Pokémon TCG: Sword and Shield—Brilliant Stars

The adventures of justin

Really want to write well?

-This isn't a TV show. Less dialogue, more description.
-The grammar and paragraphing is sloppy... Go over it a few times beofre posting.
-You have plenty of time. There's no chapter deadline, just take the time you need to make it very well thought out, and never put out anything without retrying at least once. The first product is never best.
-It moves too fast. Take time to let the reader know who exactly your character IS.
 
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