Pokémon TCG: Sword and Shield—Brilliant Stars

The adventures of justin

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well,im not a very good writer,but i really wana try to start writing,and this is where i can learn.

here's my first chapter-

Its monday morning in HeartHome city, the sun is visible over the horizon.
This story is about a boy named Justin, he's 13 years old, and a bit dull.
But all of that is about to change, as Justin is about to meet pokemon for the first time in his life.
He's never really seen real pokemon before, only the gym battles he watches on TV.
He sort of idolizes Fantina, the HeartHome gym leader.
Now that you know enough about Justin, time for the story to begin.
And this is were the story begins..................

"agh" sighed Justin as he rose from his bed.
"Happy birthday to you, happy birthday to you, happy birthday, dear Justin, happy birthday to you!" sang Justins parents as they barged into Justins room.
Justin stares at his parents with a blank expression.
"Im going down stairs." said Justin.
Justin slowly paces down the stairs, as his friends pop up from behind the couch in the living room.
"Suprise!" roared Justins friends.
They all came running up to Justin, each one giving there present to Justin.
With a BIG grin on his face, Justin said "Time to open the presents!"
So Justin ran to the couch, and opened his first present, which was from his parents.
"I wonder what this could be........" said Justin.
Justin starts unwrapping the present.
"Oh my gosh, its a pokeball!" Justin hollered.
"Its not only a pokeball, theres a pokemon inside it, and i think you'll like it" said Justin's dad.
"Ok, lets find out what pokemon is inside." Justin said. "Go, pokeball!"
Out came a gastly, the ghost pokemon.
"Yes, a gastly!" said Justin.
"I got it from a breeder by the lost tower, all i did was tell him that it was my son's birthday,and he gave it to me." Justins dad said.
"And to go along with your pokemon, we all got you something for your adventure" said Justins friends.
Justins friends all get there gift's and open them.
"I got you 2 pokeball's, so you can catch extra pokemon." said one of Justins friends.
"I got you a poketch, which a guy was giving away to all trainers, so i decided to ask for one, its real neat." said another one of Justins friends.
"And last but not least, i got you 20$ and a potion incase you need to heal a pokemon." said the last of Justin's friends.
"Thank you all, i really appreciate this." Justin said. "and im going to make you proud, by beating Fantina and ALL the other gym leaders." "Well, off i go"
Justin walks out the door after putting everything he needs in his backpack.
"Wait, dont forget money, you'll be needing it incase you need more supplies." said Justins mom.
"Cant forget money" Justin says as he walks away laughing.
"Bye Justin!" they all say in harmony as justin walks away.




well that was the first chapter,i think i might make chapters freakquently,depending on watcha guys think.
 
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thanks, and heres the second chapter!

chapter 2-

As Justin is walking through town, he see's the flashing of camera's.
"Oh Fantina, oh Fatina come over here!" said the photographers.
Justin see's Fantina bieng chased by the photographers.
"Over here!" said Justin without hesitation.
He pulled Fantina to the ground, as the photographers ran by them.
"Thank you young man, what is your name?" said Fantina.
"Im Justin, and im a fan of yours" he said.
"Nice to meet you justin." said Fantina. "Is there any way i can thank you?"
"If we could have a gym battle, that would be awsome." Justin said.
"That would be fine." Fantina said.
So fantina and justin walked into the HeartHome city pokegym.
"What kind of battle would u like?" said Fantina.
"A 1 on 1 since i only have 1 pokemon." Justin says.
"Ok then, ill choose you, mismagius!" shouts Fantina.
"I choose you, gastly!" says Justin.
"This is a 1 on 1 battle, BEGIN! shouts the reffere.
"Mismagius, use hypnosis." said Fantina.
A coulple of hypnosis beams went shooting at gastly.
"Gastly, dodge it!" said Justin.
But the beams were to fast for the gastly to dodge, and hit it anyway.
"Now mismagius, dream eater!" Fantina says.
Gastly suddenly starts tossing and turning in its sleep, hitting itself over and over against the floor.
"Gastly stop!" screams Justin.
"Gastly gas!" shouts gastly.
Suddenly, gastly faints.
"Well, its over, you're gastly has fainted." says Fantina.
"Im a bad trainer." Justin says to himself. "Gastly, return"
Gastly returns to the pokeball.
"You gave it your best shot, thats all that matters." Said Fantina.
Justin paces out of the gym with a frown on his face.
"Im sorry gastly" Justin says.


well theres my second chapter.
 
