001 Re-Activation sequence now comencing. Reprogramm... Reprogramming Halted. Operation: Metal Revival still intact. Siezor X-001 Can not be reborn. To much damage sustained. Siezor X002 through X-999 will be activated to carry out Siezor X-001's Mission. All functions of X-001 Will now halt. Have a nice day.
~~Somewhere in the Shuffled Region
In Groove Laboratorys... somewhere deep underground... the story is about to take a turn for the worse!
Metalix: Hm... so Siezer has fallen? Oh well, No Problem. Tresaforce, Ma' Ill, and Scarmory should be able to handle it.
Three lights fade from the computer moniter Metalix is looking at.
Metalix: WHAT?! Tresaforce, Ma' Ill, and Scarmory have been deactivated?! IMPOSSIBLE!
Metalix reads through their failure readings.
It seems Scarmory fell in a large pit dug by Jessie and James... and he got stuck, and deactivated himself.
Tresaforce was dragged into Tone Manga's mangnet pulse, and "her" energy was sapped right into Tone Manga's energy reserves.
And Ma' Ill took a crack from Comma's Bat and "her" Jaw broke... her memory unit was there. So once it was gone the whole body just shut down.
Metalix: THIS IS GOING TOO FAR! THOSE 2 ROGUE POKEMON ARE GOING TO RUIN EVERYTHING! It's time I sprung into action... Computer! Activate Tresaforce, Ma' Ill, and Scarmory models x-002 through X-999...
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Computer: So... start plan B?
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Metalix: YES! DO IT ALREADY!
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Computer: Fine... jerk
A large ammount of whirring begins... hundreds of doors open along with a sunroof.
Metalix: MY CREATIONS!!! ACTIVATE!!! GO FORTH AND DESTROY THAT DUO OF POKEMON! They must be stopped for my realization to be completed.
The Robotic metal pokemon fly out from the Laboratory, all 2997 of them...
Metalix: Beautifullll... Such an amazing show of power and workmanship.
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Registeel: *breaks down the laboratory door with a large ammount of other pokemon* Your time is up Metalix...
The pokemon include: Regiice, Regirock, Regiflare, Regidrop, Regileaf, Regizap, Regisky, Regidrake, Regispecter, Regibug, Regipsy, Regitoxin, Regifight, Regiground, and Regidark.
Metalix: NO! ALL THE REGI!? *sends a hyper beam and all but Regiice and Regirock die. Regispected just dies too*
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Registeel: Well that sucked. YOUR REIGN OF TERROR IS OVER! THE WORLD IS OURS!
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Metalix: *burrows too far underground for any of the regi to trace him*
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Regirock: DAMMIT! You couldn't kill him?
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Registeel: Sorry! Just jump in and follow him.
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Regi-Ice: Uh... guys. The hole just filled up with water.
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Registeel: DARN! Looks like its my job. *jumps in*
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Regirock: Lets go kill those robots before they destroy our world
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Regi-ice: Right!
To may plot lines? No, i don't think so.
Tone Manga: When will i get to fight?
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Narrator: Never if you don't shut your mouth.
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Tone Manga: *is quiet*
~~Next time~~
Metagross: WOAH! Its like this Magneton, but its bigger than a magneton, and he just leveled all of Johto! Its like just not there anymore!
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AggRon: yea... And with Crench and Groove totally destroyed by the Regis, The Metal Menace will get to Oregoned region before Comma, MeteorMash, and Mini-Met at ths rate!
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Metagross: Yea... and we can't have that!
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AggRon: It's gonna be a black tommorow unless we can stop the horde of robots storming the earth.
Next time! Will the world survive the hell that Metalix has raveged on it? Will I learn to spell? WILL MINI-MET GET TO EAT ICECREAM!?
Find out in Chapter 12: I-Robot, U-Robot, Me Robot? Is there something Comma should Know? It's gonna be a dark day...