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oh,your right.
geez,what a lousy mistake.
let me correct that.

EDIT: corrected both chapters with my fantina spelling error.
 
srry about the long wait guys!
had to get done with school and its finally over!
time to write my but off.
im trying out to write my chapter in a new way so i dont always have to write"justin says" or"said justin"

chapter 3:

As Justin and his gastly walk to the pokemon center, Justin murmurs to himself....
"I wish i had been a better trainer to you gastly,im a failure."-Justin
Justin walks to the pokemon centers front desk and says "I need to leave my pokemon here to heal, because we just lost in a gym battle."-Justin
"Thats alright."-nurse Joy
"Ok thank you!"-Justin
So justin walks out of the pokemon center and walks into the pokemart.
"Hi, we have pokeballs on sale for 50$ today."-sale's clerk
"Oh, i think id be interested in some of those."-Justin
"Ok, and if you buy 10, you get a free premier ball."-sale's clerk
"Sure thing!"-Justin
Justin walks to the back of the store to retreive potions and full heals.
"Ring me up please, Id like 10 pokeballs and 2 potions and 2 full heals."-justin
"Sure, that'll be 500$ please."-sale's clerk
"Ugh...................i dont have 500$........"-Justin
"How much do you have?"-sale's clerk
"I have 450$."-Justin
"I guess i could sell them to you for that."-sale's clerk
"THANK YOU SO MUCH!"-Justin
"No problem, heres your iteams and your free premier ball."-sale's clerk
"Ok, ill see you around."-Justin
"See ya!"-sale's clerk
So Justin walks out of the pokemart and heads back to the pokecenter to retrieve his ghastly.
"Hi, i dropped off my ghastly here, and im wondering if he's fully healed yet."-Justin
"Umn, in fact, he has finished healing."-nurse Joy
"Ok, can i have him back?"-Justin
"Sure."- nurse Joy
Nurse Joy walks over to the back and picks up a pokeball.
"Here is your healthy gastly."-nurse Joy
"Thank you!"-Justin
"Come back soon."-nurse Joy
So Justin walks down town when he see's some one VERY familiar.
"George, is that you?"-Justin
"Yes it is me!"-George[one of Justin's friend from the first chapter]
"What are you doing down town?"-Justin
"Im here training my pokemon of course!"-George
"Wana battle?"-Justin
"Lets do this!"-George
They both throw there back packs to the floor and take a pokeball out of there belt.
"Go gastly!-Justin
"Go bagon!"-George
"Gastly, use lick!"-Justin
Gastly swiftly swosshed over to bagon and gave bagon a BIG lick on the forehead.
Bagon scrunched up during the hit.
"Bagon, use ember!"-George
Bagon threw a small shot of fire towards gastly, and the shot hit gastly right on.
Gastly made a shriek of pain.
"Now, use night shade!"-Justin
Gastly projected an image of a HUGE shadow, at least 10x the size of bagon.
It charged to bagon and hit it.
Bagon shook in fear.
"DO THIS,use dragon rage!"-George
Bagon started rampaging throwing fire everyhwere it could hit.
It hit gastly multiple times.
Gastly looked intimidated.
"Gastly, finish him, use night shade!"-Justin
This time, the shadow went underground, and came up from the ground and hit bagon from the bottom.
Bagon was KOED.
"Victory is mine!"-Justin
"Oh well..., heres your 200$."-George
"Thanks, i needed it."-Justin
"Anyway, goodbye!"-George
"Bye!"-Justin
The sunset fell as Justin and George walked away from each other,and this was a beutiful start of a friendly rivalry.



thats the 3rd chapter.
tell me watcha think.
 
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good chapter. But instead of using "-*name*" use pronouns. It will make it easier to follow, but thats JMHO.

And they don't use real money in Pokmeon, they use zenny (sp?) or something like that...
 
oh,lol.
didnt know they used zenny.
but does it have to be zenny???
also,im going to twist the story around a bit.
im going to have the location change and him in a new region next chapter.
so im going to change the title.
ill also go back to pronouns as you wished.


chapter 4:the zento islands

As justin walks to the end of hearthome town,he gets a cell phone call.
"Ring, ring!" rang the cell phone.
Justin picks up the cell phone.
"Hello?" said Justin.
"Hi, Justin, its your mother calling, i ordered you plane tickets to the zento islands." said Justin's mother.
"OMG, the zento islands?" said Justin.
"Yes, now hurry to the house to get your tickets, the plane leaves in an hour." said Justin's mother.
"Ok." said Justin.
So justin walked all the way to his house, and retreived the tickets. He then walked down to the airport and got on the plane.
"Tickets please?" said the flight attendant.
"Here you go." said Justin.
"Thank you and enjoy your flight to zento." the flight atendant said.
So the plane took off, and after 2 hours they reached the zento islands.
Justin walked off the plane in amazement, looking at all the rare plants and beutiful flowers on the island ground.
"So this is zento island #1." Justin said.
Hiding behind a bush was a man in a yellow trench coat, about 5'6, blonde hair and a lightning shaped tatto on his right cheek.
"The plane succesfully landed sir." said the man in the yellow trench coat.
"Good, now lets hope everything goes acording to plan." the man on the telephone said.
"Here you all go, what i just handed you is a pokedex for all of the current pokemon we know of on sinnoh and zento." said the flight attendant.
Now Justin left the plane area and went into the grassy area's..
"I wonder what kind of pokemon live here." said Justin.
So justin was calmy walking through the grass when all of a sudden a bush moved behind him.
A yellow zebra looking pokemon attacked him from behind with a spark of lightning.
"Agh!" sreamed Justin as he was hit by a spark.
"What is that?" Justin says.
He pulls out his pokedex.
"Azaley, the lightning zebra pokemon, it is said that this pokemon is aggressive and will attack if anything invades its territory." the pokedex said.
This pokemon had white and yellow stripes on its body, a black nose,and spiky hair on the top of its head.
Its black tail swings ferociously as its head is towards the ground, looking like a bull thats ready to charge.
"Aza!" said the pokemon.
"Go, gastly!" said Justin.
Justin threw the pokeball to the floor and out of the pokeball came gastly.
"Gastly, use lick!" Justin said.
Gastly went charging at azaley, and gave it a big lick on the forehead.
Azaley stuck out its toungue in disgust.
The azaley came charging at gastly,seeming to be using take down.
Azaley went right threw gastly,and hit a tree that was behind gastly.
"Doink!"
The azaley hit its head right on the tree.
The azaley became confused.
"Now's my chance!" "Go pokeball!" said Justin.
Justin threw the pokeball right at the azaley.
The ball shook once.
The ball shook again.
The ball shook a third time.
The ball stopped and pinged.
"Ping!"
"Yes, i caught my first pokemon!" screamed Justin.
Out of nowhere, the man in the yellow trench coat came and gave a nice sucker punch to the face of Justin.
Justin fell down immideatley without hesitation.
"What happened?" Justin said slowly.
"Lets take him away boys." said the man in the yellow trench coat as Justin slowly blacked out.





well there you go,chapter 4.
tell me watcha think.
 
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cool twist! Your doing better in your chapters, but maybe some more adjectives when Justin says stuff would be better....

JMHO, your doing great!
 
heck yea, fantina is awsome, anyways,thanksfor all the advice,and im going to try to improve my chapters more and more.

lets see how i do with chapter 5: team megavolt's plan!

"Here you go boss, this is one of the passenegers to the plane." said one of the members in the yellow trench coat.
"Thank you, you've done very well, this is all going according to plan." said the man in the black suit.
Justin's eye's started to slowly open, as he hears voice's.
"We will get freilia, the thunder legendary pokemon of the zento islands." said the man in the black suit.
Justin had fully waken up and had listened to some of the conversation.
"Freilia?" Justin whispered to himself.
Justin slowly crept from the place they left him and silently went out the door.
He stumbled getting up and ran like there was no tommorow.
He didnt know where he was, so it was hard to find an exit.
He finnally found a small entrance above his head, signaling that this place was underground.
He opened up the entrance and climbed up, and out he was.
He was in the same exact place where he caught azaley.
He remembered to check up on azaley and gastly.
"Go azaley and gastly!" He said.
Gastly and azaley were leased from there pokeballs.
"Get him!" said one of the men coming up from the entrance.
"Here we go!" Justin screamed.
"Go azaley!" said the man in the yellow trench coat.
A azaley popped out of his pokeball.
"Go chicky!" said the man in the yellow trench coat.
Out came a small humming bird, who was blue and little sparks coul;d be seen coming from its wings as they beated rapidly,
It had a yellow tail which seemed to be full of electric.
It also had a black outline on its eyes and an evil glare.
"Gastly, use night shade!" screamed Justin.
Gastly made a shadow 10x the size of itself.
Its humongis arms came and grabbed the man's azaley, but the chicky was apparently to fast to be grabbed.
The large arms squashed the man's azaley, while azaley shrieked in pain.
"Azaley!" said the azaley.
"Chicky, use thunderbolt!" said the man in the yellow trench coat.
The small bird started to spread its wings and stopped the beating.
As soon as it did, electricity went up into the sky, and struck Justin's azaley.
Azaley shook in terror.
"Azaley, use take down!" Justin said.
The azaley went charging at the other man's azaley, as it hit it right on.
The other azaley was KOED.
"Chicky, use agility!" the man in the yellow trench coat said.
The chicky accelerated in speed, making it that its movements werent even visible.
"Finish this gastly, use night shade, azaley, use spark!" Justin comanded.
The gastly made a shadow 10x the size of itself, and started to reach for the chicky, as the chiky was dodging the grabs, the azaley was using sparks to try to hit the fast chicky.
finnaly, the shadow grabbed chicky by its tail giving azaley enough time to hit chicky with a nice spark.
The chicky was KOED.
"Agh!" said the man in the yellow trench coat.
The man ran into the entrance.
'Return!" said Justin.
Azaley and gastly returned yto there pokeball.
Justin ran off further into the forest.............

well there you go chapter 5.
its a little shorter, but i wana see what you people think about it
 
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time for chapter 6

chapter 6:Foiling the plot

Justin is out of breath from running all this way.
He is somewhere deep in the zento forest.
"Hey azaley and gastly, how are you doing?" Justin said.
"Aze." said azaley.
"Gastly, gas!" gastly said.
"Good!" Justin said.
Justin looked over to the side and saw a purple kangaroo looking pokemon drinking at a lake.
Justin, and his companians crept over to the lake.
"Kangra, the fire kangaroo pokemon, it is said that this pokemon is shy, but when atacked will get spooked eisely." the pokedex said,
"Now, go get em!" Justin screamed.
"Azaley use spark!" Justin comanded.
Azaley created multiple sparks and they hit kangra criticly.
Kangra seems very weak.
Kangra got up and took a deep breath and used fire blast.
A huge collection of fire came out of kangra's mouth and headed in a circle straight towards azaley, but azaley dodged it in time.
"Go pokeball!" Justin said.
The pokeball shook once.
The pokeball shook again.
The pokeball shook a third time.
The pokeball stopped and pinged.
"Ping!"
"Yes, caught a kangra!" Justin said.
The ground suddenly started to shake.
"Agh!"
Justin fell to the floor.
This was no earthquake.
It suddenly stopped.
"It came from the entrance to that place." Justin said.
Justin slowly walked to the entrance, unlatched the entrance, and went inside.
He walked all the way to a big door, and started to listen inside.
"We've located freilia sir." said someone.
"Good, what are the locations?" said someone else.
"She's in an underground cave under the plane landing panel." Said someone.
"Ok." said someone else.
Justin heard people coming to the big dor,so he sprinted all the way to the exit, and threw himself out.
He then ran all the way to the flight panel.
"Hi, do u know anyway i can get underground?" Justin said.
"You can take these stairs down." said the man.
The man then opened a part of the panel as it opened into a stairway.
"Thank you!" Justin said as he walked down the stairs.
It became darker and darker each step he took into the cave.
Justin looked around suspecting that this passage wouldnt lead to freilia.
He then found a hollow spot.
"Go gastly, use night shade!" Justin said.
Gastly made a huge shadow that almost didnt fit in the cave, and punched the hollow spot.
Lights suddenyl spread into the cave as they walked through the spot.
"What in the world is this?" Justin said.
There was a passage with lights coming from an unknown source.
"Where are the lights coming from?" justin said as he walked deeper into the passage.
Finnally, he made it all the way to the end, as he saw something he will never forget.



well there you go chapter 6 tell me watcha think.
 
good chapter. Still, instead of just saying "Justin said" say stuff lik,e "Justin replyed" and stuff like that... And use pronouns!
 
well here comes the next chapter!!!

chapter 7:freilia and team frostnova

"What in the world is that!" Justin exclaimed.
"Freilia!" said the pokemon.
The pokemon was wrapped in chains, and a whole bunch of people in light blue were holding down the chains.
"Hold her down men!" said the men in the light blue jackets
"Hey, who's that kid?" said one of the men in the light blue jackets.
"Get him!" said another one of the men in the blue jackets.
The men ran after Justin.
He ran all the way to the big pokemon.
"Go gastly!" Justin screamed.
Gastly came out of the pokeball.
"Gastly use night shade!" Justin said.
The gastly made a big shadow 10x's the size of itaself.
The shadow swung its big hands and crushed 2 of the chains that were holding down freilia.
Freilia suddenly used a thunder attack and broke the rest of the chains.
"Freilia!" shreiked the freilia.
Freilia suddenly went up in the air and thunder came down on all of the me.
"Agh!" screamed the men in the light blue jackets.
The men all fell to the floor.
They seemed paralyzed.
Suddenly, a big eruption came from the side of the wall.
"There it is!" said one of the men with a yellow trench coat on.
A big net came from the tank that the men were on, and it trapped the freilia.
"Hey, leave that pokemon alone!" Justin comanded.
"What are you guna do about it punk?" said one of the men in the yellow trench coat's.
"Lets battle!" Justin said.
"Lets do this." the man in the yellow trench coat.
"Go kangra!" said Justin.
"Go shinx!" said the man in the yellow trench coat.
"Kangra, use mega kick!" Justin said.
Kangra jumped in the air and was going down towards the shinx.
"Shinx dodge it!" said the man in the yellow trench coat.
The shinx moved out of the way.
The kangra was going streight for the wall.
"Kangra use airial ace!" Justin said.
The kangra jumped off the wall and swiftly went throught the air and hit shinx as hard as possible.
The shinx was KO'ED.
"Darn!" said the man in the yellow trench coat.
"Kangra use flamethrower at the net!" said Justin.
Kangra spuit out alot of fire from its mouth, burning the net the freilia was under.
"Freilia!" Sid the freilia.
The freilia made a big thunderbolt and shot it at the tank.
The tank exploded.
"Boom!"The men ran out of the hole.
The freilia looked at justin.
It landed on the floor.
This pokemon was a pink human looking pokemon.
It had a yellow ribbon on its head, and had a tail with thunder shaped horns on it.
It was small, and could float around, sort of like a mew.
It had a thunder shaped marking on the middle of its body.
The pokemon went up to Justin, and then flew off out of the hole.
"Was that freilia?" Justin wondered to himself.
A couple of policemen came in threw the hole.
"What in the world happened here?" They said.



well there you go another chapter.
 
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well here is chapter 8:battle of the gods coldra vs freilia!

Justin had just left the police station after he had explained to them what had happened.
"Boom!"
The floor right in front of justin went up in the sky.
A snowstorm came out from under the ground.
A light blure figgure came flying out from the whole in the floor up into the sky.
A small yellow figure followed it
"Freilia!" said the yellow figure.
"Ra!" said the light blue figure.
"What in the world is this?" said Justin.
"Men, we need to get to shelter!" said the men coming out ofthe hole.
"What is happening here?Justin asked the men.
"This is the battle of the lighning and ice god coldra and freilia!" said the men.
The men ran into the pokemon center.
The light blue pokemon was a alien looking pokemon.
Its head had 2 faces, which both had blue eyes and big sharp fangs.
Its blue body had wings, icycle tatto's in some places, and it was about 3x the size of freilia.
It seemed alot more rough, and alot more serious than the freilia.
The freilia seemed to be playing.
The freilia made a big thunderbolt and shot it at coldra.
Coldra made a barrier of ice around itself, blocking the thunderbolt's impact.
The coldra opened its mouth, and shot out a big ice beam.
It almost hit the freilia, but freilia dodged in time.
The freilia made a big thundershock come right on time to hit coldra.
"Coldra!" the coldra said as it looked madened.
The snow storm turned into a hailstorm.
The coldra moved its hand, and took both hands and made fists.
Once the first were made, a terrible blizzard started towards freilia.
Freilia used protect to protect itself from the horrid blizzard.
Once the blizzard subsided, freilia brought up its arm.
It made a big ball and used zap cannon.
The coldra tried to dodge, butr zap xcannon gave a direct hit.
The coldra shook in rage.
"Coldra!" it said.
He then changed the tempurature to -0.
As all the people were inside the pokemon center, it didnt efect the people.
But all the buildings were frozen, as well as the underground hole they made.
Freilia had used protect to block it.
Coldra threw multiple ice shards at the freilia hitting it directly.
Once.
Twice.
3rd time.
The freilia shreiked in pain.
"Freilia!" it said.
Justin decided he needed to go stop this fight.
"Kangra, go!" Justin said.
Kangra was released from the pokeball.
"Kangra, use flamethrower!" Justin said.
Kangra released alot of fire from its mouth, burning the ice that blocked the entrance to the pokemon center.
"Lets go!" Justin said.
He ran directly out the entrance.
He saw that freilia looked much weaker than coldra.
"Kangra, use heat wave on coldra!" Justin said.
Kangra released a hot wave, melting down the ice that the sheer cold attack made.
It also hit coldra, and made it shudder.
Kangra started to light up.
"Huh?" Justin wondered.
Kangra evolved into kangreel.
Kangreel was a big kangaroo lookign pokemon.
It had a red line on its face, it was brown fur, a long tail that had fire flaming on it.
"Kangreel, use blaze kick on coldra!" Justin comanded.
Kangreel jumped in the air as its leg fired up.
It hit coldra directly in the stomach, making coldra drop to the floor.
"Now, go gastly!" Justin said.
Gastly was released from the pokeball.
"Go azaley!" Justin said.
Azaley was released from the pokeball.
"Azaley, use thunder wave!? Justin demanded.
Azaley made a big shock wave and it paralyzed coldra.
"Now gastly use hypnosis then night shade him into the hole!" Justin said.
Gastly used hypnosis and tranced coldra into sleep aqnd then night shaded a shadow 10x the size of him and threw coldra into the hole.
Freilia gave a short look at Justin, then used earthquake to coverup the hole.
Then, freilia left...........




tell me watcha think.
this chapter is basicly all abotu scenery and theres not much dialougue.
but its the great battle between the l;egendarie's.
 
hey!
back from a long time with the tcg.
so here comes the next chapter!!!

chapter 9

Justin ran off to the other side of the island.
He paused at the stump because he was out of breath.
"Geez!" Justin said.
Justin walked into the grassy plains.
It looked like a preety long way back to civilazation.
So Justin headed off into the grass.
After about 10 minutes walking, a wild ledian came from the sky and attacked Justin.
"Aghh!" Justin screamed as he fell to the floor.
Justin was bleeding from the fall because he hit his head on a rock.
"Ledia,ledian!" the wild ledian screeched.
"Go gastly!" Justin said.
Gastly was thrown out of the pokeball.
"Gastly, gas!" gastly spoke.
"Gastly, use confusion!" Justin commanded.
Gastly wasnt used to using this move,but he useed it anyways.
Gastly's eye's turned red.
The wild ledian's arm went sky rocketing at gastly.
As soon as it reached him,it turned around in confusion and hit ledian.
The move was a nice comet punch.
The ledian was KO'ed.
"Huh?"Justin said.
Gastly turned white and evolved into a haunter!
"Yes,my gastly volved into a haunter!" Justin screamed."That must mean im a good trainer!"
So as Justin walked deeper into the plains, he could hear noises, machine noises coming from a volcano.
"Where in the world is that noice coming from?" Justin wondered.
"Haunter, use night shade at the wall in the volcano!" Justin comanded.
Haunter made a shadow 10x the size of itself, and punched a whole in the wall.
There were big machines everywhere.
"Hey,who goes there!" said a man who ran from on top of the machine down to the ground.
"This place is OFF LIMITS!" the man said.
"Yout gunna regret trying to foil team delta's plan!" the man said. "Lets battle!"
The man took out his pokeballs.......



so how'd ya like my comeback chapter?
 
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